VN Ren'Py Long Road Home [Ep.16] [OBDGames]

[HornyyPussy]

So I like it for the most part. Interesting premise and the girls are pretty hot. However the animations all see to flow the same way and some of the dialog and the story beats makes it read like some conservartive power fantasy wet dream. Like all these young girls are have only been with women even though they are in their twenties but they are not lesbians, it's just that your MC must be the one to claim them with his magic cock.
And then there is all the over the jargon that only right wingers use and making the MC like this badass alpha who is "not a soyboy", no normal person talks like that and I live in the fucking south. I want to like it but some of it is just cringy as fuck, kind of like some of the comments in the message board here talking about how "real men do this and that". Seriously just shut the fuck up, no one but your microcosm actually talks or acts like that. I am in chapter 6 and I am curious as to where it is going but the cringy right wing speak that is increasing just makes this little power fantasty more and more boring.

As you said, it's Dima world and he has the people speak the way HE wants (btw, most here disagree with you).

 

[BGRW2020]

jessy be nice , i just want to train you to shut the fock up

you would be better served to teach yourself, I am only voicing an opinion, that all readers are entitled to - you are getting personnel and violating my rights

 

[c3p0]

you would be better served to teach yourself, I am only voicing an opinion, that all readers are entitled to - you are getting personnel and violating my rights

Ryker help me, I get violated by HiHaHo.

 

[HiHaHo]

you are getting personnel and violating my rights

heh straight to the victim card
wanting to try out your own idea .. just didn't like the target i guess.

considering it your idea how would you do it?
lets ignore the WHY? for a second and disregard all things that come along with Jessy as Ryker's main girl and wing women.

 

[Krytax123]

you would be better served to teach yourself, I am only voicing an opinion, that all readers are entitled to - you are getting personnel and violating my rights

Youre as free to voice your opinion as other people are to tell you that your opinion sucks ass

 

[LWtbo]

So I like it for the most part. Interesting premise and the girls are pretty hot. However the animations all see to flow the same way and some of the dialog and the story beats makes it read like some conservartive power fantasy wet dream. Like all these young girls are have only been with women even though they are in their twenties but they are not lesbians, it's just that your MC must be the one to claim them with his magic cock.
And then there is all the over the jargon that only right wingers use and making the MC like this badass alpha who is "not a soyboy", no normal person talks like that and I live in the fucking south. I want to like it but some of it is just cringy as fuck, kind of like some of the comments in the message board here talking about how "real men do this and that". Seriously just shut the fuck up, no one but your microcosm actually talks or acts like that. I am in chapter 6 and I am curious as to where it is going but the cringy right wing speak that is increasing just makes this little power fantasty more and more boring.

No offence I honestly thought you was talking about a diffrent game.
I dunno about the right wing part as for me being English if it was our right wing speak it would be a very diffrent game.
Infact to me it just seems like what many regional american's talk like atleast the ones I could actually understand.
But the reading the rest of the description I honestly thought it sounded more like diffrent game.
In fact it just Conjured up a image that resembled one called Gra**maH***se more.
Personally speaking anyway.
Just Sayin.

 

[TigerWolfe]

No offence I honestly thought you was talking about a diffrent game.
I dunno about the right wing part as for me being English if it was our right wing speak it would be a very diffrent game.
Infact to me it just seems like what many regional american's talk like atleast the ones I could actually understand.
But the reading the rest of the description I honestly thought it sounded more like diffrent game.
In fact it just Conjured up a image that resembled one called Gra**maH***se more.
Personally speaking anyway.
Just Sayin.

There's a level of machismo that's in this game, that for someone who associates that with conservative rhetoric (they're not wrong) it could maybe be a bit uncomfortable. But I'm very left leaning and more than a bit vocal about it, and I haven't felt put off by the dialogue in the game given the setting.

 

[FatGiant]

"Violating my rights" from someone that wants to "own" women, dictate what they can wear, who can see them, who they talk to and what about... if it wasn't so fucked up it could be really funny... but in fact it only drops the mask more and more of the type of person we are dealing with.

Why don't people like this learn to stay silent and be confused with normal persons, but, instead, insist on speaking up and be shown to be creeps with no interest... it's mind boggling.

Anyway...

 

[was435]

As you said, it's Dima world and he has the people speak the way HE wants (btw, most here disagree with you).

I apologize for denigrating your conservative power fantasy where almost all women only fuck other women and you.
I thought people were allowed to express opinions here. My mistake, in the future I will be more careful when handling your fragile masculine ego and be sure not to let your delusions deflate on my account. (edit because sometimes my autocorrect just sucks)

 

[HornyyPussy]

I apologize for denigrating your conservative power fantasy where almost all women only fuck other women and you.
I thought people were allowed to express onions here. My mistake, in the future I will be more careful when handling your fragile masculine ego and be sure not to let your delusions deflate on my account.

And of course you'd turn out to be one of those.........oh well, The List!™ is there for a reason.

 

[HiHaHo]

Youre as free to voice your opinion as other people are to tell you that your opinion sucks ass

bro don't state the obvious ,i want to play a bit more

 

[TigerWolfe]

And of course you'd turn out to be one of those.........oh well, The List!™ is there for a reason.

Some of us can be really annoying online.

 

[Jack Nippleson]

So I like it for the most part. Interesting premise and the girls are pretty hot.

However the animations all see to flow the same way and some of the dialog and the story beats makes it read like some conservartive power fantasy wet dream.

And then there is all the over the jargon that only right wingers use and making the MC like this badass alpha who is "not a soyboy", no normal person talks like that and I live in the fucking south. I want to like it but some of it is just cringy as fuck, kind of like some of the comments in the message board here talking about how "real men do this and that".

Seriously just shut the fuck up, no one but your microcosm actually talks or acts like that. I am in chapter 6 and I am curious as to where it is going but the cringy right wing speak that is increasing just makes this little power fantasty more and more boring.

Way to be passive aggressive about something that for the most part you enjoyed. It's a story. Pure and simple. It's no different than all the rhetoric and "southern language" used in books like: Too Kill a Mockingbird, Tom Sawyer or Of Mice and Men, etc.

The dialog and how the author/dev uses it for the intended purposes of character building and telling the story is just that. It's up to the reader to process the information and either be entertained by it or not.

What exactly were you hoping to achieve other than being a typical keyboard warrior, troll, menace, pest, nuisance, hater...?

 

[Krytax123]

There's a level of machismo that's in this game, that for someone who associates that with conservative rhetoric (they're not wrong) it could maybe be a bit uncomfortable. But I'm very left leaning and more than a bit vocal about it, and I haven't felt put off by the dialogue in the game given the setting.

Same, left-leaning too and i dont get that impression from this avn.

But if the poster thinks stuff like the girls being virgins and only getting fucked by the mc is right-wing related, than 99,9% of all avns are conservative lol, its more or less usual. And here at least in case of most girls its at least someeewhaaat explained why it is like that (like in jesse's case for a sad reason but simply having a aggressive biker dad in such a small town can make things problematic already for girls lol).

And there are normal/cool male characters other than the MC in this story at least which is already more than 95% of avns seem to be able to manage, some even got hot chicks themself (looking at you sluggo).

Not saying its realistic but surely not "worse" than most avns in this department.

I cant remember the MC ever being a cringe "alpha" either, hes just a kinda normal tought guy and more often rather downplaying his own achievments instead of boasting or shit like that

Imo the MC and his attutide really works great for this avn, im not the biggest fan of harems (because the construction of the harem is unbelievable/bad in 99% of all avns) but here it kinda works and i prefer the mcs laid-back and partial macho attitude every day over these lovey dovey mcs who are soooo great and flawless and soooo deeeeply in love with 20 chicks at the same time.

 

[FatGiant]

I apologize for denigrating your conservative power fantasy where almost all women only fuck other women and you.
I thought people were allowed to express onions here. My mistake, in the future I will be more careful when handling your fragile masculine ego and be sure not to let your delusions deflate on my account.

wooooooh there mate... take a chill pill...

1- Many here aren't even American.
2- Some haven't even set foot there to know what you are talking about.
3- What you were told was that Dima (the Dev) wrote the characters that way, for his own purposes, probably from experience.
4- We get that you experience stuff differently and that your way of talking and of those around you is not the same.
5- Please re-read what you were told, without the assumption that anyone is out to get you, or even disagreeing.
6- Bartender, one more beer for this guy, he had a hard day.

Peace

 

[HiHaHo]

we got 2 people who would like to share their opinion with everyone but don't like that someone has a opinion about their opinion.
one feels his rights are violated , the other thinks its because he shattered someone's fantasy which must've been based in political ideology (opposing from his own im guessing)

both american i'm guessing, as a EU guy i'd advise these people to find mental healthcare,but this seems weirdly normal in the US

 

[was435]

No offence I honestly thought you was talking about a diffrent game.
I dunno about the right wing part as for me being English if it was our right wing speak it would be a very diffrent game.
Infact to me it just seems like what many regional american's talk like atleast the ones I could actually understand.
But the reading the rest of the description I honestly thought it sounded more like diffrent game.
In fact it just Conjured up a image that resembled one called Gra**maH***se more.
Personally speaking anyway.
Just Sayin.

I get that the MC is masculine but it is like the whole game and all of the women are obsessed with pointing it out. The running commentary about betas and how all guys are pussies and how the MC is the only man who is man enough to show these women their place, even one of the antagonists who doesn't have a small dick is fucking that little bitch DJ so it is kinda just making a point to pass them off as inferior and he is kinda a dismissive dick in his head about every non milf or any woman that is not super skinny. Even though he fucks chloe he still has a rude inner dialogue that makes him fucking her come off like a favor in his mind since she isn't some svelt model.

I play lots of games and harem games so I am not opposed to harem games or having a desirable MC but some of it is super cringy and kinda lacking any kind of depth so parts come off as blamed or lifeless. Like the 4th iteration of an 80's action movie but with only the same special effects used over and over again.

 

[was435]

And of course you'd turn out to be one of those.........oh well, The List!™ is there for a reason.

Don't know what you are talking about nor do I care, I just like decent characters and okay storyline in between all of the sex and I thought some constructive feedback would be healthy for the developer, my bad. You individuals are even more thin skinned than all those people obsessively whining about NTR while the rest of us dgaf one way or another. Fine whatever I will leave your circle jerk to the professionals

 

[HiHaHo]

Don't know what you are talking about nor do I care, I just like decent characters and okay storyline in between all of the sex and I thought some constructive feedback would be healthy for the developer, my bad. You individuals are even more thin skinned than all those people obsessively whining about NTR while the rest of us dgaf one way or another. Fine whatever I will leave your circle jerk to the professionals

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[hitman2511]

Don't know what you are talking about nor do I care, I just like decent characters and okay storyline in between all of the sex and I thought some constructive feedback would be healthy for the developer, my bad. You individuals are even more thin skinned than all those people obsessively whining about NTR while the rest of us dgaf one way or another. Fine whatever I will leave your circle jerk to the professionals