VN Ren'Py Little Regina [v2.52] [EchoFoxtrot]

[dreamchaser]

I think it's only in one of the paths. Better to have it in both

It isn't in my path, correct. I quickly skipped to the scene, to look for it: Jack puts a smartphone in front of the guys face, but we only get to see the phones backside, not the image displayed on it. Anyway, I advocated for getting player buy-in before the torture. Once the hammer gets blodied, it's kinda too late for that...

I just finished game day 19, and for relevant praise: I like the setup for the big upcoming job a lot more: Christa and Jack talk about it, files got looked through, and the known facts make it very obvious that this was a miscarriage of justice. Also, there is very obviously more planning and prep happening. Tumbs up from me.

 

[EchoFoxtrot]

It isn't in my path, correct. I quickly skipped to the scene, to look for it: Jack puts a smartphone in front of the guys face, but we only get to see the phones backside, not the image displayed on it. Anyway, I advocated for getting player buy-in before the torture. Once the hammer gets blodied, it's kinda too late for that...

Yeah, I checked and it isn't. I have fixed it so that it is for the next release

 

[dreamchaser]

I have now played through all the content. Very cool story, thank you for making the game!
I will probably replay and see what changes if I get it on with Christa too. I would have taken a chance to start something up later on (if Foxy gave her blessing), but there was no such path.
On the other hand, the path without Christa but with Amira was apparently a less well tested one. So I went ahead and noted down all misplaced lines I spotted, to hopefully improve the game a bit more.

Christa: No more arrest's or we will both shut up shop.
->wrong on route were nothing sexual with Christa is going on

Jack: (I can't be this weak.)
Jack: (I have to be strong like Jack.)
Jack: (He didn't curl up and cry when he did his first kill.)
->Those lines are by Jessie, not Jack

More lines that make no sense on a route when nothing sexual is going on between Jack and Christa:
Jessie: Think about my other offer too, I already cleared it with Christa
Jessie: She can't fully join Fox Corps if she doesn't join your harem. (Christa is Fox Corps too. Surrounding lines need adjustment as well)
Jessie: Did you know he's only fucked two girls before us!
Jack: You're not, I am a very lucky man, I have three number ones.
Jack: (If Christa hadn't prepared me I would have blown right now!)

 

[EchoFoxtrot]

I have now played through all the content. Very cool story, thank you for making the game!
I will probably replay and see what changes if I get it on with Christa too. I would have taken a chance to start something up later on (if Foxy gave her blessing), but there was no such path.
On the other hand, the path without Christa but with Amira was apparently a less well tested one. So I went ahead and noted down all misplaced lines I spotted, to hopefully improve the game a bit more.

Christa: No more arrest's or we will both shut up shop.
->wrong on route were nothing sexual with Christa is going on

Jack: (I can't be this weak.)
Jack: (I have to be strong like Jack.)
Jack: (He didn't curl up and cry when he did his first kill.)
->Those lines are by Jessie, not Jack

More lines that make no sense on a route when nothing sexual is going on between Jack and Christa:
Jessie: Think about my other offer too, I already cleared it with Christa
Jessie: She can't fully join Fox Corps if she doesn't join your harem. (Christa is Fox Corps too. Surrounding lines need adjustment as well)
Jessie: Did you know he's only fucked two girls before us!
Jack: You're not, I am a very lucky man, I have three number ones.
Jack: (If Christa hadn't prepared me I would have blown right now!)

Happy you enjoyed yourself and Thanks for finding some errors.

I definitely think that combination is less played.
When i write the script if write it with the full harem in mind and them adapt it when i code the episode.

You will probably like the choices around Dylan and Jewel better on the other path

 

[Lenesiah]

Came across this story by chance, really enjoyed the ride so far ! I can't, for the love of everything that's holy, understand any military based acronym, but hell, how I enjoyed the interaction between characters.
Pretty sure classical music isn't for everyone's taste, but I greatly enjoyed that too, hope you the best (and far more people coming across your work, it's awesome !)
cheers !

 

[Dark Lord Of Chaos]

I have now played through all the content. Very cool story, thank you for making the game!
I will probably replay and see what changes if I get it on with Christa too. I would have taken a chance to start something up later on (if Foxy gave her blessing), but there was no such path.
On the other hand, the path without Christa but with Amira was apparently a less well tested one. So I went ahead and noted down all misplaced lines I spotted, to hopefully improve the game a bit more.

Christa: No more arrest's or we will both shut up shop.
->wrong on route were nothing sexual with Christa is going on

Jack: (I can't be this weak.)
Jack: (I have to be strong like Jack.)
Jack: (He didn't curl up and cry when he did his first kill.)
->Those lines are by Jessie, not Jack

More lines that make no sense on a route when nothing sexual is going on between Jack and Christa:
Jessie: Think about my other offer too, I already cleared it with Christa
Jessie: She can't fully join Fox Corps if she doesn't join your harem. (Christa is Fox Corps too. Surrounding lines need adjustment as well)
Jessie: Did you know he's only fucked two girls before us!
Jack: You're not, I am a very lucky man, I have three number ones.
Jack: (If Christa hadn't prepared me I would have blown right now!)

yeah the help Dylan kill Jewel is the happy happy choice...realize shes insane and you're doing the world a favor....just saying

 

[dreamchaser]

yeah the help Dylan kill Jewel is the happy happy choice...realize shes insane and you're doing the world a favor....just saying

What in my post was about Jewel and Dylan? Or do you just mean because I wrote that I was apparently on a less traveled path?
I made the choices I made purely by what Jack and I knew at that moment. No foreknowledge, no spoilers from this thread. Not starting anything with Christa seemed natural as Jack had just rescued her from sexual advances from the FBI professor, and since he was heavily crushing on Jessie. I hoped that there might be a path later on to start something with Christa, once Jessie and Jack were together, she was secure enough in what she had, and wanted to share it with her best friends who needed love too. Which is admittedly porn logic, but on the other hand precisely what happened with Amira. And both Jessie and Christa had more than enough thoughts in the direction, so offering the path would easily and naturally fit in the story. Alas ...

As for Jewel: At the point in the game were Jack came across her, he knew nothing about her, apart from that she blackmailed him, apparently needed lots of money (to fuel her drug addiction, I assume), and that she had a daughter. Giving her a rude awakening and a huge scare seemed to have the chance to turn her life around and her child to have a mother. So that seemed the more humane choice - which is why I chose it. With what I later learned from Foxy - yes, Jewel will die on my next play-through. But I maintain there was no way for the player (on my path) to know that at the time they come across this choice from in-game knowledge.
And hey, that does increases the replayability of the game!

 

[EchoFoxtrot]

What in my post was about Jewel and Dylan? Or do you just mean because I wrote that I was apparently on a less traveled path?
I made the choices I made purely by what Jack and I knew at that moment. No foreknowledge, no spoilers from this thread. Not starting anything with Christa seemed natural as Jack had just rescued her from sexual advances from the FBI professor, and since he was heavily crushing on Jessie. I hoped that there might be a path later on to start something with Christa, once Jessie and Jack were together, she was secure enough in what she had, and wanted to share it with her best friends who needed love too. Which is admittedly porn logic, but on the other hand precisely what happened with Amira. And both Jessie and Christa had more than enough thoughts in the direction, so offering the path would easily and naturally fit in the story. Alas ...

As for Jewel: At the point in the game were Jack came across her, he knew nothing about her, apart from that she blackmailed him, apparently needed lots of money (to fuel her drug addiction, I assume), and that she had a daughter. Giving her a rude awakening and a huge scare seemed to have the chance to turn her life around and her child to have a mother. So that seemed the more humane choice - which is why I chose it. With what I later learned from Foxy - yes, Jewel will die on my next play-through. But I maintain there was no way for the player (on my path) to know that at the time they come across this choice from in-game knowledge.
And hey, that does increases the replayability of the game!

No that is correct. You have no way to know the outcome or if you even will know the outcome.

I guess what is the best outcome for the daughter is another question. In Mexico her status is elevated beyond what Dylan could achieve for her.

 

[Quetzzz]

This game is a gem. I'm usually a nitpicky bastard when it comes to narratives, but this one just sucked me right in. The whole ride-or-die concept just works.

Also, this MVP: