Great update. My only complaint was the Twila scene. For someone with so little previous experience, it felt like she spent the entire scene talking about other guy's dicks. I don't consider many things to be dealbreakers, but that's a huge one for me. I don't care that she's not a virgin, didn't expect her to be, but I'd really prefer not to hear about past partners, especially not during a sex scene. it just really killed the mood for me.
I had to go back and reject her, which came with a very heartbreaking guilt trip.