Ok, not that far along into this, yet. Still a ways to go to the end of current content.
Just wanted to say, excellent freaking story/VN...
My one, and only complaint, is how the Dylan mess was handled (or rather not handled) early on...
Other than fumbling the law enforcement stuff a bit in the plot/story, everything else is solid.
And it's always hilarious to see Army grunts joke about Marines eating crayons...
Add: ok, ok, ok... The Dylan thing, I get it now,
and why the story let him off the hook so easily earlier... nice little twist there, so, my bad...

please carry on...