The first two acts have a certain sense of plot, true, the developer could have reduced some repetition of discussions, but I repeat, the first two acts are consistent with the story, at least 75%, it is rare that a porn VN is praised more for the writing than for the sex scenes, but this partly explains the success of the game, true, a good part of the characters Mc and FMC are well represented, but they are not perfect when creating imaginative and paranoid images, causing the scarcity of many situations, making the two characters, very stupid, for 10% of the situations, now sorry, no offense, the third act, is a total confusion, the developer wanted to emphasize the mentally ill side of the characters too much, in the third act it is a mediocre confusing scheme of the actions of all the characters, it goes without saying, even that it could be created like this, to then wait for the 4th act, only the future will tell us the truth, now, the real sore point, for me, the ending, the developer wanted to leave us with a twist Epic, well, no, if the third act's structure had been different, perhaps that ending would have had a sense of mystery, but I immediately understood what MC was imagining, because dear DEv, even the sickest person you want FMC to be, in less than 24 hours, could not go from the author of the painting of love, to the slut who wants a divorce. The real sick one is MC, because she loses and splits her reality. The third act lowered my personal rating, from an epic 10, to a 6. With all due respect, for the great initial potential.