VN Ren'Py Abandoned Love Bite [v0.2] [Springwind]

[Daxter250]

lol wth. the first image seems to be a troll or?

he is just touching her cheeks and then comes up with his diagnosis: most of her heart is not getting enough blood, and so it's dying.
duh.
apart from this weird form of english that guy is using... how can he tell that her heart is running out of blood? and why is IT dying, not she? and why the heck is only part of her heart affected by the blood loss and not the whole heart?
i get a headache just by thinking about this shit... urgh.

 

[wep]

i have a question.
i dont start this game yet
cause i hate horror game...
the title bite means zombie or vampire???

I suppose that you are a vampire (not played yet)

 

[myuhinny]

Downloaded the one from the OP then downloaded the new one from the new link on the patreon.

One question

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The girl seems super sexy not a lot of content atm but the one on the patreon has a little bit more.

 

[wep]

Downloaded the one from the OP then downloaded the new one from the new link on the patreon.

Now it is ok in the OP too. Sorry for the double download :coldsweat:

 

[SWLB]

There's really nothing wrong with the line, but I guess it's a slightly awkward usage of "most of" as it implies that some parts of her heart ARE getting enough blood. Personally I like the line as is. It would probably be more correct to just say "Her heart is not getting enough blood..", but I think your line sounds more poetic and fitting of the scene. I'd leave it as is.

My poetry has gone too far!:coldsweat: Thanks!

@grgrgr5 @keptok @-Dreamer- @cpt_hook @KeinBa @Genius_Vorcha @Ryo

Sorry guys you downloaded an old version. My bad. No idea how longer is this one in OP now.

My bad also! I had to remove this demo

i have a question.
i dont start this game yet
cause i hate horror game...
the title bite means zombie or vampire???

There no horror yet. While not sure about the horror score, the question is in the implementation.

 

[SWLB]

lol wth. the first image seems to be a troll or?

he is just touching her cheeks and then comes up with his diagnosis: most of her heart is not getting enough blood, and so it's dying.
duh.
apart from this weird form of english that guy is using... how can he tell that her heart is running out of blood? and why is IT dying, not she? and why the heck is only part of her heart affected by the blood loss and not the whole heart?
i get a headache just by thinking about this shit... urgh.

He is an experienced vampire and knows from what his victims may die

Downloaded the one from the OP then downloaded the new one from the new link on the patreon.

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The girl seems super sexy not a lot of content atm but the one on the patreon has a little bit more.

I wanted to add a frame with a bite (I did the prerender), but from the first person there is only neck and hair visible. Maybe I'll add a third-person view

 

[Daxter250]

He is an experienced vampire and knows from what his victims may die

now i wanna know, will he die when the girl ate a garlic baguette at breakfast? ^^

 

[SWLB]

now i wanna know, will he die when the girl ate a garlic baguette at breakfast? ^^

I will feed her with baguettes. And we'll see:tf:

 

[cully]

I'm sorry for beating a dead horse here, but I just now checked both Mega and Zippy links. The size of mega is 86MB and zippy is 136MB. Could it be a compression thing? I d/l'd the zippy one, might d/l mega next to check on amount of content?
Thank you.

 

[botc76]

That is too little content for a demo.
This rather makes me NOT invest into the game.

And this could be an interesting game, but you have to offer some content so people can build an opinion.

 

[wep]

I'm sorry for beating a dead horse here, but I just now checked both Mega and Zippy links. The size of mega is 86MB and zippy is 136MB. Could it be a compression thing? I d/l'd the zippy one, might d/l mega next to check on amount of content?
Thank you.

Yep not the most smoothly upload. I re-uploaded everything and now the size is the same.

 

[cully]

I just tried both mega @ 86mb and zippy @ 136mb. It must be a compression thing, cause both seem to have the same quality and content. I also have to agree with others about there not being enough content to judge. I would've loved if the dev would have held off on uploading until they had at least 15-20 mins of gameplay, so we could have something to 'sink our teeth into'. *pun intended*

 

[KeinBa]

@grgrgr5 @keptok @-Dreamer- @cpt_hook @KeinBa @Genius_Vorcha @Ryo

Sorry guys you downloaded an old version. My bad. No idea how longer is this one in OP now.

Well , my idea has not changed. But thanks anyway

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

Another 0.00000000001 . don't bother

So you're saying it needs about 10 billion times more content?

 

[Zippity]

Well, this is a very very short introduction demo... The only things you really get out of it so far is a sense of the décor, the character model styles, and that the protagonist is a vampire who drinks blood from a young woman... Pretty much a majority of the limited number of choices presented just lead to content walls showing place holders for future content... I do hope it does not plan to have player punishment dead ends, but there is no telling at the moment... It shows a bit of promise, but there is only like 30 to 60 seconds of reading and visuals... And the text needs some proofreading, as it has a tiny amount of broken English and a couple mismatched words (words in the wrong order)... I went ahead and posted a review, but I'll have to do a revisit at some point to get a better sense of this visual novel/game...

 

[KeinBa]

So you're saying it needs about 10 billion times more content?

yes.There are only 25 renders and half of them about a narrow dark street.there is neither a story that is ''seated'' nor a subject in which you can predict where you will head

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

yes.There are only 25 renders and half of them about a narrow dark street.there is neither a story that is ''seated'' nor a subject in which you can predict where you will head

250 billion renders total is a tall ask. But I do see what you're getting at. It's more like the sort of thing you'd see in a Developer's Teaser Trailer.

 

[SWLB]

That is too little content for a demo.
This rather makes me NOT invest into the game.

And this could be an interesting game, but you have to offer some content so people can build an opinion.

Well, this is a very very short introduction demo... The only things you really get out of it so far is a sense of the décor, the character model styles, and that the protagonist is a vampire who drinks blood from a young woman... Pretty much a majority of the limited number of choices presented just lead to content walls showing place holders for future content... I do hope it does not plan to have player punishment dead ends, but there is no telling at the moment... It shows a bit of promise, but there is only like 30 to 60 seconds of reading and visuals... And the text needs some proofreading, as it has a tiny amount of broken English and a couple mismatched words (words in the wrong order)... I went ahead and posted a review, but I'll have to do a revisit at some point to get a better sense of this visual novel/game...

I hope you did not download the demo and downloaded v0.1.

I got rid of the link to the demo :coldsweat:

And I agree about to little content at the moment. It's short enough to draw conclusions about the whole game.
But your feedback already speaks volumes! (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
Thank you all!

 

[SWLB]

Well, this is a very very short introduction demo... The only things you really get out of it so far is a sense of the décor, the character model styles, and that the protagonist is a vampire who drinks blood from a young woman... Pretty much a majority of the limited number of choices presented just lead to content walls showing place holders for future content... I do hope it does not plan to have player punishment dead ends, but there is no telling at the moment... It shows a bit of promise, but there is only like 30 to 60 seconds of reading and visuals... And the text needs some proofreading, as it has a tiny amount of broken English and a couple mismatched words (words in the wrong order)... I went ahead and posted a review, but I'll have to do a revisit at some point to get a better sense of this visual novel/game...

Read your review!:hushedface: Thank you!
But one thing...you try "demo", I deleted it and corrected the links to v0.1.okerFace:

 

[Zippity]

I downloaded v0.1 according to the main menu splash screen... There is really only enough content to draw one conclusion about the whole game, and that is the protagonist is a vampire... I could make some guesses based on the title, but I think it's better just to wait for some meat to get put on the bones before really delving into anything concrete...

Best of luck on your project... I've only played maybe a few adult/erotic visual novel/games with vampires as a theme... Some are alright with decent stories, and some are just pure porn fests... I hope this one is going a more story driven route with the occasional erotica and not the other way around... But in either case, I'll revisit it at some point to get a better sense of it...