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NubianPharoah

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I have played through to Part 3 ending and never got any content with Twila, did I miss it or are you only able to have content with her if you aren't on someone else's path?

If so are there other ladies who are only available if you aren't seeing a certain person? only asking as I am sleeping with or dating all the available LI's

Also is Nora or Kelly content off the table if you are seeing Rachel and/or willow?
 

cxx

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I have played through to Part 3 ending and never got any content with Twila, did I miss it or are you only able to have content with her if you aren't on someone else's path?

If so are there other ladies who are only available if you aren't seeing a certain person? only asking as I am sleeping with or dating all the available LI's

Also is Nora or Kelly content off the table if you are seeing Rachel and/or willow?
you can date and sleep with all lis.
 

e6mill

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Aug 4, 2022
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I have played through to Part 3 ending and never got any content with Twila, did I miss it or are you only able to have content with her if you aren't on someone else's path?

If so are there other ladies who are only available if you aren't seeing a certain person? only asking as I am sleeping with or dating all the available LI's

Also is Nora or Kelly content off the table if you are seeing Rachel and/or willow?
P sure Nora and Twila depend on Rachel.
 

Dimitri57

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I realize I'm probably in the minority here; but just how many more girls does Ryker need? There's already so many that it's several updates between doing anything w/ them. We still haven't gotten to Oksana or Nora (or possibly cucking Stevarino w/ Sarah) or Sluggo's daughter yet. There's probably already planned stuff for Emily and Tori and Kira in the future. And this beta update, we now introduce a Korean sidekick (interesting one I'll grant you) for Rin. I wouldn't be too surprised if Ryker's ex-girlfriend from before prison suddenly made an appearance. It's a LOT to keep up with is all I'm saying and time to really move the story forward.
Move the story forward to where? Are you suggesting I make a rushed finish to the story like what happens to other games when the dev gets bored, fed up with the incessant whining, or is tapped out on imagination?

Am I supposed to feel bad that I envisioned a large expansive story, filled with interesting characters, back stories and creating unique events that aren't found in any other AVNs?

I put a lot of thought, time and effort into this to produce something that isn't like everything else. I figure it will take up to three chapters to tell the complete story, so there's going to be a lot more to see, do and time to make it around with all the girls.

I've got to keep this all in order in my head and sequence the events along the way. All you have to do is read it. Sorry, not sorry that you can't keep up with it.

I admit I didn't give the player an opt out with Jessy and Tracy. (Probably some other as well) That will be corrected when I remaster Chapter One. Other than them, you've had the option to not open a path with a new girl. If there's too many girls in the game for your taste, that's on you bro.

I get your overarching compliant though. There is a big gap in time between scenes with the girls you like or want to be with.
I feel for you, but I can't reach you. The story drives the interactions or creates the opportunities with the main girls. It would be easy to have the MC go around and fuck everyone just for the sake of fucking them. I'm sure some say that's all that happens anyway.

You perceive the story is dragging because you're seeing the story bit by bit as it develops. Believe me, it would be a lot less headaches and stress on me to just to work on this at my own pace and not release it until I'm completely finished. Once the story is finished, there won't be the extended delays between scenes with the girl/girls you like.

The bottom line is, I'm doing this story for my own enjoyment and as a creative release. If you like it great. If it is stressing you out too much following it, there are plenty of simple, less complex games out there.







I'm really questioning if I made the right decision to start engaging on this thread again... :cautious:
 
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Move the story forward to where? Are you suggesting I make a rushed finish to the story like what happens to other games when the dev gets bored, fed up with the incessant whining, or is tapped out on imagination?

Am I supposed to feel bad that I envisioned a large expansive story, filled with interesting characters, back stories and creating unique events that aren't found in any other AVNs?

I put a lot of thought, time and effort into this to produce something that isn't like everything else. I figure it will take up to three chapters to tell the complete story, so there's going to be a lot more to see, do and time to make it around with all the girls.

I've got to keep this all in order in my head and sequence the events along the way. All you have to do is read it. Sorry, not sorry that you can't keep up with it.

I admit I didn't give the player an opt out with Jessy and Tracy. (Probably some other as well) That will be corrected when I remaster Chapter One. Other than them, you've had the option to not open a path with a new girl. If there's too many girls in the game for your taste, that's on you bro.

I get your overarching compliant though. There is a big gap in time between scenes with the girls you like or want to be with.
I feel for you, but I can't reach you. The story drives the interactions or creates the opportunities with the main girls. It would be easy to have the MC go around and fuck everyone just for the sake of fucking them. I'm sure some say that's all that happens anyway.

You perceive the story is dragging because you're seeing the story bit by bit as it develops. Believe me, it would be a lot less headaches and stress on me to just to work on this at my own pace and not release it until I'm completely finished. Once the story is finished, there won't be the extended delays between scenes with the girl/girls you like.

The bottom line is, I'm doing this story for my own enjoyment and as a creative release. If you like it great. If it is stressing you out too much following it, there are plenty of simple, less complex games out there.







I'm really questioning if I made the right decision to start engaging on this thread again... :cautious:
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Apr 2, 2023
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It's a LOT to keep up with is all I'm saying and time to really move the story forward.
That's a you problem not pacing problem. I'm old and have been able to keep up with all the LI's just fine. Also, considering the content that Dima has put out versus the other AVN's that haven't been abandoned I'd say the story is moving along just fine. I doubt the ex will make an appearance. If you get a Dear John letter that means its over-over. Plus it seems like whatever you named your MC has ZERO desire to return to her as she would not agree with his new current life choices.
 
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Renfield42069

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Move the story forward to where? Are you suggesting I make a rushed finish to the story like what happens to other games when the dev gets bored, fed up with the incessant whining, or is tapped out on imagination?

Am I supposed to feel bad that I envisioned a large expansive story, filled with interesting characters, back stories and creating unique events that aren't found in any other AVNs?

I put a lot of thought, time and effort into this to produce something that isn't like everything else. I figure it will take up to three chapters to tell the complete story, so there's going to be a lot more to see, do and time to make it around with all the girls.

I've got to keep this all in order in my head and sequence the events along the way. All you have to do is read it. Sorry, not sorry that you can't keep up with it.

I admit I didn't give the player an opt out with Jessy and Tracy. (Probably some other as well) That will be corrected when I remaster Chapter One. Other than them, you've had the option to not open a path with a new girl. If there's too many girls in the game for your taste, that's on you bro.

I get your overarching compliant though. There is a big gap in time between scenes with the girls you like or want to be with.
I feel for you, but I can't reach you. The story drives the interactions or creates the opportunities with the main girls. It would be easy to have the MC go around and fuck everyone just for the sake of fucking them. I'm sure some say that's all that happens anyway.

You perceive the story is dragging because you're seeing the story bit by bit as it develops. Believe me, it would be a lot less headaches and stress on me to just to work on this at my own pace and not release it until I'm completely finished. Once the story is finished, there won't be the extended delays between scenes with the girl/girls you like.

The bottom line is, I'm doing this story for my own enjoyment and as a creative release. If you like it great. If it is stressing you out too much following it, there are plenty of simple, less complex games out there.







I'm really questioning if I made the right decision to start engaging on this thread again... :cautious:
At the end of the day it's your story to tell and we're just observers. I'm sure even with a "finished product" there will always be critics, whether it be an AVN, a novel, a soap opera.

You just got back with the milk, don't go back to the corner store. You can't leave us alone with mom again; you know how she gets!
 

divingmedic

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Aug 15, 2023
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That's a you problem not pacing problem. I'm old and have been able to keep up with all the LI's just fine. Also, considering the content that Dima has put out versus the other AVN's that haven't been abandoned I'd say the story is moving along just fine. I doubt the ex will make an appearance. If you get a Dear John letter that means its over-over. Plus it seems like whatever you named your MC has ZERO desire to return to her as she would not agree with his new current life choices.
It's all Jody's fault.
 

HornyyPussy

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Apr 26, 2020
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Move the story forward to where? Are you suggesting I make a rushed finish to the story like what happens to other games when the dev gets bored, fed up with the incessant whining, or is tapped out on imagination?

Am I supposed to feel bad that I envisioned a large expansive story, filled with interesting characters, back stories and creating unique events that aren't found in any other AVNs?

I put a lot of thought, time and effort into this to produce something that isn't like everything else. I figure it will take up to three chapters to tell the complete story, so there's going to be a lot more to see, do and time to make it around with all the girls.

I've got to keep this all in order in my head and sequence the events along the way. All you have to do is read it. Sorry, not sorry that you can't keep up with it.

I admit I didn't give the player an opt out with Jessy and Tracy. (Probably some other as well) That will be corrected when I remaster Chapter One. Other than them, you've had the option to not open a path with a new girl. If there's too many girls in the game for your taste, that's on you bro.

I get your overarching compliant though. There is a big gap in time between scenes with the girls you like or want to be with.
I feel for you, but I can't reach you. The story drives the interactions or creates the opportunities with the main girls. It would be easy to have the MC go around and fuck everyone just for the sake of fucking them. I'm sure some say that's all that happens anyway.

You perceive the story is dragging because you're seeing the story bit by bit as it develops. Believe me, it would be a lot less headaches and stress on me to just to work on this at my own pace and not release it until I'm completely finished. Once the story is finished, there won't be the extended delays between scenes with the girl/girls you like.

The bottom line is, I'm doing this story for my own enjoyment and as a creative release. If you like it great. If it is stressing you out too much following it, there are plenty of simple, less complex games out there.







I'm really questioning if I made the right decision to start engaging on this thread again... :cautious:
PLEASE don't let people like that get you down Dima, we truly love having you here!

There will always be people with unreasonable complaints, just ignore them, you don't owe them any kind of answer, especially here on a PIRATE forum.

Focus on us loveable dingbats instead ;)
 

FatGiant

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I have one question:

What happened to the 3rd waiter? The one with a name starting with H, that the previous manager of the club tricked to give him a BJ?

She suddenly vanishes and no one mentions her again.

To be honest I was well into the Episode 10 when I remembered her...

Peace :D
 

ShatteredEnigma616

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I realize I'm probably in the minority here; but just how many more girls does Ryker need? There's already so many that it's several updates between doing anything w/ them. We still haven't gotten to Oksana or Nora (or possibly cucking Stevarino w/ Sarah) or Sluggo's daughter yet. There's probably already planned stuff for Emily and Tori and Kira in the future. And this beta update, we now introduce a Korean sidekick (interesting one I'll grant you) for Rin. I wouldn't be too surprised if Ryker's ex-girlfriend from before prison suddenly made an appearance. It's a LOT to keep up with is all I'm saying and time to really move the story forward.
As somebody with severe ADHD, ADD and extremely short memory....I literally have no issue keeping up with this. This is one of if not the best VNs around. At least in my opinion and a few others opinions as well. The story is interesting and isn't some dime a dozen overdone idea. This story is wholly original. And Dima is one of, if not, my FAVORITE dev for that very reason. Each girl does get her time. It isn't rushed they don't have to be one after the other. So what if you have to wait a bit for one or the other of the girls. They each get their time and development. The story continues through. Also its his game he can add as many girls to the harem as he wants and I will play it til the end happily and not miss a beat. So honestly this (as others have said) sounds like a YOU issue. Not an issue with the VN.
 

Dimitri57

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I have one question:

What happened to the 3rd waiter? The one with a name starting with H, that the previous manager of the club tricked to give him a BJ?

She suddenly vanishes and no one mentions her again.

To be honest I was well into the Episode 10 when I remembered her...

Peace :D
That was Heidi. She was never meant to be around long. My intent was that she was coerced away by Bad Bob same as Simone, but I never stated as much. I never showed her to be at one of Bob's clubs later as I did with Simone. She's on the long list of loose ends I need to tidy up at some point... :rolleyes:
 

FatGiant

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That was Heidi. She was never meant to be around long. My intent was that she was coerced away by Bad Bob same as Simone, but I never stated as much. I never showed her to be at one of Bob's clubs later as I did with Simone. She's on the long list of loose ends I need to tidy up at some point... :rolleyes:
Thanks. I was playing along and suddenly I remembered her, and it wouldn't go away... Poor girl, she may not have been smart, but no one deserves that end. Except James...and... and... and... well... you get the picture.

Peace :D
 
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