- Thread starter GruBoop
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You got any other sites you upload the android port on like Workupload or gofile or MEGA? Seems MixDrop is blocked in my country which also explains why the page to where you tap the download link wouldn't work when I hit download.
I like it very much for a first release.
Not perfect, but what is there is quite good and has lots and lots of potential.
Nice setting. Absolutely stunning graphics!
Gorgeous Ladies. Fantastic facial expressions that make them come alive.
Love the POV angles, and hope to see more of them.
Would be nice to also see the lapdance in POV. And every future scene, of course.
The more POV the better.
Great animations, but aside from the lapdance every animation comes with a big distracting "Next" button. Why?
Since the lapdance worked without it, the other scenes should work without as well.
Most of the transitions from one location to another are too abrupt, from home to diner, (and why is Miyuki cooking and making sandwiches when they go to the diner to eat something entirely different anyway?), from diner to a very short moment at home, to the nightclub, from restroom to bar, then from the bedroom to the inside of the car.
Only the transition from the dance area to the restroom and from the bar area to the bedroom seem natural.
In the restroom with Sara it also abruptly goes from standing blowjob to MC on the floor with her standing above him teasing to sit on his face to her sitting, but not on his face. Feels like half the scene is missing.
Some Choices should have more direct consequences.
For example when choosing that you will tell Miyuki, Sara basically just says "Please reconsider", then everything goes on like it would otherwise.
Would make more sense if Sara pulled some ace from her sleeve to ensure MC's silence.
Not perfect, but what is there is quite good and has lots and lots of potential.
Nice setting. Absolutely stunning graphics!
Gorgeous Ladies. Fantastic facial expressions that make them come alive.
Love the POV angles, and hope to see more of them.
Would be nice to also see the lapdance in POV. And every future scene, of course.
The more POV the better.
Great animations, but aside from the lapdance every animation comes with a big distracting "Next" button. Why?
Since the lapdance worked without it, the other scenes should work without as well.
Most of the transitions from one location to another are too abrupt, from home to diner, (and why is Miyuki cooking and making sandwiches when they go to the diner to eat something entirely different anyway?), from diner to a very short moment at home, to the nightclub, from restroom to bar, then from the bedroom to the inside of the car.
Only the transition from the dance area to the restroom and from the bar area to the bedroom seem natural.
In the restroom with Sara it also abruptly goes from standing blowjob to MC on the floor with her standing above him teasing to sit on his face to her sitting, but not on his face. Feels like half the scene is missing.
Some Choices should have more direct consequences.
For example when choosing that you will tell Miyuki, Sara basically just says "Please reconsider", then everything goes on like it would otherwise.
Would make more sense if Sara pulled some ace from her sleeve to ensure MC's silence.
Surprising. With all these mature ladies, an inexperienced MC (and how he looks), and everything seen so far this seems perfectly set up for femdom.
Sorry, but I do have to write about it since I just finished playing the first episode, the game ooze with a fantastic plotline involving both netorare and netori, especially with the kind of volunteering our protagonist does. by taking out the element of danger, you've technically taken the wind out of the project unless you really give this an exceptional NON-NTR path.
Like someone said earlier, if the project calls for it, any fetish is justified and people will subscribe regardless of the snowflakes. Anyways, all the best, hope the see you churn out updates on the regular
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Definitely a good start GruBoop . Nicely rendered and some smooth animations. Shots are atmospheric
I'd say it definitely need a hell of a lot more dialogue and expostion as everything happens very quickly. The render quality is lot higher than a typical porn fapfest so it needs the dialogue to match otherwise, to me, it's a waste! Need to expand on what characters are and what they mean to the MC. For example, Sara and Alice are just introduced far too suddenly. Maybe you could add in an internal MC voice where he thinks about the characters and what they mean to him, how he's seen them before, etc? The "Oh, welcome, who are you, fine" intro's just don't work. The club set piece also was just dumped on us and then fly's by far too quickly.
Finally, you definitely should consider adding in some sort of cheating mechanic or dare I say NTR? But that should be a consequence of the players choices. So, if you get a girl's flame too high while their love stays low, she may be seduced by someone else. Sudden increase in Loss in addtion to a lot of love? She may go cheat on you. If she has a lot of flame, she'll be a bit of a slut but if there's also a lot of love, she'll be your slut. etc
I'd say it definitely need a hell of a lot more dialogue and expostion as everything happens very quickly. The render quality is lot higher than a typical porn fapfest so it needs the dialogue to match otherwise, to me, it's a waste! Need to expand on what characters are and what they mean to the MC. For example, Sara and Alice are just introduced far too suddenly. Maybe you could add in an internal MC voice where he thinks about the characters and what they mean to him, how he's seen them before, etc? The "Oh, welcome, who are you, fine" intro's just don't work. The club set piece also was just dumped on us and then fly's by far too quickly.
Finally, you definitely should consider adding in some sort of cheating mechanic or dare I say NTR? But that should be a consequence of the players choices. So, if you get a girl's flame too high while their love stays low, she may be seduced by someone else. Sudden increase in Loss in addtion to a lot of love? She may go cheat on you. If she has a lot of flame, she'll be a bit of a slut but if there's also a lot of love, she'll be your slut. etc
- Mar 25, 2019
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just here cause of the cheating tag - can i see the girls cheat on the mc?
Can probably add netorase, its a bit different from the general netorare, the mc has a cuck fetish and lends the wife willingly instead of her cheating behind the mc back and at the end of the day the wife still chooses the mc. So basically he shared his wife, but she still loves and picks the mc at the end. Usually netorase ends with a Happy ending.
- Dec 2, 2018
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Made an incest patch.
version: Supposedly Universal (Season 1, Season 2)
feature: Eng only. Slightly changed the intro. Mc and Ayame refer to Miyuki as Mom.
pc install: Unzip to the "game" folder.
07.03.24: some improvements
05.10.24: some improvements
notes:
I might have missed something, if you spot any lines with the old or new content that should be changed, let me know(preferably with a description of the scene and line text, a screenshot would also help).
This patch should be compatible with future versions(unless the dev changes the code).
version: Supposedly Universal (Season 1, Season 2)
feature: Eng only. Slightly changed the intro. Mc and Ayame refer to Miyuki as Mom.
pc install: Unzip to the "game" folder.
07.03.24: some improvements
05.10.24: some improvements
notes:
I might have missed something, if you spot any lines with the old or new content that should be changed, let me know(preferably with a description of the scene and line text, a screenshot would also help).
This patch should be compatible with future versions(unless the dev changes the code).
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- Aug 21, 2018
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This is a weird game.
I have no idea what is happening - you just meet several girls and woman that all act batshit crazy and then you get a BJ. End of Ep 1.
It looks good, but the strange text speed behavior was annoying as fuck ... there is a reason I want that to be instant - everything else is wasted time, I can read fast enough.
I have no idea what is happening - you just meet several girls and woman that all act batshit crazy and then you get a BJ. End of Ep 1.
It looks good, but the strange text speed behavior was annoying as fuck ... there is a reason I want that to be instant - everything else is wasted time, I can read fast enough.
- Sep 14, 2017
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great start, beautiful latex, animations and girls.
i sure hope mc will also dom
gl on this project!
i sure hope mc will also dom
gl on this project!
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I agree, text speed should default be at the max! But you can change it in the settings, I did it to the max.
- Aug 21, 2018
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That didnt help me. Most of the text ignored the setting and used some strange set speed.I agree, text speed should default be at the max! But you can change it in the settings, I did it to the max.
- May 29, 2018
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Since there's a million definitions of ntr now I want to know are npcs having sex and are we the player(mc) forced to watch?
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