Two comments.
The first is Frankie. With the supernatural elements of the game, I wish she was futa and not trans. I'm not into male on futa, but I can work with it, were as I'm not interested in trans characters. I don't object to trans characters being in a game, and I'm glad we can reject her as romanceable while still being her friend, or without it cutting her out of the game.... but I feel players who otherwise wouldn't pursue a girl with a dick might be more inclined to give her a chance if she was female, in all that that entails, and had a dick also.
I recognize it as a form of mental gymnastics, but having sex with a girl who has a pussy.... and a dick, is a lot more palatable than a girl with a dick, and no pussy.
Especially because I'm not into anal, so if she doesn't have a pussy, there are no real intercourse alternatives.
Maybe, as the general populace isn't aware of supernatural things, she could claim to be trans, but actually be futa.
Anyhow, my second comment?
I enjoy some dialog, and the story building in the first two days makes sense. However, I feel the humor feels a little too forced and occasionally falls flat. Not all of it! There were some legitimate laughs to be had. But some... doesn't work. By all means, keep your humor as part of the project! But it could be dialed back in some scenes, with more focus on conversations and plot?
That said, I want to point out two humor moments that landed with me.
When Bohdi runs into you, looks up expecting his anime waifu, and MC runs with the joke and "rejects" him, but hopes they can stay friends... that was fucking funny.
The literature club scene with Leonardo, on the battlefield, as they debated the books, was very amusing, and I enjoyed it a lot.
The humor does and can work.... in some scenes.
