Really nice. Gives ORS vibes. It's needs a little more polishing, like, girl is talking with Brad the manager and suddenly she's in a home with Sara saying "ready?" without transition or anything.
Is there the necessity of making the paths so differently and this early on into an apparently virtuous/slutty path? For instance, she only goes to the photoshot if she doesn't accept to go to managers parents dinner? It's not that I don't like it or something since it's too early to decide that. I just don't see why, so far, why it has to be that way. So far, based on the choices or her behaviour, I don't see a reason for the separation. Also, shouldn't she buy the lingerie after deciding the path? Well having drinks with the guy that grope her might be considered slutty but the player as a choice there. Also the scripted story "behind" what we can't choose, like sharing a flat with he co-worker, feels a bit rushed. Just some thoughts...
Thank you and best of luck.