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Avaron1974

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I won't spoil anything for now, and I promised myself I wouldn't post in this thread anymore but...

This update is one of the worst things I have ever read in my life, and I do not mean it as a joke or as an hyperbole.

Writing and story wise it suffers from so much forced drama, characters being completely different (again), being evil for the sake of it and a "healthy" dose of american college values.

Just to give you a glimpse, in the first minutes of the update everything that defines MC and Lacey relationship in act 1 and 2 is thrown under the bus and erased with 6 lines of dialogue.

For the sake of drama the author made some characters irredeemable, for the sake of his spy story there is so much suspension of disbelief needed that it just pulls you out from anything happening.

I won't go into specifics to avoid spoilers until we get a public release, but fuck me this is one of the worst let downs I had for a while, it is a real shame, this could have been a great AVN!
Dev made it sound like they would have this great love with him having his harem on the side.

Kinda think the dev doesn't know what he wants to do and just decided to make a game about an MC going through a mental breakdown.

It's just depressing as fuck and I don't see it getting any better.

I don't think the dev will be happy until everyone hates the women and the MC jumps off the cliff.
 
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NewGuy2022

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Dev made it sound like they would have this great love with him having his harem on the side.

Kinda think the dev doesn't know what he wants to do and just decided to make a game about an MC going through a mental breakdown.

It's just depressing as fuck and I don't see it getting any better.

I don't think the dev will be happy until everyone hates the women and the MC jumps off the cliff.
I used to ask why the developer hated the MC. I don't do that anymore.

Now I ask why the developer hates the players.
 

kedewess

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I won't spoil anything for now, and I promised myself I wouldn't post in this thread anymore but...

This update is one of the worst things I have ever read in my life, and I do not mean it as a joke or as an hyperbole.

Writing and story wise it suffers from so much forced drama, characters being completely different (again), being evil for the sake of it and a "healthy" dose of american college values.

Just to give you a glimpse, in the first minutes of the update everything that defines MC and Lacey relationship in act 1 and 2 is thrown under the bus and erased with 6 lines of dialogue.

For the sake of drama the author made some characters irredeemable, for the sake of his spy story there is so much suspension of disbelief needed that it just pulls you out from anything happening.

I won't go into specifics to avoid spoilers until we get a public release, but fuck me this is one of the worst let downs I had for a while, it is a real shame, this could have been a great AVN!
Damn...
Buckle up kids, we're in the shit now
 

DeviantFun

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Look I am just gonna drop this because it is what completely ruined the story, like there is no going back.
THESE ARE HEAVY SPOILERS and will ruin your run:
The author retconned the reason why Lacey left, which were the physical part of a relationship + trying to stand on her own.
I guess he forgot and now the reason (I suspect it is taken from some posts from this thread especially from my pal Al.d) is that Lacey did't know how to love someone so she never loved MC she just needed him since she was dependant from him.
This breaks everything, all of it, the "I love MC and want to be back to him", the Mia "lessons" so she could be intimate with MC etc.
All of it loses all sense, or at least the sense that had been hammered down for 2 acts, all of what she and Mia did is now pointless, because she surely did not need gangbangs to learn how to "love" someone.

It was not about the abuse and physical touch it seems, it was about feelings, so what the fuck did we read until now? You tell me because I have no clue anymore.
 

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I didn't get it. What did the readers want? A happy ending? For the slut to continue to fuck with MC's brain? Or miraculously heal? It was perfectly clear after Act I that they had no chance of a happy ending. After that, there were only compromises where MC ended up sucking off to a greater or lesser degree.
So this post is just empty talk.

Regarding Act III, I'm still waiting for revelations from those who've already read it.
 

Lady Lydia

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Yea well like I had already predicted, Lacey is corrupt, her end goal is to corrupt the MC so she can basically return to being a slut while keeping her husband because she love him and because she feel indebted to him, so she put up with being a good little wife just long enough to decide it wasn't good enough and start trying to bring him down a path which enable her to return to the personality she held during her College days effectively speaking. To get the MC corrupt she is basically breaking him down until he is going to be numbed to everything she does and let her get away with all of it, its a method of indoctrination, now she isn't really evil, just a slut that want her husband to support her into her slutty ways. Any notions her intent was to change for the benefit of the MC is ridiculous, she tried to change so she could be palpable to him, but in truth she clearly figured out it would be more satisfying to change him instead which I believe she was been doing since before Act I.

As for what was her motivation for College, let's be real, as I and others also said before it didn't really make sense, you don't slut it up as hard as she did just to try to overcome your issues with sex. Like I had said, I believed she had done it because she wanted to forget her past, to drown herself into some form of stimulus to dull her memories. Again whatever Lacey or the Dev say is always of questionable reliability, so its not too shocking it wasn't done really in the optic of what was originally said. Now for the matter of love, it can be complicated, some people separate love from affection, personally for example I don't attribute the term 'love' to anything else than romantic love. I thing the Dev might operate a bit on a similar premise, yes Lacey felt something for the MC but it wasn't romantic love, unlike him which did feel romantic love for her, so she left so she could figure out how to be capable of romantic love so she could give him want he needed to repay him for all that he had done for her. But it doesn't mean she didn't feel deep affection for him or anything, it just mean she was too hurt by what had happened to her before to possibly be able to experience romantic love specifically.

As for the ending, its clearly another one of those shock drama cliffhangers, something to keep people hooked until the next update come up and likely resolved minutes into the next Act, its a very typical tool employed by writers like this. It doesn't mean its a good one, its sucks, just like the last minute plot twist of his previous game, which is also a shitty thing to do. I know some people seemed to have acclaimed this Dev but frankly they aren't good writers, just employ tropes and artificially developed narratives driven by the force of will of the Dev rather than by a good narrative flow. Let me guess I haven't played this Act yet, waiting for it to be available for free, but I can guess the therapist is either in on Lacey's plan and is trying to help corrupt the MC or she is in on the plot against them and she is trying to break them up.
 

kedewess

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Well fuck.
I was afraid of that but was hoping for something different.
If this romance turn to shit I'm hoping for some apocalyptical comeuppance on lacey and mia
 

Rastarambler

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probably going to get pelters for this but I personally enjoyed the episode, although I found the 'Girls Day' pretty dumb. I do think there are a lot of actions Lacey takes in the Act that are somewhat redeeming for her, and she seemed more level headed as a whole which I enjoyed. Further, I thought the addition on therapy for the MC is introduced nicely, and there seems to be the first little elements of personal development appearing as a result. I am however just treating the game as VN to casually read through, and I'm quite enjoying it as a result, without analysing writing inconsistencies & the plausibility of the characters' behaviours in any great depth. I look forward to reading all of the comments from you more well-informed commentators to pick up on issues I missed and to broaden my understanding of the story!
 

Avaron1974

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I've made excuses for Lacey. I was hoping the dev had a decent plan to go from the absolute clusterfuck she was making of her marriage and to take it to the love story he said they were going to build.

I have no more excuses.

Even I don't like her anymore.

I can no longer see how they go from this mess to an actual working relationship together.

The only way is for the MC to leave her and avoid most of the other women who weren't much better.

I get wanting to do a dramatic story before things improve but that only works if the people reading the story want to see that romance flourish.

Instead the dev has managed to create one of the most hated love interests i've ever seen in an adult game but done in a way that no redemption story would be satisfying.

The only way the MC gets a happy ending is for him to be far away from Lacey. She's practically destroyed his mental health to a point of no return.

She's broke him so badly he can barely tell what's real and what his mind is forcing him to see.

I loved the first part. I enjoyed the second part to a point but the third part is where it needed to start bringing in the happy times not go further into fucking the MC up. It's just a depressing story now. I kept going "knowing" the dev had plans for their relationship and the other girls but it's now torture porn without the gore. Constantly seeing the MC suffer and get worse with every update isn't enjoyable.

I don't see any way for that relationship to work without killing him emotionally if not literally.
 

NewGuy2022

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Interesting observations. I get the impression you and I are looking for different things here (and that's fine) but I enjoy reading about what the update did for you. Sometimes I miss things that others point out and I appreciate that.
 
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