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redoubt27

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Ok, not that far along into this, yet. Still a ways to go to the end of current content.
Just wanted to say, excellent freaking story/VN...

My one, and only complaint, is how the Dylan mess was handled (or rather not handled) early on...
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Other than fumbling the law enforcement stuff a bit in the plot/story, everything else is solid.

And it's always hilarious to see Army grunts joke about Marines eating crayons...:ROFLMAO:

Add: ok, ok, ok... The Dylan thing, I get it now, and why the story let him off the hook so easily earlier... nice little twist there, so, my bad...:LOL: please carry on...
 
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Darklord1234

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As for the whole Foxy "taking charge" or whatever discussion, she is just living out the ultimate female porn fantasy...having a monster on a leash.
 
4.20 star(s) 72 Votes