RPGM Loki's Corruption [v2.6.1] [Atarian]

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Py Ape

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I am in love with this game! Really love corruption games like this, I sincerely hope you introduce exhibition elements with character reaction to the clothes you are wearing! I am currently on the part where we play as urban. It's been 6 hours and I am still lovin it!
 

Patchez

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My native language is not english. No one has pointed that out before.
I'll keep that in mind. I do have a guy that makes a bit of proofreading.(He's in the credits)
For now he's going through the first part of the game.
So I have a few pages to fix by now. As previously stated, my priority is always new content.
If I were to make the game perfect, then there would not be any new content.
So I'm doing that step by step aswell.
Mr dev, can you please provide with some more images from the CG, as the OP images look like they were drawn by unrelated artists and my initial 10 min gameplay showed me nothing. The game looks very interesting though.
 

kajidiablo

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like i said in a previous post im not attempting to attack you for mistakes just a heads up and trying to help is all, i know English isnt your native tongue even a native english speaker like myself used ofcourse instead of "of course" for a while before i was nit picked into the ground xD when you say it, it sounds like it should be one word ill admit but written its not, only took about a day to play through everything up to maze game all your side dialogue is great no errors i noticed but main game dialogue is still needing the work done on it, i thought about taking a screen shot every time i saw a mistake but figured you already got someone as your post on page one said i believe, only mentioned the new content because its got a lot of minor issues like missing letters like the exiting instead of exciting part or the ofcourse instead of "of course" as for it being perfect, its not required but making things presentable for something you have created is only a plus not a minus, you wouldn't make a chair and not make sure the legs are level, as a scrub i am thankful for the opportunity to play the game, the story is a great twist on good and evil i just feel like giving back i suppose even if its in a semi crude fashion as i will admit i'm not great with "social interaction" lol
 

Atarian

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Mr dev, can you please provide with some more images from the CG, as the OP images look like they were drawn by unrelated artists and my initial 10 min gameplay showed me nothing. The game looks very interesting though.
Request denied! Higher level of attention spann required to see pictures!
All pictures including the old bad ones are made by me.
There are currently 1672 pictures in the game. About 370 are used for overlays for maps.
Several are used in multilayer. Several are used in sequence.
 

Patchez

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Eh, I will get to it in the end, just thought it would be nice to add them to the OP as I personally tend to avoid games where there are little/no CGs shown in OP. Or if it's not clear what kind of game it is from summary+images.
Request denied! Higher level of attention spann required to see pictures!
All pictures including the old bad ones are made by me.
There are currently 1672 pictures in the game. About 370 are used for overlays for maps.
Several are used in multilayer. Several are used in sequence.
Maybe I'll add them myself, but I promise they won't be nearly as flattering as Game Developer's :)
 

Atarian

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I am in love with this game! Really love corruption games like this, I sincerely hope you introduce exhibition elements with character reaction to the clothes you are wearing! I am currently on the part where we play as urban. It's been 6 hours and I am still lovin it!
Awesome! While characters does react to the cloths which are more or less camoflaged by influence.
I do have ideas for the future happenings with said elements, where the influence doesn't cloud the mind so to say.
I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the game!
 

Atarian

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Eh, I will get to it in the end, just thought it would be nice to add them to the OP as I personally tend to avoid games where there are little/no CGs shown in OP. Or if it's not clear what kind of game it is from summary+images.


Maybe I'll add them myself, but I promise they won't be nearly as flattering as Game Developer's :)
Threats about modifying my game?
 

kajidiablo

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honestly if it takes less then 24 hours to play up to maze games it should be easy to fix gammer wise or at least add letters to the missing parts as i said no one buys a chair with uneven legs this is a product representing you and all future projects

EDIT: ill add even if its a solo company that just makes more of it left to you meaning all fuck ups are on you and no one else
 
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kajidiablo

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im going to say this because i know your going to reply with "im a one person company" but literally that means art story and game play if your at fault at the end of the day its all you and unless your paying said proofreader its still up to you with how your presenting yourself so no excuses i could also mention the town in the 2nd chapter is so laggy it causes about a min of load time each time scene changes ghost island was literally run through everything when its only story even if your not native english this is your product your object you wanna sell, and you dont wanna be known as a shoddy dev im sure you can only use the im a one man team so long and this game is over a year old and even with the " i only want to add" excuse this is still your only product so might as well try your best if you want to market it
 

Atarian

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im going to say this because i know your going to reply with "im a one person company" but literally that means art story and game play if your at fault at the end of the day its all you and unless your paying said proofreader its still up to you with how your presenting yourself so no excuses i could also mention the town in the 2nd chapter is so laggy it causes about a min of load time each time scene changes ghost island was literally run through everything when its only story even if your not native english this is your product your object you wanna sell, and you dont wanna be known as a shoddy dev im sure you can only use the im a one man team so long and this game is over a year old and even with the " i only want to add" excuse this is still your only product so might as well try your best if you want to market it
I don't run a company and this is not a buisness.
It's a hobby project and I do get some donations, which help me afford hardware and software licenses.
This is not an excuse, this is facts. The fact is that no one starts off being perfect even if you don't want to accept that.
And I've already told you, that I am trying to improve which I have considering the old artwork comparison.
Why can't you just drop this and accept others?

So I was running on the 1ghz passive cooled low power machine(Zotac Ca320 nano).
And since you claim that there was a minute of loadtime I actually put the game on the worst USB stick I had and ran it on that.
Aproximately 10MB/s read speed and as you may know that a USB memory is also very terrible at reading several files at once.
Just adding to the dispair. Switching from Sigtuna during scene to sea map earned a 15s lag. Ghost Island itself has less than 1 second delay running on the USB stick switching maps. And that was the biggest lagspike running on an old keychain Kingston Datatraveler 8GB(16 years old). Now I didn't run it on the 2004 Acer Ferrari 3400+ machine, because that would have yield a much better result, as in close to full FPS because even if singelcore that core is much faster than a core on the Zotac(Rpgmaker VX ACE does only support one core). Now you talked about a minute of loadtime. Unless you're just making things up because you're upset, you should really consider upgrading your machine. Alternativly replacing the harddrive to something that reads faster than 3MB/s. I can't really do much about the loadspeeds because they are limited by your hardware. The game makes use of overlays afterall.
 
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Patchez

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Maybe I miss-understood you. You weren't talking about the opening of the game but something else?
When I mean OP I mean Original Post (aka first post in the thread), so that when people look at the game for the first time on the forum, they see what the game looks like, whereas now there are only 2 images there.
 

Atarian

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When I mean OP I mean Original Post (aka first post in the thread), so that when people look at the game for the first time on the forum, they see what the game looks like, whereas now there are only 2 images there.
Oh! I'm sorry man I thought you meant the opening of the game.
Yeah I can help you with that for sure. So we'll be looking at some character,
gameplay graphics and some TF sequence tease. I'll finish todays work first and then I'll have a look at that.
 

Patchez

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Hey no rush, just pick whatever you think looks interesting and shows gameplay/premise of the game.
 

Re-4Andrew

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I don't run a company and this is not a buisness.
It's a hobby project and I do get some donations, which help me afford hardware and software licenses.
This is not an excuse, this is facts. The fact is that no one starts off being perfect even if you don't want to accept that.
And I've already told you, that I am trying to improve which I have considering the old artwork comparison.
Why can't you just drop this and accept others?
They never seem to get it? They think the games on F95 are similar to EA or Rockstar games they have hundreds (or in this case dozens) of people working on various aspects of a game.

Most if not all the game on F95 are being created as a hobby they have one developer and maybe a few others who are helping them out, in most cases they have to pay for artist renderings. As players we get a chance to play them, a number of games that get made this way never see the light of day.

He seem to be trolling over stupid bullshit which as become an all too common topic on F95 'misspelling'! Damn near clogged up an entire page of the thread over this nonsense. It makes me laugh that this is the one thing that makes them go over the edge "I dont want to play because the spelling or translation is a turn off". Then go play another game until one misspelled word see you troll a thread and stop playing it as well.

I did see you are from Sweden which is what I kinda off thought from the names and places in the game. Games made in other countries are always going to be difficult to translate smoothly to english.

All that aside I did get to the end of the update, the story has gotten more interesting with the additions.
 
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JaszMan

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Most likely due to third-party software interfering or file(save) manipulation.
still my Favorite Adult RPG. Question, When can Loki(Lokka) wear the revealing armour?. Would also be cool if Loki falls in love with Mora,it is written so well between the two characters. Cheers to the hard work.
 

Doublefrost

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Great story. Was hoping for more porn, but I really don't have any complaints about this. One of the better RPG Maker games I've played on sheer merit of the story being so damn good. I'd rather post something that's full of scathing criticism. Damnit. Instead, take some unmitigated praise. Looking forward to future updates and when this is finished, future projects.
 
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