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Maybe two to three times as big as fictional story
Only Netorare. I don't like cuckolding. Unless its the queen cuck stuff
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not a fan of horror, but Round juicy asses keep me comfortable in such trauma ahaha
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For those who understand perfect English great.
For those who need to make a translation, pessimo.
Pes friendly because all games with voices are critical to translate.
Good luck with your game.
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The ai voiceover is tragic. That the audio and visual white noise is used constantly makes it irritating more than anything else. Those should be exclusive under specific circumstances. Hand camera recordings where something interferes with the electronics. Old tapes watched. Hallucination, nightmares. A narrative tool instead of a default background.
Just because we have to watch and listen slice of life fluff through white noise it won't become horror. The latter won't give the former an eerie feeling, simply makes the watching of the entire media an annoying experience.
At least 90% of it should be cut, perhaps keep it when transitioning between scenes for a second or two. White noise is much more effective that way unless it's an actual horror scene.
Played an odd little porn game recently that had a quasy-horror segment (caught me totally unprepared), breaking the usual schooldays the mc accompanied one of the girls for ghosthunting which turned out to be an actual grim experience. It was constantly pitch black, just a fleshlight provided tunnel vision with whitenoise for background music with the occasional creepy noises through it from an increasingly hostile ghost and the detector suddenly beeping loudly when it was nearby. Was damn effective.
Don't squander it on scenes where girls chitchat about life.
Just because we have to watch and listen slice of life fluff through white noise it won't become horror. The latter won't give the former an eerie feeling, simply makes the watching of the entire media an annoying experience.
At least 90% of it should be cut, perhaps keep it when transitioning between scenes for a second or two. White noise is much more effective that way unless it's an actual horror scene.
Played an odd little porn game recently that had a quasy-horror segment (caught me totally unprepared), breaking the usual schooldays the mc accompanied one of the girls for ghosthunting which turned out to be an actual grim experience. It was constantly pitch black, just a fleshlight provided tunnel vision with whitenoise for background music with the occasional creepy noises through it from an increasingly hostile ghost and the detector suddenly beeping loudly when it was nearby. Was damn effective.
Don't squander it on scenes where girls chitchat about life.
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thanks for the response mate. Here after playing the demo.. as always, hot MC who I cant wait to see get banged
AI voiceover is bit unnecessary imo tho. Im someone who skims the text and skips to next. with the AI voiceover its just janky and off putting for me. With the voiceover im forced to play it at the speed of the voiceover whereas without it I can set my on pace. Just my opinion
I have to say that even tho im big fan of your work, but fully voiced AI voice over aint working. It works on those segments with mr. vain and stuff but other than that just no. AIs ability to make voice-acting is horrendous at this stage so i would say scrap it. It was good to test but its making otherwise good quality product to worse experience.
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First of all, Great Ass!
Second, even if we set aside Dat Ass!! and the fact that this is a DiscipleofVirginia game I'd still be hooked after going through Linnea's introduction in this demo. Her timid and non confrontational personality should make her extremely fun to bully I'd imagine.
Some people might not like the AI voiceover but considering the horror theme, I think it's uncanniness will only end up enriching the overall experience. After all it did a good job of it during the interview with Klaudia's father.
Second, even if we set aside Dat Ass!! and the fact that this is a DiscipleofVirginia game I'd still be hooked after going through Linnea's introduction in this demo. Her timid and non confrontational personality should make her extremely fun to bully I'd imagine.
Some people might not like the AI voiceover but considering the horror theme, I think it's uncanniness will only end up enriching the overall experience. After all it did a good job of it during the interview with Klaudia's father.
Allthough it is very tempting for me to respond with several memes, let me respond properly.
Before I respond, let me be clear here. I have no issues with criticisms, I need to know what I am doing wrong so I can correct it. So thanks guys and gals for your comments, it does really help <3
I will respond to the AI- Voices further down.
Putting in the output render noise (White Noise) was a risk I did. The response to it, has been either no comment, or that its literallythe worst thing I have ever done in my entire life and that I should roblox myself and how fucking even dare you still draw breath Virginia???? cringe (Not saying you did this by the way Ennoch, its just that f95 isn't the only place I receive criticism)
I am being slightly hyperbolic here of course.
I had no idea that people hated white noise this much. With that said I like your idea about putting it into the story more sparringly. And I will look into using another VHS background noise.
The VHS overlay has to be there, because I wanted this VN to feel like a VHS tape. But I will look into using what blend mode to use where ^^. If people have suggestions, please let me know.
The sound channel for the voices will be tied to a certain slider for v1 (Next version), so people can turn them off if they want. Because if my Patreons overwhelmingly likes the voices, I will keep them. The narrator's voice, Mrs Vain, will be kept regardless (But again, tied to a slider so people can turn it off if they want) ^^
Yeah, Mr Vain and Mrs Vain will always be voiced ^^
As I said above, I will tie the dialogue voices and the Narrator voices to seperate sliders. The narrator voice is what I am using for the hypno sections for my sissy horror game I am developing. So I need to keep doing it, so I get better at using it
Now, the reason why this demo was so short should be apparent. I needed the feedback, so when I start doing the proper v1, I can make it better than the demo.
All in all, let me be clear here. I have no issues with criticisms, I need to know what I am doing wrong so I can correct it. So thanks guys and gals for your comments, it does really help <3
Before I respond, let me be clear here. I have no issues with criticisms, I need to know what I am doing wrong so I can correct it. So thanks guys and gals for your comments, it does really help <3
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I will respond to the AI- Voices further down.
Putting in the output render noise (White Noise) was a risk I did. The response to it, has been either no comment, or that its literally
I am being slightly hyperbolic here of course.
I had no idea that people hated white noise this much. With that said I like your idea about putting it into the story more sparringly. And I will look into using another VHS background noise.
The VHS overlay has to be there, because I wanted this VN to feel like a VHS tape. But I will look into using what blend mode to use where ^^. If people have suggestions, please let me know.
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The sound channel for the voices will be tied to a certain slider for v1 (Next version), so people can turn them off if they want. Because if my Patreons overwhelmingly likes the voices, I will keep them. The narrator's voice, Mrs Vain, will be kept regardless (But again, tied to a slider so people can turn it off if they want) ^^
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Yeah, Mr Vain and Mrs Vain will always be voiced ^^
As I said above, I will tie the dialogue voices and the Narrator voices to seperate sliders. The narrator voice is what I am using for the hypno sections for my sissy horror game I am developing. So I need to keep doing it, so I get better at using it
Now, the reason why this demo was so short should be apparent. I needed the feedback, so when I start doing the proper v1, I can make it better than the demo.
All in all, let me be clear here. I have no issues with criticisms, I need to know what I am doing wrong so I can correct it. So thanks guys and gals for your comments, it does really help <3
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