VN Ren'Py Abandoned Love Bite [v0.2] [Springwind]

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Overview:
He lived by his own rules and principles. But the unpredictable fate took its toll. Remain true to yourself or omit all the rules and agree with your fate? Is this a difficult beginning of new life? Or maybe... its her end...​

Updated: 13-June-2018
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Version: 0.2
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Language: English
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Hm, interesting story concept, but not enough content in this 0.1 to even consider it a demo.
More like one of those 6 seconds teaser trailers... click through the three preview pics in the op, and that's it.
 
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grgrgr5

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Though there's nothing here yet, I do like the artwork. I do not seem to run into many games with normal looking Asian women. I was a little disappointed when it looked like she would be immediately written out of the story, but since it ended right there, I assume that is not the intention. I hope not.

If she does end up being sired, I also hope it will not change the visuals of her character (fangs and such). It would be a shame to waste such a nice looking and realistic render.
 
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I did not have time to start the game, as it immediately ended. But I would like to play it after several updates
(If she will be alive of course)
 
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Very short i'm agree. (＾＾＃)

It turned out quite briefly. Planned that the first version will be longer and with the second location.
But the creation of a visual novel was not as simple as it seemed at first.
And so to move from the dead point, I decided that I need to show that there is already at this stage of development and get at least some feedback and be sure that it will like not only to me:ForeverAlone:

Reviews are mostly positive, which can not but rejoice. (ง ื▿ ื)ว

The second version I will try to make it more saturated. And while I can say that there will be some "hot" scenes __φ(．．)

I approve criticism. Thanks all!

P.S. While trying to answer in the REQ thread, the topic has already moved, thank you!
 
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Its wrong links!!! 。゜゜(´Ｏ`) ゜゜。Its was test upload when creating a page on Patreon! Need links from post v0.1 "
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grgrgr5

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SWLB said:
I dont get it. Help please (・_・")
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There's really nothing wrong with the line, but I guess it's a slightly awkward usage of "most of" as it implies that some parts of her heart ARE getting enough blood. Personally I like the line as is. It would probably be more correct to just say "Her heart is not getting enough blood..", but I think your line sounds more poetic and fitting of the scene. I'd leave it as is.
 
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ThisIsKing

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i have a question.
i dont start this game yet
cause i hate horror game...
the title bite means zombie or vampire???
 
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Geist

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The links are currently available for free on his Patreon, if you are having an issue over the ones provided here.
 
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