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this one hurt 2 read emotionally cuz It went exactly the way I thought it would (him obliviously saving himself 4 her while she gets her back blown tf out by 100 thousand different men) I wish this had multiple endings like him ending the relationship as early as he finds out or just jumping off that cliff and letting them find the aftermath or ending up with Anna writing a book about his life and exposing what kind of girl Lacey was. (this story was definitely "different" just not in a very satisfying way) It wasn't bad I just wish we had more choices other than just "have sex with girl? yes or no"
 

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Okay, I have to say the idea is great. To make some anti-NTR where
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But execution of the idea is terrible.
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I really hope dev would read it. I kind of like the game.
 
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here we go again boys. I'll be posting my opinions soon currently playing the new update and wow am i angry lolz
 

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Let me start by saying that I feel extremely vindicated, 99% of what I've written in the past has been on point.

Act 2 has a very different vibe to Act 1, while Act 1 feels more "grounded" with the occasional outrageous thing happening, Act 2 goes full bonkers.
Honestly the parts I've liked the most are the tame ones, they bring a lot of strong emotions without needing any shock value.
The subtle realizations of how nothing will ever be special, nothing will be their own, that MC love language will always be missing a few pages in its vocabulary.
These are pretty powerful, way more powerful than other "shocking" events, because there cannot be a good resolution, no respite, no nice explanation, no big enemy to take down.
MC and Lacey relationship is stripped of the most intimate and loving things, not just sexual and it is final with no chance to come back.


Overall in Act 1 there were some outrageous things happening but with a bit of suspension of disbelief it was possible to get over it because overall it felt somewhat believable.
Bad boss, drunken landlord with grief, Evan etc.
Now we have misterious hackers, a secret activity recuiting people doing deepfakes pointing exactly at our friend group...because yeah.
Now the mental and emotional aspects are leaving too much ground to big bad evils lurking in the background.
Some stories don't need that, you don't need to up the stakes every time, there was already a good set up for further drama with Lacey's (and MC's) "online presence".
The world around them could have been the big bad here.
Remember, if you have to ask for it, then it loses it's value, whether it is love, loyalty or support.

Also I won't disclose what I got from the game files just thoughts devoid of any influence.



characters:

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MC
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Lacey

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Mia

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Anna

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Kelly

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Christine

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Veronica

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Dianne
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Jeanette
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Yue
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Bethany
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Jamie
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Isaac
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Bradley
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Lorenzo
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Barty
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Will
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Now some more general comments for the game:

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Conclusion:
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And now for what REALLY got my blood boil about this chapter:
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Good thoughts. Don't agree with all, but so what.

The plotters seem unaware of MC's plans to move. Isaac's house has cameras everywhere. Rooms in Vegas next to each other. Lacey in hotel room while MC's on a date with Anna. Staying at Veronica's house. Or maybe with Bella? The possibilities are endless. Forward
 
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"A story of true love, painful jealousy and the difficult journey learning how to heal and forgive."

Why does it have to be about forgiveness? Why cant you beat her half to death for stabbing you in the back?

Im not big on forgiveness, im big on revenge.

You want a ntr story truly unlike any other ntr ever made? Then have a mc who doesnt just sit there and take it like a little bitch.

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tbf I think Lacey's college life story is like Bonnie Blue's story today.
 
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herrderr75

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Can somebody tell me why there's a fuzzy picture of the black girl in the background much of the time?

I love the art but not the word-to-render ratio, so I'm not really following the story.
 
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Yes. It's like someone went through a middle school yearbook and just added big boobs (as a reviewer noted, JUST boobs - no hips or womanly shape whatsover). For reference, look at these 'women' - really LOOK at these, and tell me i'm crazy.
Lacy (MC's wife):
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Jeannette (MC's boss who is 'older' than he is):
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It can't just be me, right? This is SO BIZARRE it's impossible to immerse myself in the story!
They look like children that only have their age be legal, but with adult bodies.
this shouldn't even be allowed on this site :(
 
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Or they could just be in a bad spot. Dev's been working on this and OTMT simultaneously. I can't imagine how Dev's mind works to come up with this content but I imagine you would have to have at least one foot in darkness. Being a solo dev means a lot of work to keep both ships sailing while trying to appease their followers. I wouldn't go straight to terms like, "martyr complex".
Eh, it all points towards him having that complex.
 

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I take my previous words back about liking the game. I have played the game further, its pure NTS (seems unavoidable too). We should have separate tags for NTS and NTR so people would not waste their time.

Somehow, the slut managed to convince MC that he need to become a cuck to "fight his jealousy over her past" and that he need to "understand how her brain works". Utter crap. His jealousy over her past would not be a issue if she just told him that past is past, stopped to lie to him constantly and didn't give him reasons to be jealous in the present. Yes, it is that simple. And her "brain works" are just polite words to her desire to sleep around (really, what else could she mean by that?). MC's whimpers that "No! You'll leave me if you sleep with someone!" are just pathetic. Of course she will, because cheating wife should be kicked out of the home! The reason not to a agree are simple: healthy male does not want to share his woman. That's, it. Pure biology. And MC mentioned that he does not want to share, and she admitted that there it nothing she could said against that. Why he did not pressed the argument is beyond me.

The fact that MC let the mentally unstable girl talk himself into something obviously stupid... It's utterly break any shred of immersion left. Pity. The start was kind of good.
 
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I take my previous words back about liking the game. I have played the game further, its pure NTS (seems unavoidable too). We should have separate tags for NTS and NTR so people would not waste their time.

Somehow, the slut managed to convince MC that he need to become a cuck to "fight his jealousy over her past" and that he need to "understand how her brain works". Utter crap. His jealousy over her past would not be a issue if she just told him that past is past, stopped to lie to him constantly and didn't give him reasons to be jealous in the present. Yes, it is that simple. And her "brain works" are just polite words to her desire to sleep around (really, what else could she mean by that?). MC's whimpers that "No! You'll leave me if you sleep with someone!" are just pathetic. Of course she will, because cheating wife should be kicked out of the home! The reason not to a agree are simple: healthy male does not want to share his woman. That's, it. Pure biology. And MC mentioned that he does not want to share, and she admitted that there it nothing she could said against that. Why he did not pressed the argument is beyond me.

The fact that MC let the mentally unstable girl talk himself into something obviously stupid... It's utterly break any shred of immersion left. Pity. The start was kind of good.
Yeah, swinging tag should be add instead of netorare tag, also rape tag should be added as well.
 
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Well... Damn. This has some writing. Great porn when it pops up. Involved, actual NTR characters and fucked up situations. No "teehee, this is so hot" "noo I am so devastated yet also aroused, i must fap and cry" "its okay honey I still love you but I love dick". This is an actual depiction of a busted, twisted, manipulative relationship.
 
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Well as much as I joke around here, I have to admit the writing IS pretty good. It's not hopping from one sex scene to another, there is a lot of drama and manipulation. Don't like the former, but love the latter. I want nothing more than to break Lacey's mind and turn her into a filthy manipulating slut who cheats on her husband every chance she gets to help her cope with her own trauma. She'll realize she loves her trauma as much as she hates it. She'll hate herself but loves what she does at the same time, and it tortures MC's mind :devilish: Soon she'll lose everything she holds dear, except MC who will have no choice but to admit her to a lunatic asylum for reconditioning :whistle::coffee:

Meanwhile, I'll have MC plough Mia's feisty little Latina cunt, and Veronica will discover she actually loves to be homewrecking slut behind Lacey's back. So many filthy plots it makes my midichlorians tingle with lightning :WeSmart:
 
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i found you in the crowd and am in the process of reading everything u said gonna take AWHILE couple questions u may of answered in your mountain of text one you once again praised lacey and you know my stance on lacey, but after the barty deepfake video lacey mumbles about he's (the MC) gonna find out something, what is it? was i right and she's a sex addict or is it something new that the MC doesn't know yet? did she say what it is and i missed it?

Also I think the guy talking to will is barty as he refers to the camera's being 30yrs old and well its his property.

i will have more thoughts soon i am reflecting on what i just played and have a ton of issues as per last Act once again Mia is trash
 

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i found you in the crowd and am in the process of reading everything u said gonna take AWHILE couple questions u may of answered in your mountain of text one you once again praised lacey and you know my stance on lacey, but after the barty deepfake video lacey mumbles about he's (the MC) gonna find out something, what is it? was i right and she's a sex addict or is it something new that the MC doesn't know yet? did she say what it is and i missed it?

Also I think the guy talking to will is barty as he refers to the camera's being 30yrs old and well its his property.

i will have more thoughts soon i am reflecting on what i just played and have a ton of issues as per last Act once again Mia is trash
Mountain of text???? That was a very finely crafted post, please and thank you! ;)

I never praised Act 1 Lacey per se, I might have defended some things like her fucking the dude in the Jealousy date, sure it is manipulative but MC lets her do it somewhat.

Lacey in act 2 is a VERY different beast, all my usual criticism of her is there how she abandoned MC because she wanted to, how now she is just an addict with addict behaviour etc but she acts differently now which is even juicier for me, because no matter how much she tries to be a nice little wife, her past is so damaging that their relationship has nothing to offer MC besides putting bottles of wine in her ass.

Now what I think Lacey is referring to, is the addicted and blitzed Lacey, if we want to be super negative maybe the Lacey that smiled during the gangbangs, she tells us she didn't like most of it, she was doing them for Mia and she was happy when she could please her.

Buit I am more inclined towards the addict part of herself, might be wrong tho.


Now for Barty

Barty way of talking is difficult to reconcile on how familiar voice talks to Will at the cafe, Barty was very apologeting to MC during act 1, he never lies and always keeps his promises, he also help MC with some video of Jared.
It would be very inconsistent to what happens in act 2, already fucking in MC living room is weird and difficult to reconcile.
Barty didn't send the video.

We also know Barty has some new employees, employees that know Anna and Mia, that know Erica and most of all know about Lacey's oral fixation, these are pretty personal things and while Barty could know Anna and Mia it is difficult to see how he could know the other 2 things.

The recording of Lacey's voice also doesn't match on what she told us and how Barty apologized, like, they got together a couple of times, on the last one he tried to push himself on Lacey, she told him no and sent him on his way.
He then came back to apologize mulltiple times.
Where do we put that Lacey knew he was recording her and saying hurtful things to the point she cried?

To be frank I think this Barty thing is flimsy story wise it feels glued on as a last resort to find drama, not a fan.

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So glad this game got an update, I think it's a great story a bit fucked up but good in so many ways, lots of interesting characters but I do think the MC could use some therapy but who knows maybe talking to Dianne will help as she is someone who doesn't know what really happened between the MC and Lacey yet and in the cafe she nailed Lacey almost to a tee.
 
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