- Aug 15, 2018
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I agree that it didn't appear the protagonist intended to break her mind, but he still did it, and appeared to only regret it because it might come back to bite him in the ass like with the hobo in Baltimore. Thus I lost sympathy towards the protagonist and it damaged my connection to him because as a player I had no choice in that outcome. As a player I learned my lesson regarding employing too much magic in those situations by losing the opportunity to drench Molly's lovely little thot face my second playthrough, I wouldn't have made the same mistake again.True there is a bit of that going both sides and may well be the underlying reason of Sarah's behavior and annoyance with having to teach them. Still that does not mean she is making a friend of MC that way or is helping him. Hence why he reacts as he does and I do think he might have gone further as he intended ( I thought he just intended to teach her a lesson and not to break her mind. I might be wrong about that though and feel free to correct me Droid if so ), but for those reasons does regret it less that he misjudged his power use as he might have done in another case.
Sarah might well have left there with with my handprint on her ass to transmit in no uncertain terms exactly how I felt about academy authorities trying to encourage the recasting of consensual sexual encounters as some sort of harassment or rape, but she'd have gotten the magic she needed to stay youthful and alluring like she wanted with her mind intact because I prefer her that way too.
I disagree that she is not helping the MC, for one thing he admitted to himself she's a fine teacher and you pick up points attending her classes and while I'm certainly not going to argue with the creator regarding her motives, her homework assignments amounted to giving the MC several free strip shows starring the lovely young Emily with a progression to VIP lounge style 'lapdances.' Men pay good money for those with less enchanting performers than that lithe little elfmaiden and the vast majority have no difficulty remembering the rules of 'look but don't touch' or 'touch but not too much' or 'have fun but stop when she says so' and know enough not to get too emotionally involved.
If these rules get broken there's someone like me (or the MC according to his backstory) to enforce them and I can tell you from personal experience most all who do break them are invariably dead drunk and by and large feel terrible about it the next day when they sober up. Thus I cannot countenance the assumption she purposed his demise by stripping Emiy naked and dumping her into his lap. If he has that little control of himself he deserves to be weeded out of the evoker ranks and even if so, her methods were less unpleasant than Thor 'breaking his leg' and throwing him to the wolves.
At any rate I really love the game and story I merely offered some honest feedback regarding both what I liked and disliked. Sarah with her mind broken and up on attempted murder charges, her (mundane) life ruined by the MC, and his relative indifference to it, is amongst the latter. However I realize the story isn't over and was happy to see she's returning but now have some trepidation as it appeared to me the creator has little sympathy for her, but perhaps that is misdirection--I'll stay tuned.
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