- Apr 4, 2018
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So, I'm a little confused. This story started off wonderfully in depth. It moved at a slower, but perfect pace. Tremendous amount of emotional buildup and led up to the cave scene which was honestly just a fucking amazing piece of work. I absolutely loved everything about it. The game teased you both emotionally and visually which led to a virtually perfect payoff scene with your friend. Then the dad getting ill and having to retrieve the flower was also really fun. Then the game just completely changed. The storyline just stopped. I mean there was no story at all. It was just the MC going from girl to girl to girl and having sex with all of them. No buildup, no emotional attachment, just non-stop sex. There's nothing wrong with that and as a fellow game creator I would never fault someone for making the game they wanted, but... I guess I don't understand why. All of the tension, romance and buildup just stopped. The characters all changed personalities overnight and the amazing world building just came to a screeching halt. Maybe the game is more popular now because it's what people want. Again, nothing wrong with that at all. But I just felt this started off as literally one of the most fun fantasy visual erotic novels I've ever played. But now it's just how quickly can we go from sex scene to sex scene. I do wish you the best and your renders/artwork are immaculate. Sorry for being so negative. I wish you every success going forward.