FatAndBald69
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- Apr 25, 2025
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Wow i feel like shit. Game of the year 10/10.
Good thoughts. Don't agree with all, but so what.Let me start by saying that I feel extremely vindicated, 99% of what I've written in the past has been on point.
Act 2 has a very different vibe to Act 1, while Act 1 feels more "grounded" with the occasional outrageous thing happening, Act 2 goes full bonkers.
Honestly the parts I've liked the most are the tame ones, they bring a lot of strong emotions without needing any shock value.
The subtle realizations of how nothing will ever be special, nothing will be their own, that MC love language will always be missing a few pages in its vocabulary.
These are pretty powerful, way more powerful than other "shocking" events, because there cannot be a good resolution, no respite, no nice explanation, no big enemy to take down.
MC and Lacey relationship is stripped of the most intimate and loving things, not just sexual and it is final with no chance to come back.
Overall in Act 1 there were some outrageous things happening but with a bit of suspension of disbelief it was possible to get over it because overall it felt somewhat believable.
Bad boss, drunken landlord with grief, Evan etc.
Now we have misterious hackers, a secret activity recuiting people doing deepfakes pointing exactly at our friend group...because yeah.
Now the mental and emotional aspects are leaving too much ground to big bad evils lurking in the background.
Some stories don't need that, you don't need to up the stakes every time, there was already a good set up for further drama with Lacey's (and MC's) "online presence".
The world around them could have been the big bad here.
Remember, if you have to ask for it, then it loses it's value, whether it is love, loyalty or support.
Also I won't disclose what I got from the game files just thoughts devoid of any influence.
characters:
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MC
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Lacey
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Mia
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Anna
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Kelly
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Christine
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Dianne
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Jeanette
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Yue
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Bethany
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Jamie
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Isaac
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Bradley
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Lorenzo
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Barty
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Will
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Now some more general comments for the game:
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Conclusion:
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And now for what REALLY got my blood boil about this chapter:
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"A story of true love, painful jealousy and the difficult journey learning how to heal and forgive."
Why does it have to be about forgiveness? Why cant you beat her half to death for stabbing you in the back?
Im not big on forgiveness, im big on revenge.
You want a ntr story truly unlike any other ntr ever made? Then have a mc who doesnt just sit there and take it like a little bitch.
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They look like children that only have their age be legal, but with adult bodies.Yes. It's like someone went through a middle school yearbook and just added big boobs (as a reviewer noted, JUST boobs - no hips or womanly shape whatsover). For reference, look at these 'women' - really LOOK at these, and tell me i'm crazy.
Lacy (MC's wife):
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Veronica (the mature 'role model' and Lacey's boss):
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It can't just be me, right? This is SO BIZARRE it's impossible to immerse myself in the story!
Eh, it all points towards him having that complex.Or they could just be in a bad spot. Dev's been working on this and OTMT simultaneously. I can't imagine how Dev's mind works to come up with this content but I imagine you would have to have at least one foot in darkness. Being a solo dev means a lot of work to keep both ships sailing while trying to appease their followers. I wouldn't go straight to terms like, "martyr complex".
Yeah, swinging tag should be add instead of netorare tag, also rape tag should be added as well.I take my previous words back about liking the game. I have played the game further, its pure NTS (seems unavoidable too). We should have separate tags for NTS and NTR so people would not waste their time.
Somehow, the slut managed to convince MC that he need to become a cuck to "fight his jealousy over her past" and that he need to "understand how her brain works". Utter crap. His jealousy over her past would not be a issue if she just told him that past is past, stopped to lie to him constantly and didn't give him reasons to be jealous in the present. Yes, it is that simple. And her "brain works" are just polite words to her desire to sleep around (really, what else could she mean by that?). MC's whimpers that "No! You'll leave me if you sleep with someone!" are just pathetic. Of course she will, because cheating wife should be kicked out of the home! The reason not to a agree are simple: healthy male does not want to share his woman. That's, it. Pure biology. And MC mentioned that he does not want to share, and she admitted that there it nothing she could said against that. Why he did not pressed the argument is beyond me.
The fact that MC let the mentally unstable girl talk himself into something obviously stupid... It's utterly break any shred of immersion left. Pity. The start was kind of good.
Same. Can’t get game to start at all.A new update and still it just don't even fucking starts on my pc... -_-
Im all for revenge. Stab the bitches and then jump off a cliff. perfect ending.View attachment 5078705
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tbf I think Lacey's college life story is like Bonnie Blue's story today.
Mountain of text???? That was a very finely crafted post, please and thank you!DeviantFun
i found you in the crowd and am in the process of reading everything u said gonna take AWHILE couple questions u may of answered in your mountain of text one you once again praised lacey and you know my stance on lacey, but after the barty deepfake video lacey mumbles about he's (the MC) gonna find out something, what is it? was i right and she's a sex addict or is it something new that the MC doesn't know yet? did she say what it is and i missed it?
Also I think the guy talking to will is barty as he refers to the camera's being 30yrs old and well its his property.
i will have more thoughts soon i am reflecting on what i just played and have a ton of issues as per last Act once again Mia is trash