VN Others Long Story Short [v0.9 final] [TTrickGames]

[Jah-Ith-Ber]

Started out interesting but completely falls apart.

The idea that to corrupt Ann you need to sexually assault her is disgusting. You don't get enough points to do that path just by words and suggestions you need to force your dick in her mouth and sleep naked and then laugh it off. I'm fine with and in fact loved rape/nonconsent play but the idea that it pushes her down this path when she barely knows you at all is laughable. Corruption should be a slow burn not face raping a girl you've known for two days.

And even the corruption path itself is disgusting and just lame. A corruption path should be about a sexual corruption and it should be about her finding herself and exploring her sexuality. Not her changing her entire personality and changing her entire life so that she goes in one week from wanting to be a doctor to wanting to do porn. Jesus christ dude. Make the acting plotline part of the sharing/ntr path not the corruption path.

Only redeeming thing about this is the renders and character models are good. But even then the lewd scenes fall apart because their like 3 frames max. The outdoor sex was pants down ->penetration ->ejaculation. I'm fine with no animations but jesus add some extra renders there or just loop them a few times.

 

[sauron93]

Started out interesting but completely falls apart.

The idea that to corrupt Ann you need to sexually assault her is disgusting. You don't get enough points to do that path just by words and suggestions you need to force your dick in her mouth and sleep naked and then laugh it off. I'm fine with and in fact loved rape/nonconsent play but the idea that it pushes her down this path when she barely knows you at all is laughable. Corruption should be a slow burn not face raping a girl you've known for two days.

And even the corruption path itself is disgusting and just lame. A corruption path should be about a sexual corruption and it should be about her finding herself and exploring her sexuality. Not her changing her entire personality and changing her entire life so that she goes in one week from wanting to be a doctor to wanting to do porn. Jesus christ dude. Make the acting plotline part of the sharing/ntr path not the corruption path.

Only redeeming thing about this is the renders and character models are good. But even then the lewd scenes fall apart because their like 3 frames max. The outdoor sex was pants down ->penetration ->ejaculation. I'm fine with no animations but jesus add some extra renders there or just loop them a few times.

Looking for elaborate plotline in a fcking porn game? How fcking delusional are u?

 

[Jah-Ith-Ber]

If that is your idea of elaborate then I question whether you've read a single book outside of assigned reading in highschool.

The problem isn't elaborateness it's that the plot isn't consistent with either 1) how people act in real life or 2) part of a fantasy where suspension if disbelief is easy.

And is is a fcking forum dude where we are meant to comment on the quality of story so take a chill pill.

 

[Virgile85]

If that is your idea of elaborate then I question whether you've read a single book outside of assigned reading in highschool.

The problem isn't elaborateness it's that the plot isn't consistent with either 1) how people act in real life or 2) part of a fantasy where suspension if disbelief is easy.

And is is a fcking forum dude where we are meant to comment on the quality of story so take a chill pill.

Bro this is an NTR porn game it's not Novel.Novel goes behind 4 or 5 books.porn game must finish in 6 or 7 hours complete game.
Dev is doing great job. One of the best games.
When is the next update???

 

[sauron93]

If that is your idea of elaborate then I question whether you've read a single book outside of assigned reading in highschool.

The problem isn't elaborateness it's that the plot isn't consistent with either 1) how people act in real life or 2) part of a fantasy where suspension if disbelief is easy.

And is is a fcking forum dude where we are meant to comment on the quality of story so take a chill pill.

U r actually braindead if u think any of the scenarios in these games will work irl.. Maybe go outside.. Btw I don't have a problem with u stating your opinion, but IN MY OPINION, it's just wrong

P. S - I have read more books than u will ever read..

 

[Jah-Ith-Ber]

Wow if you need a referral for ADHD my colleague has some openings next week because you seriously need it seeing as you couldn't even finish reading one sentence "2)part of a fantasy where suspension of disbelief is easy."

Harems corruption incest like 90% of the themes in the novels on this site obviously have no basis in reality but they are enjoyable if they are well written and internally consistent in their application. Have you ever taken a writing workshop or were you told "you're too intelligent for college?"

And PS manga and hentai don't count as books son.

 

[omega_rugal]

is there heels in this game ?

 

[sauron93]

Wow if you need a referral for ADHD my colleague has some openings next week because you seriously need it seeing as you couldn't even finish reading one sentence "2)part of a fantasy where suspension of disbelief is easy."

Harems corruption incest like 90% of the themes in the novels on this site obviously have no basis in reality but they are enjoyable if they are well written and internally consistent in their application. Have you ever taken a writing workshop or were you told "you're too intelligent for college?"

And PS manga and hentai don't count as books son.

Neither does low grade porn novels, which u seem to be a master of.. Lmao, get a fcking life

 

[muizdps]

Can anyone tell me how to get the Joey and Ann NTR scene? I can't seem to figure out it's route. Appreciate it!

 

[shotzpro]

Can anyone tell me how to get the Joey and Ann NTR scene? I can't seem to figure out it's route. Appreciate it!

Blackmail vanessa, tell everything to Joey, abuse vanessa in pub (Ann girlfriend), i think this is it

 

[DexterLabs]

Blackmail vanessa, tell everything to Joey, abuse vanessa in pub (Ann girlfriend), i think this is it

Ann corruption or love?

 

[DexterLabs]

Blackmail vanessa, tell everything to Joey, abuse vanessa in pub (Ann girlfriend), i think this is it

This awesome game really needs a good walkthrough.

 

[opfela]

This awesome game really needs a good walkthrough.

Yeah. Sadly Qleaf seems to have abandoned his

 

[Virgile85]

Ann corruption or love?

Ann corruption

 

[Prowl13]

Still no V0.7a1.01 update (which had a lot of bug fixxes) or beta release. Last I heard the Dev was having some computer issues as well. so could be a while.

 

[XxDarkLord15xX]

It won't let me start the game after download on Mac, says Admin/Network does not give me permission.

 

[GiriGiri]

It won't let me start the game after download on Mac, says Admin/Network does not give me permission.

Check this link. Just follow these instructions step by step and you are good to go.

 

[PBS666]

It won't let me start the game after download on Mac, says Admin/Network does not give me permission.

Is it the first time you try this game ? If so, you might need to clear it with Gatekeeper. Don't doubleclick it, but do a right click and choose "open" from the contextual menu.
If you've done that step and the game still doesn't start, check the executable inside the game (right click, show package contents). Navigate to Contents/MacOS. There is a file called Long Story Short. What happens if you double click that ?

 

[XxDarkLord15xX]

Check this link. Just follow these instructions step by step and you are good to go.

Thank you so much!

 

[snowman97]

Can you play this game in fullscreen? It only opens in a smaller window, when I start it