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But yes if you want to avoid any kind of that feelings you should skip my game/AVN.- Thread starter Kuviragames
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But yes if you want to avoid any kind of that feelings you should skip my game/AVN.wait that doesnt make any sense, someone extremely scared of love wouldn't be a whore, they'd be a loner. Whores find and give love wayyyyy too often.
Joshy92
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I don't like the word whore. It's demeaning to women.
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The protagonist can have sex with Lisa. And she has a boyfriend. So it's basically netori.
NTR is a difficult topic for a lot of people. So I wanted to make sure that people are aware that it will contain NTR. Currently like ZairusV mentioned the NTR tag is for Lisa. Because of the Pictures on her phone at the beginning and because of the "Netori"aspect.
But Ava will have an NTR route too.
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Do you mean like an actual NTR route? Because netori is usually never put under the NTR tag on this site.
Oh I see. Something I didn't know yet.
Yes Ava will have an actual NTR route. But not like in the most NTR focused games where the LI is constantly having sex with someone else. Big drama incoming on that route!
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I know the tagging system can be so annoying at times. They are planning on brining in tags for netori & netorase, but who knows when that will happen.
Anyway thanks for the info dude I appreciate it.
Specially when I do look for NTR games and ending up with NTS games I feel so annoyed.
Sure thing. Maybe I should create an F.A.Q on the front page.
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Really solid game, I have enjoyed it and am excited to see what comes next.
My one suggestion is maybe some minor choices that don't change much but dialogue or maybe 1-2 extra renders. You make a good amount of choices early, then it feels like you are in rails, with not many choices. I think maybe something like in bed with Ava chance to grab butt or boob, won't go anywhere, but will add a little something and playful banter. Or you are getting ready to leave house, and have a choice to say something, won't change story buts adds a little flair.
I suggest this cause I loved having choice, and later on it feels more kinetic, so even just small meaningless choices to add some flair and keep players engaged. But its just a suggestion, you can do what you want and I'll respect your decision.
Overall really good game though, keep up the great work.
My one suggestion is maybe some minor choices that don't change much but dialogue or maybe 1-2 extra renders. You make a good amount of choices early, then it feels like you are in rails, with not many choices. I think maybe something like in bed with Ava chance to grab butt or boob, won't go anywhere, but will add a little something and playful banter. Or you are getting ready to leave house, and have a choice to say something, won't change story buts adds a little flair.
I suggest this cause I loved having choice, and later on it feels more kinetic, so even just small meaningless choices to add some flair and keep players engaged. But its just a suggestion, you can do what you want and I'll respect your decision.
Overall really good game though, keep up the great work.
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Joshy92
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Honestly it's probably best to keep the netorare tag for the other stuff anyway, you know how certain people can get on this site lolSpecially when I do look for NTR games and ending up with NTS games I feel so annoyed.
Sure thing. Maybe I should create an F.A.Q on the front page.
Thank you very much. I think that is actually a good idea. I don't want the game to feel to much like an kinetic novel.
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Nah, don't bother with those - unless you attach some sort of "worth" to these choices, they are a waste of dev time.Thank you very much. I think that is actually a good idea. I don't want the game to feel to much like an kinetic novel.
Every choice offered in a VN should "lead" to the story changing in some way, shape, or form.
I think there is no harm in doing some minor extra scenes. For example I am currently working on a birthday scene. And you will have to choice to start singing happy birthday or not. For the story it doesn't matter but I still think it's a nice touch.
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It isn't a tag thing at all. I just figured to make a silly joke duderinoDon't judge a book by it's cover.
Keep doing what makes you happy! It takes more effort to be rude lol.
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Okay so full disclosure I legit just came here bc I saw an opportunity for a cheap neutral~ish joke bc at the end of the day there's no such thing as comedy if somebody doesn't get kicked in the dick but for real I am neutral on the overarching never-ending-war subject.
XYZ I DL'd the yadig bc after a bit of thinking like, "damn the Dev understood that I meant no harm."
I wasn't even gonna try this bc of just 8 animations.
However.
Avagrind1 flat out looks weird bc the camera is pointed straight down the cock hole.
EatoutAva could be a little more in the air and pointed at an angle towards that invisible pillow. Would be nice to see some sideboob or cleavage.
GrindingLisa1 looks like a springboard made out 'pain for pleasure'.
HotelSex fast&slow shows one fullish cheek and maybe a total of half of the one on the right. No thigh, no sideboob, no hair throwing. Also dude's just kinda sitting there like the dead guy in Clerks.
LisaGrind2 again the camera is in direct eye contact with the penis head. Hot dogging / grinding is the perfect position where 'less is more'. Show titties jiggling or some ass~slapping.
LisaSex1 is a perfect example of a camera angle where there is almost nothing shown and something I have picked a bone with in a few other threads. We see one female boob and one man butt.
LisaDoggy2 is a solid angle! the timing of the female & male animations could be tweaked a bit. Like right now it straight up looks like she reacts the 100% dicking like a robot afterthought of, "oh, skin contact? I can compute those".
If this is your first project, high fkn five!
XYZ I DL'd the yadig bc after a bit of thinking like, "damn the Dev understood that I meant no harm."
I wasn't even gonna try this bc of just 8 animations.
However.
Avagrind1 flat out looks weird bc the camera is pointed straight down the cock hole.
EatoutAva could be a little more in the air and pointed at an angle towards that invisible pillow. Would be nice to see some sideboob or cleavage.
GrindingLisa1 looks like a springboard made out 'pain for pleasure'.
HotelSex fast&slow shows one fullish cheek and maybe a total of half of the one on the right. No thigh, no sideboob, no hair throwing. Also dude's just kinda sitting there like the dead guy in Clerks.
LisaGrind2 again the camera is in direct eye contact with the penis head. Hot dogging / grinding is the perfect position where 'less is more'. Show titties jiggling or some ass~slapping.
LisaSex1 is a perfect example of a camera angle where there is almost nothing shown and something I have picked a bone with in a few other threads. We see one female boob and one man butt.
LisaDoggy2 is a solid angle! the timing of the female & male animations could be tweaked a bit. Like right now it straight up looks like she reacts the 100% dicking like a robot afterthought of, "oh, skin contact? I can compute those".
If this is your first project, high fkn five!
I totally agree with the animations. It's just a giant pain in the ass to create them. Preview is not fluid and rendering takes several hours and if you realize a mistake you can render it again. Getting a fluid in/out animation without the dick bugging out is in a lagging preview window.. well annoying as hell. My PC probably can't handle that well I guess or I missing something crucial.