Hehehe... Tell your "friend" there's nuthin' wrong with dancin' with a bad girl and if you dance like Ryker she'll want to dance some more... This should allow you to convince her to repent of damn near anything and everything. She'll become a "good girl'... Just for you. Heh... Jus' Sayin'So how about something like a few flashbacks incoming, provided Tori finds Riker (and the Rogues in extension) to be a fair and reliable partner instead of a manipulative piece of crap, making her remember how BB manipulated her into believeing she wanted it herself? Asking for a friend here.
Don't think Tori will ever be a 'good girl' like Chloe or Emily. But I just glanced that future scene with my inner eye... Riker and Tori, enjoying the afterglow, Riker looking into her eyes and say: "Tori. You're no longer dealing with the Devils. You now partner with the Rogues."Hehehe... Tell your "friend" there's nuthin' wrong with dancin' with a bad girl and if you dance like Ryker she'll want to dance some more... This should allow you to convince her to repent of damn near anything and everything. She'll become a "good girl'... Just for you. Heh... Jus' Sayin'
I know you're gonna love it. I hope I'm remembering correctly... I think Jessie just talks about what happened with JD. There are no scenes to watch. I'm sure someone will correct me if I'm wrong... ?Finally got time to actually restart this. Wish me luck. But one question: Are the flashback scenes with the bs with the stepdad still forced or is it a choice now? Just need to know if I have to prep myself or not.
Yeah, it was forced before and they took some heat over it. I was just glad I was able to kill that fucker later.I know you're gonna love it. I hope I'm remembering correctly... I think Jessie just talks about what happened with JD. There are no scenes to watch. I'm sure someone will correct me if I'm wrong... ?
Hehe... Ryker just kinda "mercifully" let him sleep. He was gonna die from what Jessie did... even if just from the shock alone. Jus' Sayin'Yeah, it was forced before and they took some heat over it. I was just glad I was able to kill that fucker later.
Out in that pampa, for sure. But he put the nails into that casket for sure.Hehe... Ryker just kinda "mercifully" let him sleep. He was gonna die from what Jessie did... even if just from the shock alone. Jus' Sayin'
Bob doesn't get a quick check-out. I'd like something slow and painfull. If possible with screaming should he be able.Out in that pampa, for sure. But he put the nails into that casket for sure.
Can't wait to see what our Bab Bob fate will be.
Also how is going for Chaz and his lover boy? In that case you're where more evil and let nature do the rest...
No offense taken m8. I welcome feedback and criticism that is actionable to make a better experience for the player. I'll correct typos, my redneck grammar and continuality errors. I'll gladly tweak dialog that is not understandable to the masses. That being said, I'm not going to open the pandora's box of tweaking dialog for anyone's personal preference other than mine.Fair enough. I hope I didn't offend, as it wasn't my intention. It's your game, and it's absolutely one of my favorites. I still really love Tori's character, despite my criticism. Thank you for responding, and I'm always looking forward to the next update.
Thanks for that info AquaPart 4, it's a final update for chapter 1
No, that would probably make the universe fold in on it self........True, but nothing could ever been so clear that it would be zonie proofed.
So selfish......No offense taken m8. I welcome feedback and criticism that is actionable to make a better experience for the player. I'll correct typos, my redneck grammar and continuality errors. I'll gladly tweak dialog that is not understandable to the masses. That being said, I'm not going to open the pandora's box of tweaking dialog for anyone's personal preference other than mine.
That is a very respectable stance. As I said, it's your story, and I'm here for it. You give your players a ton of agency anyways, so it isn't a big deal if our personal preferences don't line up with one of the girls. I was merely concerned that Tori's dialogue didn't quite match your vision for her backstory.No offense taken m8. I welcome feedback and criticism that is actionable to make a better experience for the player. I'll correct typos, my redneck grammar and continuality errors. I'll gladly tweak dialog that is not understandable to the masses. That being said, I'm not going to open the pandora's box of tweaking dialog for anyone's personal preference other than mine.
HOW CAN YOU MISSTREAT RAI RAI LIKE THAT!? Shame on you!!I can understand why you think that...
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Hehe.. You tell him, Fox. I knew you wouldn't let such gross misconduct slide!HOW CAN YOU MISSTREAT RAI RAI LIKE THAT!? Shame on you!!
Can you believe that guy? srsly He could be my father by age. but if he pulls a stunt like that again.. i will fly over to the US and Spank him for that LMAOHehe.. You tell him, Fox. I knew you wouldn't let such gross misconduct slide!
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