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Well quite short 10 minutes maybe (looks like a demo), the story seems interesting and the models look really good, maybe some detail on the mc's face compared to the body.
But the biggest problem, as others say, would be the translation, it is the one that needs the most work, although the story can be understood, there are several errors in the writing and the most repeated I think was confusing Him/her, he/she, or for example call the vice director Sir when she is a woman, I think Mr (for men), Mrs (for married women) Miss (for unmarried women) and Ms (for married and unmarried women) are better.
On the other hand maybe some of the animations when a character is introduced or some action is shown, such as a character running would be better with 1 or 2 seconds more, if not the animation is cut too soon and is not appreciated.
Now this was quite funny, for someone who claimed to know nothing, she knew a lot...
Good luck.
But the biggest problem, as others say, would be the translation, it is the one that needs the most work, although the story can be understood, there are several errors in the writing and the most repeated I think was confusing Him/her, he/she, or for example call the vice director Sir when she is a woman, I think Mr (for men), Mrs (for married women) Miss (for unmarried women) and Ms (for married and unmarried women) are better.
On the other hand maybe some of the animations when a character is introduced or some action is shown, such as a character running would be better with 1 or 2 seconds more, if not the animation is cut too soon and is not appreciated.
Now this was quite funny, for someone who claimed to know nothing, she knew a lot...
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Good luck.
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