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Some people expect a new development to go straight to the sex, they don't want the build up but personally I prefer to go with the story when it's got the potential of your game.
Really dont mind a game with some buildup, or things to do to get to a point of sex. If you want a fap and click you might aswell play meet n fuck games on newgrounds. I commend devs who chooses to focus on the story and let it develop along the vision and story rather than jump head first into sex scene after sex scene after blowjob. Gives the game more depth and interesting things to do. I also dont mind the teasing part of these games.
I totally agree on both of your opinions :), while I really like to let the player build up relationships, I don't mind to sometimes change up the pace as long as it is sort of reasonable;). With that being said, an obsessed character that has been stalking you for a long time, and masturbates to secretly taken pictures of you every day, won't take long to take a chance (this is just an example ;)).
 
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I totally agree on both of your opinions :), while I really like to let the player build up relationships, I don't mind to sometimes change up the pace as long as it is sort of reasonable;). With that being said, an obsessed character that has been stalking you for a long time, and masturbates to secretly taken pictures of you every day, won't take long to take a chance (this is just an example ;)).
Yes it's a difficult balance in these games, you've got to have enough fapping material to be interesting but not so much it overpowers the story.
 
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Yes it's a difficult balance in these games, you've got to have enough fapping material to be interesting but not so much it overpowers the story.
HAHA that's a perfect summarization of what I wanted to explain there :)
 

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So, MC has been in Asia for 2 years, he must have left when he was at least 18, so he's ~20+ years old and he's never once bothered to look up his famous psychologist father? That is highly dubious. One would think a 4 year old kid who barely survived the car accident that killed his father would grow up wanting to know everything there was to know about him.
 
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So, MC has been in Asia for 2 years, he must have left when he was at least 18, so he's ~20+ years old and he's never once bothered to look up his famous psychologist father? That is highly dubious. One would think a 4 year old kid who barely survived the car accident that killed his father would grow up wanting to know everything there was to know about him.
I understand what you are saying, but there are many ways a person can deal with a traumatic experience (one is denial)
 
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So, MC has been in Asia for 2 years, he must have left when he was at least 18, so he's ~20+ years old and he's never once bothered to look up his famous psychologist father? That is highly dubious. One would think a 4 year old kid who barely survived the car accident that killed his father would grow up wanting to know everything there was to know about him.
Hmm well, you do have a point there, the whole thing with the father should be something no one in the family openly speaks about. Well, I can't tell you too much but one of the reasons why the mother sort of tried to avoid the children to look up their fathers' research was the field he was specialized in.

Still, if you clicked on the portrait to activate the research it does sound weird and there is something missing. I might add a line saying something like: "Mom always forbid us to look up our father on the internet." "Well, of course, I and Amy secretly did that but back then we couldn't understand a word." Or something like that.

Nonetheless thank you so much for pointing that out! (A perfect example why feedback helps :))
 

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Hmm well, you do have a point there, the whole thing with the father should be something no one in the family openly speaks about. Well, I can't tell you too much but one of the reasons why the mother sort of tried to avoid the children to look up their fathers' research was the field he was specialized in.

Still, if you clicked on the portrait to activate the research it does sound weird and there is something missing. I might add a line saying something like: "Mom always forbid us to look up our father on the internet." "Well, of course, I and Amy secretly did that but back then we couldn't understand a word." Or something like that.

Nonetheless thank you so much for pointing that out! (A perfect example why feedback helps :))
I'd say it's reasonable to assume that the MC always knew his father was a psychologist, but wouldn't know anything beyond that until he reads the publication in the game. Reading stuff like that is a big threshold to step over for most people, not to mention it often being very laborious to even find the text (what with paywalls and undigitized content). Beyond that, Wikipedia also evolves over time.

But if the player was inspired to look up pops, it makes sense that he would also want more sources than just one website, especially now that he has second-degree access. Something like old photos and bringing it up with mom - though interviews require specific questions, and I'm not sure he's there yet.
 
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Hmm well, you do have a point there, the whole thing with the father should be something no one in the family openly speaks about. Well, I can't tell you too much but one of the reasons why the mother sort of tried to avoid the children to look up their fathers' research was the field he was specialized in.

Still, if you clicked on the portrait to activate the research it does sound weird and there is something missing. I might add a line saying something like: "Mom always forbid us to look up our father on the internet." "Well, of course, I and Amy secretly did that but back then we couldn't understand a word." Or something like that.

Nonetheless thank you so much for pointing that out! (A perfect example why feedback helps :))
That would make much more sense. It seems that the father's research is intended to be a major part of the plot so some deeper explanation as to why the son is just looking it up now would add a lot of credibility to the characters and story. Even if it's just a couple lines like the examples you said.
 
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That would make much more sense. It seems that the father's research is intended to be a major part of the plot so some deeper explanation as to why the son is just looking it up now would add a lot of credibility to the characters and story. Even if it's just a couple lines like the examples you said.
Maybe it's something to do with the trauma of it, because if you recall he has that hospital nightmare his first night home
 
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I understand what you are saying, but there are many ways a person can deal with a traumatic experience (one is denial)
Maybe it's something to do with the trauma of it, because if you recall he has that hospital nightmare his first night home
Those could both be possible explanations. Whatever the reason might be it just seemed like a huge question mark that, because it was the main plot point, needed at least some explanation. I immediately thought, "Why now? Why hasn't he done this in the past 16 years." Look forward to seeing how this project develops veqvil, hope I didn't sound too critical.
 
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Those could both be possible explanations. Whatever the reason might be it just seemed like a huge question mark that, because it was the main plot point, needed at least some explanation. I immediately thought, "Why now? Why hasn't he done this in the past 16 years." Look forward to seeing how this project develops veqvil, hope I didn't sound too critical.[ Looking at vequil's patreon page ideas for story development are well in hand
 
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Tried, loved, following !

A real good start (well, not fan to see Mommy run in a date), many many stories could be added in this kind of start! I wish all the best to the creator, and if he/she keeps going like that, pretty sure many patreons will support (me for exemple).
 
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I'd say it's reasonable to assume that the MC always knew his father was a psychologist, but wouldn't know anything beyond that until he reads the publication in the game. Reading stuff like that is a big threshold to step over for most people, not to mention it often being very laborious to even find the text (what with paywalls and undigitized content). Beyond that, Wikipedia also evolves over time.

But if the player was inspired to look up pops, it makes sense that he would also want more sources than just one website, especially now that he has second-degree access. Something like old photos and bringing it up with mom - though interviews require specific questions, and I'm not sure he's there yet.
That's really a solid way to tell the story behind the fathers' research, and there definitely needs to be more explanation now and later on. Big thank you for your suggestion there! :)

Those could both be possible explanations. Whatever the reason might be it just seemed like a huge question mark that, because it was the main plot point, needed at least some explanation. I immediately thought, "Why now? Why hasn't he done this in the past 16 years." Look forward to seeing how this project develops veqvil, hope I didn't sound too critical.
In any way, you can't sound too critical if it's constructive criticism, I am actually grateful that you pointed out something, I wouldn't have noticed for a while. The thing with the father will be relevant later on, so building a solid basis will improve the storytelling :).

Tried, loved, following !

A real good start (well, not fan to see Mommy run in a date), many many stories could be added in this kind of start! I wish all the best to the creator, and if he/she keeps going like that, pretty sure many patreons will support (me for exemple).
I'm glad you are interested LokiTime, I try to bring out updates as soon as I'm happy with the quality and the amount of content, the game will be free to the public so everyone has plenty of time to see if I'm worthy of any support, right now I am speechless that there are already some patrons, which make me want to work even harder and more! :)
 
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I have nothing against milfs, not even my own, but I really thought she was my younger sister.^^
Not often that it happens, but in this game I'm actually more interested in my sister not the mother. :D
 
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Actually i really like that mom model and even sister. I entirely denied Carols date. if it is possible to make Carols entirely yours with love route.. .Im probably support you
By the way good start, a good kiss with Carol in the beginning
It will be possible, but that something you will find out once I release 0.03 ;)

I have nothing against milfs, not even my own, but I really thought she was my younger sister.^^
Not often that it happens, but in this game I'm actually more interested in my sister not the mother. :D
Nice start my only criticism is Sis actually looks older than the mom in the face.
Looking into this, Carols "fuller" face seems to be looking young and Amys thinner face makes her very sensitive to lighting, so I really hope to find a solution by setting the scenes more beneficial for Amy. Having less fill light or stronger changes in color does affect how old she looks.

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Tried it, but it was too short for me to wrap my head around the premise. So, it can go pretty much anywhere. I still don't have a feel on Mom's persona. We can tell something's up with the Sis, lot of negative emotions there, but can't quite put my finger on it. Render wise, i agree with the general tone, the Mom looks way better than Sis, who could use a bit of tuning. I'll just have to wait for 0.3 to get a sense of direction. It's still very much up in the air.
 
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@veqvil What i want to ask of you is:
*1 What content can we expect ? Things like type of fetish and etc.
*2 DO YOU want you game to have NTR ?
*3 Just be honest about what YOU want in your game and then do it, don't ever try to please everyone because it's just impossible and you will waste time and get tired.

I just hate NTR. It's a big turn off for me, and when i'm looking for porn games why should i bother with something that turns me off? Right ?
I'm not asking you to avoid it, just do what YOU think is right.
 
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