- Jul 29, 2017
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I love the renders, animations and characters, but the story is weak. It felt like there's two writers, one wrote the first half and the other the second, at the beginning mom was acting like a normal mother/wife, she was mad about the father overworking, worrying about the son wellbeing and her responsability with work. Then all the suddenly she jumps on mc's cock, the father is not welcome at home and the sister also wants to jump on mc's cock.
I think a better path would have been like she was early in the game, she was trying to make the son less shy by giving him more physical contact like hugging, touching his arm or something like that until eventually they would start with an innocent kiss, a foot massage after work, maybe a bit of spying and move on from there. That's what I thought the story was heading up the point at the office after she put her legs on the chair where the mc was seating and he ran away. But then Next time they met she just pounce on him out of nowhere like a horny teenager.
I think a better path would have been like she was early in the game, she was trying to make the son less shy by giving him more physical contact like hugging, touching his arm or something like that until eventually they would start with an innocent kiss, a foot massage after work, maybe a bit of spying and move on from there. That's what I thought the story was heading up the point at the office after she put her legs on the chair where the mc was seating and he ran away. But then Next time they met she just pounce on him out of nowhere like a horny teenager.
