Ren'Py Living in a Brothel [v0.3] [Mastur Bar]

[Call of Booty]

Definitely seems like there should be an Ipatch for this game.
Unless it's normal for some stupid landlady to freak out when she kisses her "tenant" on the mouth.

Yeah,that is very confusing. OP clearly says that MC is at friend of family house,but then most of dialogs make you feel is tipycal landlady aka mom situations and then it goes back when she said to Luna it's time to finally pay the rent,what makes u wonder what kind of mother will do that. Later MC says to Luna before the sex 'but you're my roommate',like is forbidden. Time will tell or not

 

[N1bb1T]

I'm the dev.

sir, please request developper tag and ownership of this thread, i believe it is done by submitting a ticket in the bar above
I'll be trying out your game now!

 

[michel.gellar7]

Heklo!
Great concept. Where can I find the ICT patch ?

 

[Fazed]

I got a chance to play the game a bit, renders are good but for the love of the gods, CLEARLY label the doors. I spent like 10mins in the club area just trying to find the door up to the elevator because that and the door out look so damn similar.

Freeroam: it feels like it kinda detracts from the overall game. Sometimes you just drop someone into freeroam and there is literally nothing to do but "go here and talk to this person." Why? Why not just cut the free roam and continue on with the game? If you plan to add things later to do in free roam just remember, most of the players will have already played that part so going back and adding content to the early game is kind of a losing battle. My suggestion, cut it when its not absolutely nessesary. Make it an important thing to be able to do multiple things at once, not just fetch quests.

As for the content..... if Priscilla and Luna are supposed to be the MC's mom and sister, this game is going to be a nonstarter for ALOT of people. Why? Oh, because Luna is a whore... literally. Aaaand MC has at least 2 unavoidable sex scenes with her (and the other whore) to "teach him out to teach the rest of the whores." If your intention is to not show the girls fucking other guys, but have it happen in the background, this is going to be a very frustrating game to both sides of the NTR/AntiNTR fence. ESPECIALLY with a character who is supposed to be so important to the MC. Random whores? Fine, just give us the option to avoid their story if we choose. But doing that to The Sister?? No. No that will be the straw that broke the camels back for a lot of people.

The choice of having all the girls be focused on the MC will attract the harem/incest crowd, but they will be INSTANTLY repulsed by the idea that your sister is getting fucked by random guys in the background.
At the same time, the NTR crowd will be extremely frustrated because the girls get dicked by other guys in the background, but it's never shown....

Its the in-between that will make no one happy.
And let me tell you, if you are looking for financial support. Harem fans wont throw money at an NTR game, even if it happens in the background...

Don't get me wrong, I absolutely do not want you to take the game full NTR. I am liking that it is centered on the MC... but at the same time, the MC sharing his sister with other guys, even if it's not shown, is a BIG boner killer for me.

Mastur Bar
Dear dev.

After reading your comment I was going to write my own replay explaining why your chosen theme and content direction are contradictory and will work against each other in attracting a player base, but this fine gentleman(I'm assuming) right here has adequately put it into words for me. So instead of repeating pretty much the same thing I will just second this comment instead.

Now I don't mean for you to change the story into something you don't want to do, but you asked for feedback and I at least want to point out the obvious things that history shows(as for as porn games go) will probably not work, or at least be a point of contention. Mainly NTR/Anti-NTR/sharing tug of war and the "sister" being a whore is a big one.

Aside from the content, I generally don't dislike freeroam/sandbox sections in a game but even so, that doesn't mean I am immune to frustration when they are not done properly. It shouldn't feel like a waste of time. If it is not integral to the atmosphere/worldbuilding/gameplay then it will feel like a needless break in the pacing especially if events do not flow into each other or end abruptly. At that point the section could be removed entirely and it would make thing feel better put together.

Do with that information what you will. Cheers.

 

[Shipfan66]

Wow, looks like this one's already heating up lol. I literally just downloaded it, so I'll reserve most commentary for later (and yes, I do try my best to keep it constructive and polite whenever possible). I do think it's good for the relationships to be nice and clear from the get-go, so that all the dialogue you spend tons of time writing makes sense to us readers. Other than that, I'll jsut wait til I get the time to play it before I make any detailed commentary. Best of luck to the dev, hopefully this one plays a nice as it looks!

 

[SoonAtHome]

before downloading > is it a FPV game ? (tell me the beard guy is not the mc)

 

[Herbert1]

before downloading > is it a FPV game ? (tell me the beard guy is not the mc)

Beard guy is the mc unfortunately

 

[DarkAssassin]

DarkAssassin Can you please make a gallery and replay unlocker for this game?

As per request, Here is my Multi-Unlocker
*It will work with every version*
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[Elrompeortos2000]

Is pregnancy going to be part of the game at some point?

 

[Mastur Bar]

Is pregnancy going to be part of the game at some point?

Yes, it's planned, but not yet present in the current version. ^^

 

[Deep@Gaming]

Will Luna continue to have sex with other "male" customers in this story...?? Even if it's not shown onscreen....
Just give us an option to either avoid further progression with her story or atleast tell us whether it will only with the MC from now on...

 

[ElSuape]

Yes, it's planned, but not yet present in the current version. ^^

Nice, when that time comes Veronika will be the mother of my children.

 

[Deep@Gaming]

Hey Dev... Please keep Luna and Veronika out of other "male" reach.... atleast keep the banner girls safe from the atrocities of other "male" customers.... If you do that kindly we will be so thankful for this wonderful game !!

 

[E1ias]

So a brothel... with no prostitution tag? XD

 

[michael1984]

Well gues this is a no Li avn

Since we at a brothel so its a everyone fucks everyone situation

Also thank god no ic patch caus that would make things worse

But yeah playing as a mc with a no strings atached fuck marathon can be something different for a change

Just hope we wont get suckerd into a romance path with any of the girls since we know already they gonna be used by other dudes

 

[Simulacrum29]

Well gues this is a no Li avn

Since we at a brothel so its a everyone fucks everyone situation

Also thank god no ic patch caus that would make things worse

But yeah playing as a mc with a no strings atached fuck marathon can be something different for a change

Just hope we wont get suckerd into a romance path with any of the girls since we now already they gonna be used by other dudes

one of the whores is "not-your-sister", but maybe that doesn't bother you ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

 

[Hoboy]

How does navigation work in this game? I'm stuck trying to find where the hell to place the sign at the very beginning. I thought the entrance to the bar, but nothing seems to work...

 

[DatRacoon]

This game is off to a good start as the sex scenes are very well done in my opinion.
But i have a few problems with the dialogs...

1. You should scrap some lines of dialog like (i'm paraphrasing here): i don't need my phone anymore, i'm putting it in my pocket.
Nobody i know speaks like that. It feels like what a robot or an alien would say.
You don't need to be overly descriptive with such mundane actions.

2. More of a nitpick here but it seems you're using "No doubt" a lot. I'ts okay if one or two people use it , like the MC and his roommate for ex, as it can be seen as a quirk but other people should use other turn of phrases like you're right, of course,for sure.
It could help differentiate the characters.

Anyways , good luck to you and your game

 

[Mastur Bar]

How does navigation work in this game? I'm stuck trying to find where the hell to place the sign at the very beginning. I thought the entrance to the bar, but nothing seems to work...

You have to put it right above the door at the bar's entrance. Maybe We'll release a patch to make it easier to realize.
If you're feeling lost, read our walkthough, there's a step by step showing what to do in each moment of the game.

This game is off to a good start as the sex scenes are very well done in my opinion.
But i have a few problems with the dialogs...

1. You should scrap some lines of dialog like (i'm paraphrasing here): i don't need my phone anymore, i'm putting it in my pocket.
Nobody i know speaks like that. It feels like what a robot or an alien would say.
You don't need to be overly descriptive with such mundane actions.

2. More of a nitpick here but it seems you're using "No doubt" a lot. I'ts okay if one or two people use it , like the MC and his roommate for ex, as it can be seen as a quirk but other people should use other turn of phrases like you're right, of course,for sure.
It could help differentiate the characters.

Anyways , good luck to you and your game

We really need to improve our writing, as the amount of text in the game is very large, some things go unnoticed by the review.
Thanks for the feedback!

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Ok...it's clear exploration, inspection, and navigation have been given a lot of work, but the result is honestly a convoluted mess. There's WAY too much shit to click on and look at. And I don't think I've ever seen a game that needed a "quick travel" option quite as badly as this one does from the get-go.