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yesdoes this game have a good story?
yesdoes this game have a good story?
I haven't tried it yet myself but it was made by Ghost, if you know his styleDoes the android version work well? Or does it have that chat box?
ThanksPretty good game so far. Still making my way through it, and I'm fairly impressed. However...
We're missing about 500 periods at ends of lines. There's weird punctuation, like the occasional period is replaced with a '/', or a question mark with a '>'. 'Phoenix' is misspelled as 'Pheonix' seven times. 'Use to' sometimes appears instead of 'used to'. And sometimes a plural-'s' is separated with an apostrophe for no reason.
Are you sure? Let me show you an excerpt of the episode 3 script, starting at line 4433:The / is to show a sentence ending fast or cut off
Here, Carla's line looks rather like it should have a period instead of '/'. Meanwhile, Kassandra's line ends on the commonly used hyphen to show interruptions or other premature ends to a sentence (in this case, she kind of interrupts herself). Another common way to do this would be a longer dash or two hyphens (--).scene 7p10a1
c "Tell Jessie she found him/"
scene 7p11
ss "I'm gonna go get some more wine."
ks "This way, let us go find your-"
scene 7p12
$ renpy.pause ()
scene 7p12a1
ks ". . .Very special lady friend."
No not right nowe you sure? Let me show you an excerpt of the episode 3 script, starting at line 4433:
I don't have a qwerty keyboard or at least not an exact one. / is shift 7.Are you sure? Let me show you an excerpt of the episode 3 script, starting at line 4433:
Here, Carla's line looks rather like it should have a period instead of '/'. Meanwhile, Kassandra's line ends on the commonly used hyphen to show interruptions or other premature ends to a sentence (in this case, she kind of interrupts herself). Another common way to do this would be a longer dash or two hyphens (--).
The '/' appears four times in the game, and each time it looks like you just hit the wrong key. (Assuming you have a qwerty keyboard, '.' and '/' are right next to each other, hence my assumption of a typo.) Meanwhile, the 'proper' interruption via hyphen appears 71 times.
For the record I agreeI've been wondering, did I ever mention that Christa is hot as fuck, especially in recent updates?![]()
Maybe you can share some proof? You know, for the non-believers?For the record I agree![]()
It was really hard to get the cap to sit on her and look right too lolI disagree, I liked her old look with the pony tail.
Yeah but chicks look better without hats.It was really hard to get the cap to sit on her and look right too lol
I tend to agree. She had to give a tactical vibe for that scene.Yeah but chicks look better without hats.
Either way doesn't really matter, Christa is the chips, Jessie is the steak.I tend to agree. She had to give a tactical vibe for that scene.
The ponytail isn't gone. It will still be used