VN HTML Love, Corruption, & Bimbos [v0.5.2] [Lamebrain]

[cruethehuman]

excited for more of this

 

[Evands]

it looks very nice, not only the text and photos are good, I also appreciate that someone played with html css and added small details that are pleasing to the eye

 

[TeckXChaos]

Enjoyed 0.2 but gosh it felt really short. Not that my opinion is worth anything here, but I think less frequent, larger updates would feel better than trying to push out lots of short, quick updates.

 

[Lamebrained]

Enjoyed 0.2 but gosh it felt really short. Not that my opinion is worth anything here, but I think less frequent, larger updates would feel better than trying to push out lots of short, quick updates.

Your opinion is definitely worth a lot to me as the dev! But yeah, already decided that the updates will be less frequent but bigger from now on.

 

[Faller44]

My favorite "real porn" game returns.

The only feedback I can think of is that the game can use a bit more gifs/pictures. Not that the writing is boring, it's just a lot of times I felt like "this would be a good place for a visual".
The consistency between the characters and the actresses helps with immersion, but I don't really care about that personally. Sooner or later you'll arrive at the point where you don't have a video with a specific actress for a scene you want to do with a character. I don't want this to limit the creativity I guess.

 

[XiousLion78]

Yeah, I was unsure of whether or not I should add more of it, but seems like that's what people want.



The routes are pretty much set in stone, there might (no promises!) be trans for a future route with someone else, but no trap content.



Completely optional, and it's more planned as a an endgame kind of thing. This game is more about transforming others.



I will look into how others feel about it and consider it. The reason for less pages weren't so much about it being a pain and more that I heard twine gets really laggy when you have a lot of them, I'll think about that in the future, thank you for feedback!



The models were chosen with that in mind, I think CJ Miles probably has the least amount of content out there for them, but still enough for one route.



I think I might have worded it badly, and it's more that the love path doesn't immediately mean sex on a first encounter, unless it's a dream. I do admit that it maybe was a bit too fast, probably as a consequence of them being the first ones I wrote the love path for. Kate's love path is more what I had in mind, but that one is free of any powers, so it's a unique case. Anyway, really appreciate the feedback!

First of all, I wanna say that I really enjoyed the game even though this is only version 0.2. I think you have set it up in a nice way and the premise is good. I like the characterization and pace of the game as well. I really look forward to the next version.

Now, this is a my personal opinion but I do think you should consider adding Trap/Futa/Sissy and moderate and extreme bimbofication to the game. The reason I say this is because there are many games out there that deal with concept of transformation and MC having the power to corrupt and transform the characters but they either they are just focusing on fap material or they do not have good fleshed out characters with diverse content.
I want to write a bit more to explain my position but as the creator of the game I would first like to hear your opinion about what I said.
Again, this is my personal opinion I do think your game is good and that's the only reason I made this post since I feel like at this early stage of development it would be easier for you to explore and create more fleshed out characters with various sexual preferences and explore bimbofication like some of the other games do(such as Bimbo Life coach).

I look forward to hear from you.

 

[PederSilver5]

First of all, I wanna say that I really enjoyed the game even though this is only version 0.2. I think you have set it up in a nice way and the premise is good. I like the characterization and pace of the game as well. I really look forward to the next version.

Now, this is a my personal opinion but I do think you should consider adding Trap/Futa/Sissy and moderate and extreme bimbofication to the game. The reason I say this is because there are many games out there that deal with concept of transformation and MC having the power to corrupt and transform the characters but they either they are just focusing on fap material or they do not have good fleshed out characters with diverse content.
I want to write a bit more to explain my position but as the creator of the game I would first like to hear your opinion about what I said.
Again, this is my personal opinion I do think your game is good and that's the only reason I made this post since I feel like at this early stage of development it would be easier for you to explore and create more fleshed out characters with various sexual preferences and explore bimbofication like some of the other games do(such as Bimbo Life coach).

I look forward to hear from you.

Only if the MC can reject it. I do not like being forced to do what I do not want. You can set it up, but the MC should be able to discover, the exception would be a glory hole I suppose.

 

[PederSilver5]

And the transformation tag here is for girls, I take it?

I haven't played yet, but the third gif from left has this text: "Mark questions himself as you push to make his new female urges seem normal." I take this to mean, mark was a guy, and he has his XY replaced with XX, or he just likes to take hormones and wear dresses now... Tranny.

 

[akinit]

I haven't played yet, but the third gif from left has this text: "Mark questions himself as you push to make his new female urges seem normal." I take this to mean, mark was a guy, and he has his XY replaced with XX, or he just likes to take hormones and wear dresses now... Tranny.

No, it is a straight MtF transformation for the men. And it's only temporary, for now. Each transformation is a bit different too depending on the path you take.

 

[XiousLion78]

Only if the MC can reject it. I do not like being forced to do what I do not want. You can set it up, but the MC should be able to discover, the exception would be a glory hole I suppose.

Yes of course. Give the MC the ability to reject it or even close off certain routes if they want at the beginning of the game.

 

[Mibera]

I do think you should consider adding Trap/Futa/Sissy

i wouldn't be opposed if the Dev added trap or sissy content to some male characters (not MC), but I'm personally not a fan of futa and it would be really hard to find fitting pictures or gifs for that content, so they would never fit into the overarching style

 

[PederSilver5]

Better than I expected. Cream pie, but looking for permanent change not just mind game on the transforms.

 

[Lamebrained]

First of all, I wanna say that I really enjoyed the game even though this is only version 0.2. I think you have set it up in a nice way and the premise is good. I like the characterization and pace of the game as well. I really look forward to the next version.

Now, this is a my personal opinion but I do think you should consider adding Trap/Futa/Sissy and moderate and extreme bimbofication to the game. The reason I say this is because there are many games out there that deal with concept of transformation and MC having the power to corrupt and transform the characters but they either they are just focusing on fap material or they do not have good fleshed out characters with diverse content.
I want to write a bit more to explain my position but as the creator of the game I would first like to hear your opinion about what I said.
Again, this is my personal opinion I do think your game is good and that's the only reason I made this post since I feel like at this early stage of development it would be easier for you to explore and create more fleshed out characters with various sexual preferences and explore bimbofication like some of the other games do(such as Bimbo Life coach).

I look forward to hear from you.

I'd like to preface that I only include fetishes that I personally enjoy or, at the very least, understand the appeal of. I think, personally, that if I were to write something that I don't understand the appeal of, then it would just end up being bad.

Trap/sissy for me has always felt like it should be a stopgap between what I want the characters to become. And while I can appreciate the journey of change, that stage is still a bit too masculine for me to really enjoy (sounds weird, but I guess fetishes are, in general, quite weird.) Don't get me wrong; I don't hate it, especially if it's moving in the right direction, but I don't exactly like it either. Trans is something I've thought of and might include in some route in the future, but no promises.

Can you elaborate a bit further on what you mean by moderate and extreme bimbofication? So far, I've tried to give them some personality traits that show that while they may be bimbos, they don't end up being people you can't even tell apart. In any case, appreciate the feedback!

Only if the MC can reject it. I do not like being forced to do what I do not want. You can set it up, but the MC should be able to discover, the exception would be a glory hole I suppose.

Things being optional is a core part of the game and that's not changing. Even with the main story, which isn't optional, you'll never be forced to turn the MC female for example.

Better than I expected. Cream pie, but looking for permanent change not just mind game on the transforms.

Don't worry, that will start happening soon enough.

 

[itslydiabxtch]

I can never read or hear the name "Brad" without hearing Lamar's voice line from the GTA 5 mission "Pack Man"

 

[XiousLion78]

I'd like to preface that I only include fetishes that I personally enjoy or, at the very least, understand the appeal of. I think, personally, that if I were to write something that I don't understand the appeal of, then it would just end up being bad.

Trap/sissy for me has always felt like it should be a stopgap between what I want the characters to become. And while I can appreciate the journey of change, that stage is still a bit too masculine for me to really enjoy (sounds weird, but I guess fetishes are, in general, quite weird.) Don't get me wrong; I don't hate it, especially if it's moving in the right direction, but I don't exactly like it either. Trans is something I've thought of and might include in some route in the future, but no promises.

Can you elaborate a bit further on what you mean by moderate and extreme bimbofication? So far, I've tried to give them some personality traits that show that while they may be bimbos, they don't end up being people you can't even tell apart. In any case, appreciate the feedback!

Thanks for the explanation. I understand your perspective a bit more now. I do understand that it is difficult to create something genuine if you are not really into it. Fetishes are weird and fascinating at the same time haha. I look forward to seeing the next version of the game.

My perspective of the game was that since you are creating a piece with the theme of transformation. It would be nice to have a variety of options. Do consider about adding some content if you feel like the story does naturally develop in that direction. I find transformation games really fascinating because I really wonder if something like this could really be possible in real life. There are a lot of stories on the internet but playing it in a game is a whole different experience.

To answer your question, I suggest you play the game "Bimbo Life Coach." The game gives us a gradual exploration and option to transition characters into moderate and extreme bimbos. It also tries to retain the personality traits of the different characters in the story. In some cases, it also allows the women to be bimbos mostly when they are with MC instead of being a generic sexbot 24/7. Since one of the options in your games is bimbofication, you might wanna explore that to see if you can branch out the idea in your game in the future. I hope this helps.

 

[TrapmanCrothers]

I'd like to preface that I only include fetishes that I personally enjoy or, at the very least, understand the appeal of. I think, personally, that if I were to write something that I don't understand the appeal of, then it would just end up being bad.

I love trans stuff so I'd have been happy with a different answer, but honestly I think devs/writers should really stick to this as much as possible. A lot of games go downhill as they try to please everyone. Or projects die as devs lose interest in their own work. Or they lose direction because the next development is decided by a poll and not what makes sense from a game/narrative perspective. I'd much prefer devs try to make the game they want to make and develop a following around it rather than write things they don't care for.

 

[SunlessSpear]

I love trans stuff so I'd have been happy with a different answer, but honestly I think devs/writers should really stick to this as much as possible. A lot of games go downhill as they try to please everyone. Or projects die as devs lose interest in their own work. Or they lose direction because the next development is decided by a poll and not what makes sense from a game/narrative perspective. I'd much prefer devs try to make the game they want to make and develop a following around it rather than write things they don't care for.

Yeah, audience feedback is important, but if the dev isn't making the game for themselves it's either not going to be finished, or it's gonna be shit. Bad ending for everyone.

 

[TrapmanCrothers]

Yeah, audience feedback is important, but if the dev isn't making the game for themselves it's either not going to be finished, or it's gonna be shit. Bad ending for everyone.

And I think something relevant to this game is that, at face value, it's a very unoriginal plot. Which is fine! Seriously. Not a criticism. There's no original plots left in anything, let alone porn games. Just saying that "Guy gets powers and builds a harem" isn't what makes a game like this. What grabs an audience is everything else. The characters, the dialogue, the player choices, how it all plays into the game world...that's what a dev needs to do to stand out. And if they aren't writing scenarios they're interested in then they're making the job a hundred times harder for themselves.

 

[Gopnikas]

Discovering this has made me happier than a man after a colonic irrigation

 

[Lamebrained]

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