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yes, very bad.... ♂ but i hope his subbed fans tell him to go back to normal artstyle.The animation is very fast in the case of massage.
I'm not sure if this has already been discussed, but Martha's storyline comes across as disjointed and inconsistent. Perhaps it's just me, but I can't seem to find any clear connection between her scenes. The story as a whole feels chaotic, but I've chosen to highlight Martha in particular because her issues seem more apparent and easier to critique. It truly caught my attention.
zandalari
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Her whole character raises questions, with the whole "push-pull" routine she loves doing with the MC. On one hand she pushes him away and warns against doing anything; on the other hand she teases him relentlessly to see if he will ignore her words. You'd expect that on 2 types of characters: a) bratty younger women, b) super successful types who have been in control their entire life and now want to see how it feels when control is taken away from them through the actions of their partner. What's Martha's story? Well, she got left by her husband early on and juggled 3 jobs to raise her daughter as a single mother. Aka she's been kicked all the way down and should be the last woman who does this. And yet here we are.
My impression is that the developer doesn't do "game" but "scenes". Whatever is hot to him in the moment, he rolls with. At the start she wants to set him up with Alice, now the dev wants a dominant mommy so she threatens to feed him his balls if he touches her. We're in the middle of winter exchanging gifts, but he wants to do a scene with Martha soaked in sweat outside? Time skip, who gives a fuck.
Is what it is, the individual scenes are very hot, but don't expect any coherence now or in the future. One day they will have a talk about the importance of choosing your future career, the next day pixies will invade and steal all their clothes. Just roll with it.
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First time posting, and i'm a big fan of this game, but i will say it, AI CG part of this update was just so weird to me, i don't understand the need to use AI, the game animations and CG was so perfect.
i'm the only one thinking he should go back to not using AI ?
i'm the only one thinking he should go back to not using AI ?
EMA111255
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I think AI in this update is horrible with pj scene
But in animation is so good ( I mean scene with martha).
The Wizard of Oz
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A shining example of a quality visual novel. Many developers would do well to learn from this author how to make games of this kind.
_BTX4_
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My only disappointment was that season one left off with a ton of unanswered questions and possibilities. Season 2 picked up like season one didn't happen in some respects. Just an odd choice...
Still enjoy it but wanted to see choices from season one reflect better, or at all...
Still enjoy it but wanted to see choices from season one reflect better, or at all...
Joromi
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Yeah, that’s the thing - it’s kinda confusing, but S1 and S2 aren’t actually connected.
S2 isn’t a real sequel, it’s basically a whole new game.
Raziel_8
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Well that happens if a dev abandons a game, not sure how he would have made a ending for S1, i mean, that game just started.
The only confusing thing is that the dev named it season 1 and 2, when the games have nothing to do with each other....even the game overview is still from the abandoned game...
The incest patch does not add incest to the first season game since there is no parental relationship since his father and mother died and he goes to live with Miyuki.
Lines that should add incest
" my parents died. Since then, I’ve been living with [m] and ."
"She always treated me kindly and raised me as if I were her own child.", "[m] was always kind to us."
This is not incest and there is no reason to call it an incest patch
Is there mother-daughter incest in the game?
Lines that should add incest
" my parents died. Since then, I’ve been living with [m] and ."
"She always treated me kindly and raised me as if I were her own child.", "[m] was always kind to us."
This is not incest and there is no reason to call it an incest patch
Is there mother-daughter incest in the game?
Raziel_8
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Yeah, there isn't much coherence or story here.
Like your just start to celebrate Christmas, than you suddenly got a several months later text, didn't even celebrate or give the gift to Alice ...like why, time skipp for months doesn't benefit the story at all here. Or did the dev just want another Martha scene in a top and sweeting...
Also a really boring update imo...still no real progress be it mom/sis or Alice and i just don't care about Martha, her character is just annoying, well to me.
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Everyone has their preferences, and I personally love Martha, lol. That said, I understand your perspective. Based on earlier replies to my comment, it’s pretty clear the story is just a collection of scenes that barely hold together, meaning the developer’s storytelling isn’t great. However, he does create good individual scenes. He really ought to bring in a writer who can craft a believable, if not realistic, but at least a cohesive story. He could then focus on directing it, as he clearly does well when working from a script. It seems he is hardworking, but he lacks the creativity to sustain a consistent narrative. I’m not criticising him personally, but this is something he needs to work on.
* he used to make good individual scenes, now he's making AI trash.*