VN Ren'Py Abandoned Love Bite [v0.2] [Springwind]

[SWLB]

For a longer game...

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Great beginning. Not really a Vampire fan but the story held my interest. The Asian women are beautifully drawn, very nice bodies. I'm a Huge boob fan (Boob fan not necessarily huge boobs, but it's a plus) perhaps one Busty girl in future updates? Maybe a younger sister? But I digress. Great first release.

Don't let others affect your writing style... Not every line is going to perfect, let alone perfect for everyone. I believe it's a fine line between poetry and syrupy dialog. I noticed that a lot of posters are quick to criticize a game/VN even though they've never created one themselves. I think a Dev should decide the direction and dialog of a story, not critics. Again, good start keep up the good work @SWLB

Thank you!(^-^*)/
There will be more characters. As an older and younger. And with different body types. (´♡‿♡`)

i'm sorry could not deal with the English translation in this game so instead of complaining about it i fixed it at least IMO fixed it i totaly edited the script.rpy to make a better translation of the text of the game ..if i can get the authors permission i will find a way to share it with anyone who wants to try it out ..you should be able to just replace the script.rpy with the edited one i have..if this is even allowed here im still new and dont wanna step on any toes..lol

It is very cool! I'm all for it! w(°ｏ°)w

 

[ghostch15]

ok here goes this is my edited file for v0.2
this file edits the text only to a more common english syntax no other changes are made to the game just the text you read when playing the game and i tryed to stay as close as i could the the original meaning of the game

 

[trumpthatbitch]

ok here goes this Should be the link to my edited file for v0.2
this file edits the text only to a more common english syntax no other changes are made to the game just the text you read when playing the game and i tryed to stay as close as i could the the original meaning of the game

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hope it works first time using mega for file hosting

Tried not looking promosing

 

[SWLB]

ok here goes this is my edited file for v0.2
this file edits the text only to a more common english syntax no other changes are made to the game just the text you read when playing the game and i tryed to stay as close as i could the the original meaning of the game

Looks good!(b ᵔ-ᵔ)b
Some moments look better (Hello to my bad english ~(>_<~)) and some moments a bit change the meaning, but that's ok.

I just stick to the main scenario. In the future (when the story is more revealed) you will understand what I mean.
┐(︶▽︶)┌

 

[myuhinny]

After being introduced to the two girls later on when Kazue gets ready to leave her name tag jumps back to girl instead of being Kazue so I edited it to the right tag. Looks pretty good though it does need a lot of proofreading.

It looks like

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[SWLB]

After being introduced to the two girls later on when Kazue gets ready to leave her name tag jumps back to girl instead of being Kazue so I edited it to the right tag. Looks pretty good though it does need a lot of proofreading.

It looks like

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Oh!~(>_<~)
Thank you!

 

[AuroraVT]

good beginning

 

[Radriewyn]

So, is this abandoned, temporary hold or permanent hold since making Contact now?

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[myuhinny]

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The render process slows the development of the novel. Also because of the heat during the day I was worried about my graphics card and constantly postponed rendering for later.
Besides, I felt that in any case for a month it turns out to prepare ~40 images (render, post-processing, etc.) which is approximately equal to 5-10 minutes of the game... And it is very slow.

So I decided to postpone "Love Bite" until better times.

Pity it was an interesting game.

@UncleVT

Can we get an onhold placed on this one since they have stop working on it for the time being thanks.

 

[SWLB]

So, is this abandoned, temporary hold or permanent hold since making Contact now?

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Temporary hold.

"About "Love Bite" - it took a lot of effort to write it and I do not intend to just drop it at all, I just really do not have the time and capacity to develop it at the moment. I will finish it. But, unfortunately, not now. :noexpression:・・・"

 

[Radriewyn]

Temporary hold.

"About "Love Bite" - it took a lot of effort to write it and I do not intend to just drop it at all, I just really do not have the time and capacity to develop it at the moment. I will finish it. But, unfortunately, not now. :noexpression:・・・"

Thank you for the reply and letting us know that you will be going on with the story when it is a better time for you to do so. Good luck to you and seeing what else you come up with in the future