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There were messages from GG: "(Covered in blood and with four kills to her name in one day she's beautiful.)", but it seems there were 5 kills, a bomb delivery, a sniper and 3 dealers
 
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EchoFoxtrot

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There were messages from GG: "(Covered in blood and with four kills to her name in one day she's beautiful.)", but it seems there were 5 kills, a bomb delivery, a sniper and 3 dealers
You're right but MC doesn't know about the bomb killing anyone ;)
 

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Oh, you like some Luna.
She looked good though, very happy with her in this bit
Writing the mean choice with Luna felt pretty bad
yeah I feel that man. I honestly like Luna, and I just can't be mean to her, she is (even so we had just brief interactions) a good woman that went through some bad shit. I can picture her as part of the gang.
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allisrandom

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Love the game, thank you, EF! But by now I do worry about Foxy's (and Amira's) soccer careers! They should be training several times a week and playing matches, too, can they still do it now that Foxy's set up her merc business?
 
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CallMeHuff

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Are we going to make our MC important again or are we just gonna have Foxy just be the MC now? Also she flirts with everyone and flashes her tits but our MC's nervous that she will act out vs Dawn flirting? Its okay because your gonna kill them anyway? idk. Love the game but storys kind of taking a bad turn imo. MC just seems like hes losing his aura and fast. Like a pawn.
 

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Are we going to make our MC important again or are we just gonna have Foxy just be the MC now? Also she flirts with everyone and flashes her tits but our MC's nervous that she will act out vs Dawn flirting? Its okay because your gonna kill them anyway? idk. Love the game but storys kind of taking a bad turn imo. MC just seems like hes losing his aura and fast. Like a pawn.
Showing her tits... I think Foxy did this deliberately to get a rise out of him. She loves it when he claims her. In her mind, she's holding the reins on the MC's inner animal. Him being possessive and literally willing to kill for her makes her feel loved.
 

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Showing her tits... I think Foxy did this deliberately to get a rise out of him. She loves it when he claims her. In her mind, she's holding the reins on the MC's inner animal. Him being possessive and literally willing to kill for her makes her feel loved.
Since when did our MC need help in claiming her? And in such a way? Thats my point exactly. Also, shes acting behind his back a lot, shes flirting with the operator constantly and not infront of the MC to invoke that emotion. The roles completely swapped at some point. She was the clingy, need to possess one, and now the Alpha MC is?
 

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Since when did our MC need help in claiming her? And in such a way?
Because the MC getting angry was exactly what was necessary to avoid a pat-down and the guy finding the knife between her cheeks.

Also, shes acting behind his back a lot
Not more than the MC lets her, I think. At least with the choices I made, I think there's actual trust between the two. The MC knows that Foxy needs to regain some balance after having been made to feel so powerless in the prison. He gives her the freedom to self-actualize.

shes flirting with the operator constantly and not infront of the MC to invoke that emotion.
And he's dancing to her tunes. Maybe she's getting ahead of herself and becoming overconfident, but she believes she has the guy wrapped around her finger.

The roles completely swapped at some point. She was the clingy, need to possess one, and now the Alpha MC is?
I prefer to see this differently. If you look at Foxy as a brat, except with murderous skill and intent, then the dominance play takes a different form.
Brats act up because they want to be tamed.
 

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Because the MC getting angry was exactly what was necessary to avoid a pat-down and the guy finding the knife between her cheeks.


Not more than the MC lets her, I think. At least with the choices I made, I think there's actual trust between the two. The MC knows that Foxy needs to regain some balance after having been made to feel so powerless in the prison. He gives her the freedom to self-actualize.


And he's dancing to her tunes. Maybe she's getting ahead of herself and becoming overconfident, but she believes she has the guy wrapped around her finger.


I prefer to see this differently. If you look at Foxy as a brat, except with murderous skill and intent, then the dominance play takes a different form.
Brats act up because they want to be tamed.
My point exactly. In the past she loved the MC claiming her and would have never showed her goods because they belong to the MC. Shes changed for the worse. The importance of her seems to have far surpassed the importance of our MC at this point. Literally everything is revolving around her and our MC is just one of them. It seems the writer saw how everyone liked Foxy and decided to focus solely on her but now she's losing, in my opinion, what I liked about her. The MC just continues to lose aura. He was a central figure, sturdy, strong, protecting. Now he feels like more of a side character in foxy's world.
 

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My point exactly. In the past she loved the MC claiming her and would have never showed her goods because they belong to the MC. Shes changed for the worse. The importance of her seems to have far surpassed the importance of our MC at this point. Literally everything is revolving around her and our MC is just one of them. It seems the writer saw how everyone liked Foxy and decided to focus solely on her but now she's losing, in my opinion, what I liked about her. The MC just continues to lose aura. He was a central figure, sturdy, strong, protecting.
Yeah, I don't see it that way. But I also don't think Foxy needed to remain the same. She's gone through a lot of traumatizing stuff, and that changed her.
I think we need to give her some time, because I suspect she will be making mistakes and will need the MC's help picking up the pieces, letting him shine as her protector and provider. The story is focusing on her because, right now, she's going through an arc. She's growing as a woman, lover, bad-ass ass-kicking machine, femme fatale, and potentially an expecting mother.
She's still the MC's "ride or die", even if she's acting more independently. If anything, she doesn't want to be the weakest link.
Maybe there is a combination of choices that has her sleep with other men, but I doubt she will while in a healthy relationship with the MC.

Is she stealing the show right now? Yeah, maybe you're right about that. I just see it more as a gradient than an on/off switch. The narrative has to focus on characters now and then so we get to witness them growing and changing. I'm sure that in the future other characters will get this same treatment, so they don't fall behind as the story unfolds.

Now he feels like more of a side character in foxy's world.
That's a catch-22, because he's the main character in her world.
 
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My point exactly. In the past she loved the MC claiming her and would have never showed her goods because they belong to the MC. Shes changed for the worse. The importance of her seems to have far surpassed the importance of our MC at this point. Literally everything is revolving around her and our MC is just one of them. It seems the writer saw how everyone liked Foxy and decided to focus solely on her but now she's losing, in my opinion, what I liked about her. The MC just continues to lose aura. He was a central figure, sturdy, strong, protecting. Now he feels like more of a side character in foxy's world.
i felt similar for a moment, then i thought about it and come to realize Foxxy is more likely finding her place as the MCs actual partner, as well as harem queen. for instance, she is now fully aware of MC's family legacy, who all their enemies are, as well as his allies. they have started up their own merc company of MC and his harem, and i think Foxxy is managing it, with MCs awareness and full support. because MC now also knows her past well. she was already an outlaw, a young one with promise. and in that spirit, her behavior of taking charge of the more business side of things, as well as in an operation acting within the guidelines and training that MC has been instilling in her and the other LIs all this time.

Foxxy was never innocent, and really, the stuff she is handling(aside from taking the shot without an order due to player choices influencing her) is all the crap the MC never wanted to do in the first place. MC has been acting like a battering ram all the way to the point where he gets him and foxxy imprisoned. at which point he realizes he needs to go back to being the military man who plans and thinks ahead. smartly giving Foxxy, his equal partner in the relationship, agency to actually fill that role. and they gotta work out some kinks along the way, both behind the scope and the bleachers. the bleachers kinda shows that everyone is growing and falling into their place within this harem/merc group. i mean, damn, girl was a virign like 2 updates ago, and now she is orchestrating surprise 3somes behind the bleachers during training.

or maybe just missed something in the montage training and soccer matches
 

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Yeah, I don't see it that way. But I also don't think Foxy needed to remain the same. She's gone through a lot of traumatizing stuff, and that changed her.
I think we need to give her some time, because I suspect she will be making mistakes and will need the MC's help picking up the pieces, letting him shine as her protector and provider. The story is focusing on her because, right now, she's going through an arc. She's growing as a woman, lover, bad-ass ass-kicking machine, femme fatale, and potentially an expecting mother.
She's still the MC's "ride or die", even if she's acting more independently. If anything, she doesn't want to be the weakest link.
Maybe there is a combination of choices that has her sleep with other men, but I doubt she will while in a healthy relationship with the MC.

Is she stealing the show right now? Yeah, maybe you're right about that. I just see it more as a gradient than an on/off switch. The narrative has to focus on characters now and then so we get to witness them growing and changing. I'm sure that in the future other characters will get this same treatment, so they don't fall behind as the story unfolds.


That's a catch-22, because he's the main character in her world.
i felt similar for a moment, then i thought about it and come to realize Foxxy is more likely finding her place as the MCs actual partner, as well as harem queen. for instance, she is now fully aware of MC's family legacy, who all their enemies are, as well as his allies. they have started up their own merc company of MC and his harem, and i think Foxxy is managing it, with MCs awareness and full support. because MC now also knows her past well. she was already an outlaw, a young one with promise. and in that spirit, her behavior of taking charge of the more business side of things, as well as in an operation acting within the guidelines and training that MC has been instilling in her and the other LIs all this time.

Foxxy was never innocent, and really, the stuff she is handling(aside from taking the shot without an order due to player choices influencing her) is all the crap the MC never wanted to do in the first place. MC has been acting like a battering ram all the way to the point where he gets him and foxxy imprisoned. at which point he realizes he needs to go back to being the military man who plans and thinks ahead. smartly giving Foxxy, his equal partner in the relationship, agency to actually fill that role. and they gotta work out some kinks along the way, both behind the scope and the bleachers. the bleachers kinda shows that everyone is growing and falling into their place within this harem/merc group. i mean, damn, girl was a virign like 2 updates ago, and now she is orchestrating surprise 3somes behind the bleachers during training.

or maybe just missed something in the montage training and soccer matches
We'll just agree to disagree then. If her character developement is her making decisions that could be construde as flirting with the line of cheating while manipulating our MC and making hefty decisions behind the MC's back and then expecting the MC to arrive on a white horse, then they both lose some of their appeal to me. Also I'm pretty sure a while back they said this wouldnt have a full Harem, just these three girls, which adds to the disapointment but I moved past that. Anyways, I do like the game and I'll continue on a few more updates to see how it goes.
 

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Two points of clarification.
There is a harem option if you pick all 3 girls, and possibly a bit more ;)
Foxy is a one-man woman, she is manipulative, but no NTR around here!
 
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Yeah, cant ever see Foxy being cool with that blond twit that wont shut her cock sucker (legit cant remember her name, the one that yelled at her in the restaurant)
 
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