I never review a .1, but I wanted to say that the animations in this are fucking wonderful for an initial release. Very good job on that front! Furthermore, while the premise is basic bitch "landlord/tenant" with a 2020 frame, I really, really liked the use of imagery to jump back and show both women as they're introduced. It's engaging and cinematic. Another very good job here as well. The writing and dialogue are not bad. They're, again, very basic. Here is Landlord, Here is Landlord's Wife, "OH NO, 'Tenant', don't jump on the bed! Heavens, this is awkward!" Note, I'm not mocking the actual writing there so much as the highly familiar situation. The Coof, while this premise has been done a LOT this past year, would still provide ample fodder for a full VN, and I intend on following this production. But what occurred in the demo has still been done before, many times.
As a proof of concept, you absolutely have my attention. Animations and renders are nearly rock solid, there's some nice cinematic flair, the girls are hot and, rote or not, the premise is enticing. I want to see more, for sure, and will stick around.