First of all don't worry. I am happy with any kind of feedback as long at is written with respect.I don't want to discourage you, but even though it's version 0.5, there is almost no content. These version numbers are often misleading (not just for your game, but in general). Judging from the version number, the game will contain 22 days and will be short. Otherwise the numbering is wrong. If your game or story is not going to be short, it would be good to fix the numbering.
Other than that, the story looks good. If there will be NTR in the story, please make it skippable and indicate where it is NTR content. NTR feels extremely unpleasant...
The initial release was 2 playable days and version 0.10. Since then I go upwards by one.
I don't plan to do Lovephobia for 100000 years like the big ones. Maybe it's gonna be shorter than 22 days maybe a bit longer. But I am indeed round about in the half to where I wanna go.
After Lovephobia I want to create other games and maybe come back to Lovephobia with fresh ideas and some years in the future. I don't want to drag the game into the Infinity while struggling coming up with new ideas every update just to keep it going.
Thank you very much for giving it a try and for your comment. And I am happy to hear that you kinda liked it overall.