I said 3 active members because I was under the impression that Gunner was mostly retired. And while we don't know exactly how deep their operations go I assumed that between Babes and their work for the Mayor that the Minions would need a fair bit more than the six that we have seen to keep things running even if they are just grunts like Johnny and Rip(perhaps even lower on the totem pole and not even being probationary members).
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That will be a decision for you to make brother, you'll have options.The only question i have about that choice... if we get jaybird out of jail, are we still allowed to have fun with Candi? Or was that more of a one time thing? I know, he´s a brother and all that, but i wouldn´t mind sacrificing him if that means we gonna keep her
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One of cousins brought his Harley to the family reunion. At the time my grandmother was 87 and she got on it, kicked started it and rode around the park we were at.You may laugh, but I'm a knee replacement away from getting a Triglide!
My FLHTCU Ultra Classic Electra Glide (long ride bike) weighs nearly 900 lbs wet.
My Ol' lady worries about my knee giving out and dumping that beast on me.
I'm not going to quit riding so I might get one or put a sidecar on the Ultra.
I had a Ural with a sidecar when I worked overseas.
She was ugly as fuck, but fun to ride! <insert joke here>
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I'm not quite that old, but I'm old enough to know that some older ladies ride better than others.
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Hm i wonder if i'm just wired strange, but i just felt really annoyed with both Willow and Jessy during Willows first time having sex with the MC. Willow was like "yeah no big deal, lets fuck like crazy, i stretched myself all the way with a dildo just for you, Jessy helped". Kinda turned that "once-in-a-lifetime" first time special event into something feeling more mundane.
(great update however, really enjoy a lot - was just a strange hiccup cause i don't even know why i was so annoyed about it)
(great update however, really enjoy a lot - was just a strange hiccup cause i don't even know why i was so annoyed about it)
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You did NOT just infer that Rai Rai has a duck face! I KNOW you did not do that... She's clearly puckerin' up for a kiss. Oh, this is so bad... So, so, so, so bad...
Just wait, Dima... Rai Rai
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Some girls prefer to "prepare" themselves with a toy, so that their actual first time will be more enjoyable for them. Nothing wrong with that. Some guys prefer the full deflowering experience, nothing wrong with that either. It was still her first time, and thus a literal once-in-a-lifetime event, and as a bonus, the sex was more wild and certainly not "mundane".
While "popping a cherry" can be very hot, the actual sex is usually pretty unpleasant and unsatisfying for both parties. A girl that's "prepared" for her first time is like a best of both worlds situation, since it's still her first time and is enjoyable for parties.
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Quick correction, I don't think they can be demoted beyond that of a 2nd Lieutentant (O1), so even an enlisted rank like Private wouldn't be possible. If you want to keep him as a Lieutenant later in the story you would need to keep him as a Lieutenant at the beginning. Maybe just bust him from 1st Lieutenant (O2) to 2nd Lieutenant (O1). But most people aren't going to see the difference as he is just referred to as Lieutenant.Thanks for your input. Others brought that up as well. I'm not sure it is applied as you stated across all the branches, but it's not an issue for me to change. I strive to make the story as believable as possible even though it is an AVN. In matters of the Military, I'll defer to those that served. I've already changed it in the script. The next update or hotfix, MC will now be a private in prison as the story starts.
If you want the demotion to be more consequential you could make him a Captain (O3) who then got busted to Lieutenant (O1) - from the reading I've been doing this type of demotion is often accompanied by prison time. It doesn't happen very often, and would be significant if it happened, and tie in pretty well with whatever it is that put the MC in Leavenworth to begin with. So Kira would need to refer to him as Captain later, and the guards/major at the beginning would call him Lieutenant, although I'm not sure if you are referred to by rank in Leavenworth or not, might just be by name.
Keep in mind that Lieutenants, in general, lead platoon sized elements (officially 20-50), whereas a Captain leads a company/troop sized element (multiple platoons). Unless they are special operations, I think the lines blur there a bit more. So you would need to keep that in mind for storytelling purposes moving forward.
Alternatively you could keep him as Sergeant or Private in the early game and change the rank he was busted from to Sergeant First Class (E7 - still referred to as Sergeant though - highest ranked NCO in a platoon, leads alongside a Lieutenant) or go a bit higher to First Sergeant (E8 - actually referred to as First Sergeant - highest ranked NCO in a company/troop, leads alongside a Captain). A demotion from E7 or E8 to E1 would be super dramatic, a bit unrealistic, but would emphasize that whatever shit he stepped in was really sticky.
Sorry for the book.
Also, most of this just doesn't matter. It was a complete nit-pick on my part and in the grand scheme of things just doesn't matter unless you plan on diving very deeply into what sent the MC to Leavenworth. So if you don't want to make changes, don't, I think the story is great the way it is.
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So Sarah is going to be extremely grateful for taking the blonde bimbo to task?
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Those big eyes, as if begging.
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Well, mundane might be the wrong word. I'll try to make it a more pointed example: Let's say a girl has a huge collection of dildos, vibrators & other sex toys and likes to make use of it a lot. Now the first time sex with that girl might be more wild due to her experience - even if its just experience with toys, not the real thing. But the difference/change/'newness' seem less pronounced that way, a far smaller step than otherwise. But like i said, might just be me being wired strange (and feeling less pain is certainly nothing bad).
It sounds like I've misunderstood your intentions for her backstory, which is regrettable. As I stated in a previous reply, a lot of her dialogue seems to directly contradict your intentions about her. Maybe she should have said, or at least thought to herself, that Bobby was full of shit when he said he never made her do anything against her will? Also she said herself that the camgirl stuff was just for fun money, which implies that her motives were just sluttery.It warms my heart when I see that someone perceives a character's back story exactly as I intended. You nailed it Grifter!
As I said before, I love her as a character, but hate her as a love interest. If her words matched the backstory you envisioned, and she was really just a victim of circumstance, then I'd also love to have her as a love interest. As it is written, her words paint her as more of a willing whore that wants to reform, rather than someone from a broken home, abused and victimized by her brother.
Maybe a few tweaks to her dialogue would be in order, if my opinion is a popular one? I'd really love to see her the way Grifter described, but I just can't get that from the way she talks about her past.
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Like the old joke where the woman says give me 6 inches and make it hurt so you fuck her twice and slap in the face.
I mean, I know there is a few touching scenes and all that, but I don't know that tissues are needed?Keep tissues handy. MC is really working hard
You will need a spreadsheet to keep up with girls and names,lol
Oh wait, you mean, nwm...
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Dude, I don't usually get into debates on this site and especially in this thread but, if you are going to give advice... know what you are talking about. The UCMJ (Uniform Code of Military Justice) is the binding set of laws, procedures and punishments for all branches of the United States Military. Article 133 covers "conduct unbecoming of an officer" and can be punishable by damn near anything up to and including life in prison.
Now, I've set the record straight. I'm not gonna debate you. Look up the UCMJ and read it for yourself. Article 133 alone is about 10,000 pages.
Fair enough. I hope I didn't offend, as it wasn't my intention. It's your game, and it's absolutely one of my favorites. I still really love Tori's character, despite my criticism. Thank you for responding, and I'm always looking forward to the next update.
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So how about something like a few flashbacks incoming, provided Tori finds Riker (and the Rogues in extension) to be a fair and reliable partner instead of a manipulative piece of crap, making her remember how BB manipulated her into believeing she wanted it herself? Asking for a friend here.