VN Ren'Py Little Regina [v2.52] [EchoFoxtrot]

[dreamchaser]

I think it's only in one of the paths. Better to have it in both

It isn't in my path, correct. I quickly skipped to the scene, to look for it: Jack puts a smartphone in front of the guys face, but we only get to see the phones backside, not the image displayed on it. Anyway, I advocated for getting player buy-in before the torture. Once the hammer gets blodied, it's kinda too late for that...

I just finished game day 19, and for relevant praise: I like the setup for the big upcoming job a lot more: Christa and Jack talk about it, files got looked through, and the known facts make it very obvious that this was a miscarriage of justice. Also, there is very obviously more planning and prep happening. Tumbs up from me.

 

[EchoFoxtrot]

It isn't in my path, correct. I quickly skipped to the scene, to look for it: Jack puts a smartphone in front of the guys face, but we only get to see the phones backside, not the image displayed on it. Anyway, I advocated for getting player buy-in before the torture. Once the hammer gets blodied, it's kinda too late for that...

Yeah, I checked and it isn't. I have fixed it so that it is for the next release

 

[dreamchaser]

I have now played through all the content. Very cool story, thank you for making the game!
I will probably replay and see what changes if I get it on with Christa too. I would have taken a chance to start something up later on (if Foxy gave her blessing), but there was no such path.
On the other hand, the path without Christa but with Amira was apparently a less well tested one. So I went ahead and noted down all misplaced lines I spotted, to hopefully improve the game a bit more.

Christa: No more arrest's or we will both shut up shop.
->wrong on route were nothing sexual with Christa is going on

Jack: (I can't be this weak.)
Jack: (I have to be strong like Jack.)
Jack: (He didn't curl up and cry when he did his first kill.)
->Those lines are by Jessie, not Jack

More lines that make no sense on a route when nothing sexual is going on between Jack and Christa:
Jessie: Think about my other offer too, I already cleared it with Christa
Jessie: She can't fully join Fox Corps if she doesn't join your harem. (Christa is Fox Corps too. Surrounding lines need adjustment as well)
Jessie: Did you know he's only fucked two girls before us!
Jack: You're not, I am a very lucky man, I have three number ones.
Jack: (If Christa hadn't prepared me I would have blown right now!)

 

[EchoFoxtrot]

I have now played through all the content. Very cool story, thank you for making the game!
I will probably replay and see what changes if I get it on with Christa too. I would have taken a chance to start something up later on (if Foxy gave her blessing), but there was no such path.
On the other hand, the path without Christa but with Amira was apparently a less well tested one. So I went ahead and noted down all misplaced lines I spotted, to hopefully improve the game a bit more.

Christa: No more arrest's or we will both shut up shop.
->wrong on route were nothing sexual with Christa is going on

Jack: (I can't be this weak.)
Jack: (I have to be strong like Jack.)
Jack: (He didn't curl up and cry when he did his first kill.)
->Those lines are by Jessie, not Jack

More lines that make no sense on a route when nothing sexual is going on between Jack and Christa:
Jessie: Think about my other offer too, I already cleared it with Christa
Jessie: She can't fully join Fox Corps if she doesn't join your harem. (Christa is Fox Corps too. Surrounding lines need adjustment as well)
Jessie: Did you know he's only fucked two girls before us!
Jack: You're not, I am a very lucky man, I have three number ones.
Jack: (If Christa hadn't prepared me I would have blown right now!)

Happy you enjoyed yourself and Thanks for finding some errors.

I definitely think that combination is less played.
When i write the script if write it with the full harem in mind and them adapt it when i code the episode.

You will probably like the choices around Dylan and Jewel better on the other path

 

[Lenesiah]

Came across this story by chance, really enjoyed the ride so far ! I can't, for the love of everything that's holy, understand any military based acronym, but hell, how I enjoyed the interaction between characters.
Pretty sure classical music isn't for everyone's taste, but I greatly enjoyed that too, hope you the best (and far more people coming across your work, it's awesome !)
cheers !

 

[Dark Lord Of Chaos]

I have now played through all the content. Very cool story, thank you for making the game!
I will probably replay and see what changes if I get it on with Christa too. I would have taken a chance to start something up later on (if Foxy gave her blessing), but there was no such path.
On the other hand, the path without Christa but with Amira was apparently a less well tested one. So I went ahead and noted down all misplaced lines I spotted, to hopefully improve the game a bit more.

Christa: No more arrest's or we will both shut up shop.
->wrong on route were nothing sexual with Christa is going on

Jack: (I can't be this weak.)
Jack: (I have to be strong like Jack.)
Jack: (He didn't curl up and cry when he did his first kill.)
->Those lines are by Jessie, not Jack

More lines that make no sense on a route when nothing sexual is going on between Jack and Christa:
Jessie: Think about my other offer too, I already cleared it with Christa
Jessie: She can't fully join Fox Corps if she doesn't join your harem. (Christa is Fox Corps too. Surrounding lines need adjustment as well)
Jessie: Did you know he's only fucked two girls before us!
Jack: You're not, I am a very lucky man, I have three number ones.
Jack: (If Christa hadn't prepared me I would have blown right now!)

yeah the help Dylan kill Jewel is the happy happy choice...realize shes insane and you're doing the world a favor....just saying

 

[dreamchaser]

yeah the help Dylan kill Jewel is the happy happy choice...realize shes insane and you're doing the world a favor....just saying

What in my post was about Jewel and Dylan? Or do you just mean because I wrote that I was apparently on a less traveled path?
I made the choices I made purely by what Jack and I knew at that moment. No foreknowledge, no spoilers from this thread. Not starting anything with Christa seemed natural as Jack had just rescued her from sexual advances from the FBI professor, and since he was heavily crushing on Jessie. I hoped that there might be a path later on to start something with Christa, once Jessie and Jack were together, she was secure enough in what she had, and wanted to share it with her best friends who needed love too. Which is admittedly porn logic, but on the other hand precisely what happened with Amira. And both Jessie and Christa had more than enough thoughts in the direction, so offering the path would easily and naturally fit in the story. Alas ...

As for Jewel: At the point in the game were Jack came across her, he knew nothing about her, apart from that she blackmailed him, apparently needed lots of money (to fuel her drug addiction, I assume), and that she had a daughter. Giving her a rude awakening and a huge scare seemed to have the chance to turn her life around and her child to have a mother. So that seemed the more humane choice - which is why I chose it. With what I later learned from Foxy - yes, Jewel will die on my next play-through. But I maintain there was no way for the player (on my path) to know that at the time they come across this choice from in-game knowledge.
And hey, that does increases the replayability of the game!

 

[EchoFoxtrot]

What in my post was about Jewel and Dylan? Or do you just mean because I wrote that I was apparently on a less traveled path?
I made the choices I made purely by what Jack and I knew at that moment. No foreknowledge, no spoilers from this thread. Not starting anything with Christa seemed natural as Jack had just rescued her from sexual advances from the FBI professor, and since he was heavily crushing on Jessie. I hoped that there might be a path later on to start something with Christa, once Jessie and Jack were together, she was secure enough in what she had, and wanted to share it with her best friends who needed love too. Which is admittedly porn logic, but on the other hand precisely what happened with Amira. And both Jessie and Christa had more than enough thoughts in the direction, so offering the path would easily and naturally fit in the story. Alas ...

As for Jewel: At the point in the game were Jack came across her, he knew nothing about her, apart from that she blackmailed him, apparently needed lots of money (to fuel her drug addiction, I assume), and that she had a daughter. Giving her a rude awakening and a huge scare seemed to have the chance to turn her life around and her child to have a mother. So that seemed the more humane choice - which is why I chose it. With what I later learned from Foxy - yes, Jewel will die on my next play-through. But I maintain there was no way for the player (on my path) to know that at the time they come across this choice from in-game knowledge.
And hey, that does increases the replayability of the game!

No that is correct. You have no way to know the outcome or if you even will know the outcome.

I guess what is the best outcome for the daughter is another question. In Mexico her status is elevated beyond what Dylan could achieve for her.

 

[Quetzzz]

This game is a gem. I'm usually a nitpicky bastard when it comes to narratives, but this one just sucked me right in. The whole ride-or-die concept just works.

Also, this MVP:

 

[spark9]

Great game so far, shout out to you EchoFoxtrot!
The military theme really makes it much more interesting, I suspect you have some experience.

BUT MAN... How has no one made a walkthrough/mod for this game yet?!
Can someone page KoGa3, Scrappy or Sancho1969 real quick?
Harem path is definitely possible here from what I can tell.

 

[Quetzzz]

BUT MAN... How has no one made a walkthrough/mod for this game yet?!

The issue with a walkthrough is that they're opinionated. They'll guide you down a certain preconfigured path. If you're just interested in knowing which variables are set or modified, then URM will serve you well.
Personally, I highly suggest playing without it. Choices are telegraphed very well, and their wording doesn't leave much to the imagination. Deciding to torture and murder someone will lower your humanity; it's very straightforward.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Great game so far, shout out to you EchoFoxtrot!
The military theme really makes it much more interesting, I suspect you have some experience.

BUT MAN... How has no one made a walkthrough/mod for this game yet?!
Can someone page KoGa3, Scrappy or Sancho1969 real quick?
Harem path is definitely possible here from what I can tell.

It couldn't include everyone, TBH. I don't see any way Dawn and Foxy would ever be in the same harem. I'd say including her is definitely not possible.

 

[Quetzzz]

It couldn't include everyone, TBH. I don't see any way Dawn and Foxy would ever be in the same harem. I'd say including her is definitely not possible.

Not having Foxy isn't an option for me. Ride or die!

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Not having Foxy isn't an option for me. Ride or die!

Absolutely. I'd pick Foxy over that toxic trash-bash any day. The personality of Much-Worse-Than-Foxy makes me internally recoil. IRL, I avoid dudes with trash personalities like that; WTH would I want that in an LI in a VN?

 

[Dark Lord Of Chaos]

Careful what you wish for...if foxy hasnt given you the go ahead....there will be consequences for straying.....just saying

 

[robrize2169]

i love foxy too, but i do wish dev would update her looks a bit. get rid of the braces, give her a few more curves and get rid of those fucking freckles. not big on freckles on any woman. especially not on an LI in a game. personal preference. don't like my personal preference? you can keep your comments to yourselves. i don't have a problem with anyone that likes freckles, just not my thing.
otherwise, i really love this game, the other girls are hot as fuck. but even with no changes to her appearance, i do love foxy's personality.

 

[Quetzzz]

Careful what you wish for...if foxy hasnt given you the go ahead....there will be consequences for straying.....just saying

She wanted total honesty, and that's what I gave her. She thanked me by bringing in some friends.

i love foxy too, but i do wish dev would update her looks a bit. get rid of the braces, give her a few more curves and get rid of those fucking freckles. not big on freckles on any woman. especially not on an LI in a game. personal preference. don't like my personal preference? you can keep your comments to yourselves. i don't have a problem with anyone that likes freckles, just not my thing.
otherwise, i really love this game, the other girls are hot as fuck. but even with no changes to her appearance, i do love foxy's personality.

Yeah, you do you. Personally, I'm happy to get an AVN with an LI who's actually petite and has an outstanding story. I do sympathize, though. I have the same reaction when a great AVN only caters to the big tits/big ass genre.

 

[robrize2169]

She wanted total honesty, and that's what I gave her. She thanked me by bringing in some friends.


Yeah, you do you. Personally, I'm happy to get an AVN with an LI who's actually petite and has an outstanding story. I do sympathize, though. I have the same reaction when a great AVN only caters to the big tits/big ass genre.

yeah i don't like the overly huge tits on women and i don't bother with games that have that. anything bigger than Bella in BADIK is too much imo.

 

[Dark Lord Of Chaos]

She wanted total honesty, and that's what I gave her. She thanked me by bringing in some friends.


Yeah, you do you. Personally, I'm happy to get an AVN with an LI who's actually petite and has an outstanding story. I do sympathize, though. I have the same reaction when a great AVN only caters to the big tits/big ass genre.

trust me on this...if you are up to date you have 3 safe girls...looks like were heading towards 4 but thats unconfirmed..but alluded to...if you mess with any others.....dont come crying here for an ending you don't like

 

[Quetzzz]

trust me on this...if you are up to date you have 3 safe girls...looks like were heading towards 4 but thats unconfirmed..but alluded to...if you mess with any others.....dont come crying here for an ending you don't like

I started with Foxy and only slept with who she brought in. Also admitted to the carnal romp with the cop lady. (I'm bad at names, sorry.)
The way this evolves organically is one of my favorite parts of this game's writing. It doesn't feel hamfisted like in so many other AVNs.