VN Ren'Py Lovephobia [v0.40] [Kuviragames]

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I'm confused as to why MC has the avamad exchange on the path where he's been totally committed to her, this seems backwards.

Is it all supposed to be a dream sequence? It doesn't make sense, out of the blue she's angry (i mean I guess there's him changing her background to a dick but thats mild) - and taunting him about hooking up with simon. Not that I'd mind that in a different context evidenced by my sharing sig but that just felt really out of the blue and random.

 

[asahibito]

Shouldn't the Zuni choice below depend on the gohomeearly variable? Otherwise choosing it at this scene does not make sense. It seems the logic of this whole texting scene needs to be reworked. Probably don't need a choice menu but route according to variables.

    menu day4wheretogo:
        
        "Read Ava Message" if meetava1 == True:
            jump day4_2_avamessage #block of code to run
        "Read Zuni Message":
            jump day4_2_zunimessage #block of code to run

 

[asahibito]

As far as I can tell zunigame no longer exists so the 3rd choice below will never occur.

menu day5girlsphone1:
        
        set day5girlsphone

        "Text Zoe" if interestzoe == True:
            jump textzoeday5 #block of code to run
        "Text Ava":
            jump textavaday5 #block of code to run
        "Read Zuni" if zunigame == True:
            jump readzuniday5 #block of code to run

 

[shavone1]

This was very enjoyable! The girls look great, very natural realistic look. The romance is portrayed well and the temptation of other love interest is always fun to play with. I think your writing is good. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

 

[asahibito]

Some additional bugs.

keyword scene is duplicated.

mc "But I still think she should know."
    scene scene 7_1_5zoesecret
    mc "Listen Zoe.. My mom specializes in trauma therapy.

interestlinda variable does not exist and is never set.

    mc "Cheeeeeeeese."
    if interestlinda ==  True:
        ln "We look so good together."

keyword scene is duplicated.

    jm "DIVE BOMB!"
    scene scene 8_2_3 with dissolve
    mc "Wait, what?"

The haha is too long for the phone screen.

mc_nvl "First! Hahahahahahahahaha! I totally forgot."

Wrong sayer. Should be mc.

    an "Not at all. I totally support your way of driving."

Not such scene image.

label day7_1:
    scene 7_1_1

There are some other typo type errors but the above are the majority of the gameplay ones.

 

[Kuviragames]

I enjoyed the game for what it is so far, could it be better ? sure, but you're actually trying.
Now I had an issue, where I get an error screen if I rename the MC to anything containing the letter G, had to copy/paste the name I wanted to be able to to put it ingame.

That's odd. I tried several combinations with G but it always worked.

 

[Kuviragames]

That's fair, I saw your reasoning above and I get your reasoning, but yes my main point of contention is the lack of context. You have a good place for the MC to mention it in the car with Lisa. That's where it probably should have been. Just a simple sentence when he talks about their relationship that they lost all their firsts to each other.
With that added context my disagreement disappears. Because that gives context to their relationship that otherwise the player would not be told about. No matter the route you are on.
When you do it or if you do it in a different way doesn't matter really. That's up to you.
The story is yours to tell, that's just a massive plot hole I felt needed to be addressed, to explain why someone would view it the way that other guy did as a very negative interaction. I just have 2 different saves one where I avoid ava and one where I don't. Of course I have a few more with different combinations of choices as well.
I look forward to everything else you come up with. It's not easy keeping track of everything and making the story cohesive when you have so many different routes and choices.
I prefer to just pick a route. Ava on/ntr off or Ava on/ntr on for example and I don't have to navigate choices to end up seeing everything. Makes things so much easier on both the player and the dev.
Not fully a kinetic novel but close.

You are right. In the car with Lisa is a good idea. OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHH MAAAAAAAAN!! That's not just a good place it is a perfect place. Except that people who are using save files not gonna see it.
Anyways you Sir are a hero and that is exactly where I gonna put that. Thank you.

I would not call it a massiv plot hole. Sure if you play the game just like brain off and holding skip from time to time then yes a lot context is missing. But I think there are still enough hints about their relationship. But I agree now that for suddenly eating ava out it might be confusing and that the extra scene will definitely help and make it much better. Again thank you.

 

[Kuviragames]

I'm confused as to why MC has the avamad exchange on the path where he's been totally committed to her, this seems backwards.

Is it all supposed to be a dream sequence? It doesn't make sense, out of the blue she's angry (i mean I guess there's him changing her background to a dick but thats mild) - and taunting him about hooking up with simon. Not that I'd mind that in a different context evidenced by my sharing sig but that just felt really out of the blue and random.

I honestly had to check it myself because I am so confused with all the comments I got since the last release.
If you are on Zoe's path something completely different happens. What happens in that scene is "MC snoop around her
phone -> MC gets a bit jealous -> MC eats her out -> MC wakes up in the night but Ava is gone. -> MC gets home and thinks about Simon and gets jealous again -> MC does something stupid -> Ava gets mad. -> Next day one more cute scene.
That shows that even in a relationship you do stupid things or just between best friends. At first that all should be optional but I had to go so many different paths that I reduced it to how it is now.

 

[Kuviragames]

Shouldn't the Zuni choice below depend on the gohomeearly variable? Otherwise choosing it at this scene does not make sense. It seems the logic of this whole texting scene needs to be reworked. Probably don't need a choice menu but route according to variables.

    menu day4wheretogo:
       
        "Read Ava Message" if meetava1 == True:
            jump day4_2_avamessage #block of code to run
        "Read Zuni Message":
            jump day4_2_zunimessage #block of code to run

You are totally right. I changed it to:


label day4_2_1:
if meetava1 == True:
jump day4_2_avamessage #block of code to run

else:
jump day4_2_zunimessage #block of code to run

Test went well. Thank you.

 

[Kuviragames]

As far as I can tell zunigame no longer exists so the 3rd choice below will never occur.

menu day5girlsphone1:
       
        set day5girlsphone

        "Text Zoe" if interestzoe == True:
            jump textzoeday5 #block of code to run
        "Text Ava":
            jump textavaday5 #block of code to run
        "Read Zuni" if zunigame == True:
            jump readzuniday5 #block of code to run

Thank you again. The variable still exist but it never gets "True" so you are right it never occurs. I changed it to:

menu day5girlsphone1:

set day5girlsphone
"Text Zoe" if interestzoe == True:
jump textzoeday5 #block of code to run
"Text Ava":
jump textavaday5 #block of code to run
"Read Zuni" if interestzuni == True:
jump readzuniday5 #block of code to run

 

[Kuviragames]

Some additional bugs.

keyword scene is duplicated.

mc "But I still think she should know."
    scene scene 7_1_5zoesecret
    mc "Listen Zoe.. My mom specializes in trauma therapy.

interestlinda variable does not exist and is never set.

    mc "Cheeeeeeeese."
    if interestlinda ==  True:
        ln "We look so good together."

keyword scene is duplicated.

    jm "DIVE BOMB!"
    scene scene 8_2_3 with dissolve
    mc "Wait, what?"

The haha is too long for the phone screen.

mc_nvl "First! Hahahahahahahahaha! I totally forgot."

Wrong sayer. Should be mc.

    an "Not at all. I totally support your way of driving."

Not such scene image.

label day7_1:
    scene 7_1_1

There are some other typo type errors but the above are the majority of the gameplay ones.

Fixed all. Can I give you a medal or something? Thank you very much.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I honestly had to check it myself because I am so confused with all the comments I got since the last release.
If you are on Zoe's path something completely different happens. What happens in that scene is "MC snoop around her
phone -> MC gets a bit jealous -> MC eats her out -> MC wakes up in the night but Ava is gone. -> MC gets home and thinks about Simon and gets jealous again -> MC does something stupid -> Ava gets mad. -> Next day one more cute scene.
That shows that even in a relationship you do stupid things or just between best friends. At first that all should be optional but I had to go so many different paths that I reduced it to how it is now.

I guess that makes sense, it just seemed weird that out of all the combinations and variables, the one where you ignore all the other girls and focus on Ava gets that scene, and the ones where you IGNORE Ava and focus on others you DONT get that scene. I hope my words make sense.

 

[Kuviragames]

I guess that makes sense, it just seemed weird that out of all the combinations and variables, the one where you ignore all the other girls and focus on Ava gets that scene, and the ones where you IGNORE Ava and focus on others you DONT get that scene. I hope my words make sense.

Maybe my mind is just broken. It only depends if you are on the Zoe path. She is the only variable here because of her MC does not fall asleep.

 

[Kuviragames]

This was very enjoyable! The girls look great, very natural realistic look. The romance is portrayed well and the temptation of other love interest is always fun to play with. I think your writing is good. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thank you very much. I am really happy to hear that.

 

[asahibito]

Walkthrough mod updated for v0.36fix.

Walkthrough needed a rework due to the large scale revision to the game mechanics.
As there are some gameplay logic errors in 0.36fix, this walkthrough update is considered temporary.

I do not like popup savename dialog box added in v0.35 so the mod the disables that feature and retained the save name method the mod already had.

Download:
F95zone -

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[asahibito]

Fixed all. Can I give you a medal or something? Thank you very much.

You're welcome. No medal needed, I see it as the least I could do for being able to play the game here and make the walkthrough mod for it. Though, I would welcome the opportunity to beta test any release and get a head start on updating the mod...

 

[Kuviragames]

You're welcome. No medal needed, I see it as the least I could do for being able to play the game here and make the walkthrough mod for it. Though, I would welcome the opportunity to beta test any release and get a head start on updating the mod...

That should be no problem.

 

[diolo]

Male protagonist

really? ... seems very feminine to me

 

[Tadpol]

You are right. In the car with Lisa is a good idea. OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHH MAAAAAAAAN!! That's not just a good place it is a perfect place. Except that people who are using save files not gonna see it.
Anyways you Sir are a hero and that is exactly where I gonna put that. Thank you.

Nice start.

Eventually you realize that things have already happened between the MC and Ava, but it comes a bit late, and indeed the lack of context creates moments where you wonder what's going on, for example the scene where she's playing with his cock in the morning, before they're “officially” together.

So yes, it's a good idea to put a little explanation of the MC/Ava relationship at the start of the game.

 

[Twelvemonkey]

I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.
File "game/story/day7.rpy", line 116: expected 'image_name_component' not found.
    scene scene 7_1_5zoesecret
          ^
File "game/story/day8.rpy", line 351: expected 'image_name_component' not found.
    scene scene 8_2_3 with dissolve
          ^
Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 8.2.3.24061702
Mon Jan 13 14:49:01 2025

How do i solve this?