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I've ran the later scripts through a grammar/spell check program. I'd like to think there isn't that many things that fell through the cracks!
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That also sounds like a PITA process to do. In the future, feel free to forward me the stripped/checked version and I can give it a once over to catch anything that fell through the cracks. That way we can end up with a nigh on perfect scriptI've ran the later scripts through a grammar/spell check program. I'd like to think there isn't that many things that fell through the cracks!
It's not perfect process though. I have to strip out the RenPy coding, run the program, make note of the errors, then make the corrections in the script.
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It's primarily grammatical. Leaving aside the quirks of individual mannerisms and speech styles, there are various issues with non-conversational text for things like scene descriptions and so forth.
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if its the moment you wake up in the hospital
i had this one once to but couldn't replicate it again
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So... Dima, you are a great story teller. You're dialogue flows as naturally as can be. Grammar... Not so much. Case in point, "I'd like to think thereI've ran the later scripts through a grammar/spell check program. I'd like to think there isn't that many things that fell through the cracks!
It's not perfect process though. I have to strip out the RenPy coding, run the program, make note of the errors, then make the corrections in the script.
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true if hes willing to help why not right?So... Dima, you are a great story teller. You're dialogue flows as naturally as can be. Grammar... Not so much. Case in point, "I'd like to think thereisn'taren't that many things that fell through the cracks!" It's not terrible. It's just not publisher perfect. Now... You're being offered free assistance from an English teacher. That translates as "professional sentence builder". It couldn't hurt. Most likely will help. I've been hanging' around this site for a few years now and this is hands down my favourite story. Take every opportunity to make it even better. Jus' Sayin'
just give em early access a day or 2 before release so he can do a run on the new content to check it
Then again you could say some off the grammar & sentence building "mistakes" could reflect realism
Not that the characters in the AVN are stupid ,but you're bound to find these things IRL to
(and non native english speakers like me wouldn't even notice them,on here the browser spelling check really helps me though)
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Everyone's a critic.........So... Dima, you are a great story teller. You're dialogue flows as naturally as can be. Grammar... Not so much. Case in point, "I'd like to think thereisn'taren't that many things that fell through the cracks!" It's not terrible. It's just not publisher perfect. Now... You're being offered free assistance from an English teacher. That translates as "professional sentence builder". It couldn't hurt. Most likely will help. I've been hangin' around this site for a few years now and this is hands down my favorite story. Take every opportunity to make it even better. Jus' Sayin'
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Just finished this update and it was "OUT FREAKING STANDING" , I can't wait for the next chapter to continue this and see how it goes.
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Yes, Mr. HornyyPussy. I could remember you about a post to include more cast in his game, even from outside of LRH, but that would be a critic, isn't it?
Couldn't let this slip, you know me.
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Yes, Mr. HornyyPussy. I could remember you about a post to include more cast in his game, even from outside of LRH, but that would be a critic, isn't it?
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I got the same error, too. It happened both times I tried passing that moment (by chance, I had made a save when MC was walking back to Elvira after "dealing" with Johnny, shortly before the hospital scene; I usually get into the habit to make a save when it feels like a possible cliffhanger moment, just in case the story ends for this update).
I could easily continue past this error by hitting "Ignore", at least.
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Mine was a courteous request.........Yes, Mr. HornyyPussy. I could remember you about a post to include more cast in his game, even from outside of LRH, but that would be a critic, isn't it?
Couldn't let this slip, you know me.
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Such a good movie.