> I answered to all of those, she was not free and when she found a small way to be free she realized she was gutter trash
No, you still did not provided believable scenario how Lacey could willingly (or else "corruption" is pointless) fuck random man and not MC if being with MC was one of her main goals. Only "Lacey let her do that, an abused, lonely and druggie girl ler her abuser abuse her". How? Lacey firmly told Mia that she loved MC and she was not willing to be with her. So Mia control was not absolute. But with some random guy for some reason she was willing. How does that work exactly?
If Mia's power over Lacey was greater than her devotion to MC, then she would make Lacey her own. And if not - then she couldn't force her to sleep with anyone. Simple logic.
Let's get into the moment right before Lacey agreed to have sex first time. 1) Lacey is ready for sex (goal achieved). 2) She is not spoiled yet. And please answer this exact question: Why Lacey did not go to MC at this moment?
> We are not talking about virgins, wtf, we are talking about way deeper things, being abandoned for 1460 days to go and do that, having to go back and admit that they were in a relationship and she shat all over it, having to admit that she preferred to be railed by hundreds of men while not having the time or the will to even send a text to Mc to check on him.
What is the difference? Even ordinary girls can have body count in tens and then be a responsible wife. Past is past, present is present. Of course hundreds is a lot, and hurting MC is a big deal too. But he knew she had some troubles as a child, so it's not that far fetching that she would have problems in college. He sacrificed so much already, why not just forgive her? If he claimed that he loves her, it seems like a natural thing to do. To be in a relationship he HAVE to accept her past. And she HAVE to get over her past too. Or else there is no point for them to be together.
> Jared. I guess you didn't finish act 1, funnily enough I added the same lines you are saying in my rewrite of the script.
Well, if Jared (or somebody else) said MC that he only ever groped his wife, not fucked, no way, she's too special. I wouldn't believe him. Fact is fact - WEEKS of late night "work" and "just groping" are mutually exclusive. Period.
> Please finish act 1
I doubt it. MC agreed to his wife being with another man (what's worse, without any reason). Playing a game has no point anymore, there would be no immersion.
Imagine that in the middle of TLOU1 Joel would suddenly slit Ellie's throat, then for a few minutes pondered why did he did that, and then decided to hunt some clickers for fun since he no longer had to go to fireflies. It's just insane. Game broken. Hunting clickers would be pointless.
> There is no cleaning for that, the damage is not repairable.
Hmmm.... She is a mother of 4? Infertile due to 50 abortions? AIDS? She ate MC's mom?

Hm, no that's still recoverable. Could you please tell me in a spoiler? I am curious, what would that be?
> Her obsession comes from other things that MC provides, which again I won't spoil.
Please do. I am curious, but not that curious to play a NTS game.