Played around with the new update for quite some time.
First of all, thanks for the long post.
I'll try to respond as best I can.
I've noted a lot of remarks that I intend to use as inspiration to improve the game.
In order to be clearer in my answers, I took the liberty of modifying the order of your post.
I enjoyed the new scenes on the bus, though I think it might make even more sense if she would encourage everything by flashing boobs or pussy.
I hesitated to make flash CGs in the bus, but there are already a lot of such scenes in my script, so I wanted to vary a bit.
So far I don't like the lack of response on the different outfits, to give an easy example, you get her on the beach topless, and nobody seems to care.
There will then be reactions to Lolita's outfits (like in the café or brothel) I will even add passers-by who will interact with her depending on her outfit. At the beach too (The beach is almost empty of content for the moment)
The nude beach should have a better build up. She goes there and those guys jerk on her? Come on! She could be embarrassed noticing them staring at her, then be excited, than secretely pose for them, work out naked at the beach and so on and on before actual sex really takes place. It is a wasted opportunity at the moment.
I made the 1st CG to test the background photo method which allowed me to make the CGs of the pool and the Bus. This CG being much simpler, I used it as a draft. As it was done, I put it in the game, but the nudist beach is a work in progress.
In general it feels like there could be more steps / rewards inbetween, the progression seems a bit rushed. For example the blackmail path could not only be the opener for her shaved pussy but also for going commanda ( no underwear), but maybe before that go with lingerie or the g-string. So far it seems the g-string and lingerie don't seem to have a specific role, they are just there (or did I miss something?). To put life in the classes he could blackmail her into flashing classmates or teachers - maybe getting send to the headmaster for that? And LATER, much much later she could be blackmailed into handjob, blowjob and so on. The blaclmail part could include to go to the beach in the topless bikini, to go to the nude beach and so on. Of course the same story could be triggered by a friend. Or by her lover (Thomas?).
For the school, there are a lot of CGs planned during class. In the script it's another kind of blackmail that leads Lolita to make these CGs.
The relationship she will have with Thomas (the pool cashier) is really special and will lead Lolita to some very daring actions and exhibition.
I'd rather not spoil this part for the moment.
Each part you developped so far is nice and interesting, but maybe you could put a bit more love into each of those. She just seems to go down to fast for my tastes, as much as I hate grindy games, this is a bit to easy, actually simple, for my taste.
The game is only at the beginning of its life (82 CGs out of 206 or more)
As the game is open (often RPGs work on the mode: such day = such event), the fact that I build the game little by little makes it difficult for the moment to have a coherence in the actions that Lolita does (but I try to correct as much as possible).
There will always be several ways to move Lolita forward.
For example: for the moment, it's blackmail that's leading her to this shave. But later on, there will be other stories that may lead her to do it. Depending on the player's choices, she won't have the same "mentor".
I think the actions happening on the bus should be possible at home as well, the nude cooking should have the opportunity to lead further, be it boob/blowjob, deepthroat or allowing the guy to jerk of on her face / boobs / butt / pussy.
The parts you're criticizing are elements of the game I designed at the time I was testing RPG without knowing exactly where the game will go (I must admit I'm still not sure I have the definitive answer to this question).
I'm going to take it all back to my mind and complete
Actually the same goes for the guy she's paying the rent. She jumps on sex right away, handjob, blowjob, I don't remember. Why not make him ask her to wear less at home? Starting with undies, in order to lower the rent? Then eventually he could ask her to wear lingerie or the g-string and later ask for sex. This way lingerie and g-string would get a meaning and the whole progression would be a bit more believeable, realistic, well - you know what I mean.
At least that's what she did at the café, I was a bit surprised that she decided to do so (flash her tits, if there is pussy flashing I did not encounter it yet) on her own will without even being asked by anyone, but why not.
I'm not sure Lolita's roommate should tell her how to dress. I like that she has a choice. She's trying to emancipate herself. All this progress shouldn't be made under duress. That's why, once she's confident enough, she's the one who decides to show her breasts to get tips.
I really like the CG, it is simple, but the girl looks great and sexy in her own kind of way. As said before, I'd like to hear her reflecting on her life on a daily base, maybe looking at hersellf in the mirror, maybe with each daily summary of her stats.
There are already dialogues planned in relation to the mirror, but not theses.
But I'm going to explore your idea of reflecting on life in daily stats.
That's all for the moment. Thanks for the nice game!
I hope you're happy with my answers.
I will continue to create the game and hope you'll like the next update.