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Seeing how sweet and dedicated to the MC Ava and Zoe are I keep imagining a polyamorous threesome. No sex between the sisters (no incest!) but both are partners to the MC, living together and sharing "their man".

A guy can dream, innit? :love:

Honestly my MC doesn't really want to hurt either one of them by deciding for / against one. And in return hurting the other sister as well in the process … :eek:
 

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Seeing how sweet and dedicated to the MC Ava and Zoe are I keep imagining a polyamorous threesome. No sex between the sisters (no incest!) but both are partners to the MC, living together and sharing "their man".

A guy can dream, innit? :love:

Honestly my MC doesn't really want to hurt either one of them by deciding for / against one. And in return hurting the other sister as well in the process … :eek:
u forgot their mother Linda too lol
 
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Seeing how sweet and dedicated to the MC Ava and Zoe are I keep imagining a polyamorous threesome. No sex between the sisters (no incest!) but both are partners to the MC, living together and sharing "their man".

A guy can dream, innit? :love:

Honestly my MC doesn't really want to hurt either one of them by deciding for / against one. And in return hurting the other sister as well in the process … :eek:
Well good that you don't need to decide. :D There is enough room for ava and zoe. Just the living together thing.. he won't move out in the few days that are left until the game is done.
 

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Another nice update, I really love your VN, it very well told. Ava and Zoe are so lovely, also like how naughty his sister and her friends are. I wonder one thing, are there any signature tags for your VN, would love to add them to my name. Looking forward to next update already.
 
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Oh yes, good idea. MC movies in with them and has his little harem with those 3. :D
I think Linda have little crush on mc,but don t want to admit lol i remember the scene when was drunk,she come to mc and took his dick in her hand.She said it is a mistake,but pretty sure isn t one.Better she get ride of her hubby and make mc the man of the house :devilish:
 
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Another nice update, I really love your VN, it very well told. Ava and Zoe are so lovely, also like how naughty his sister and her friends are. I wonder one thing, are there any signature tags for your VN, would love to add them to my name. Looking forward to next update already.
actually it is the opposite zoe is the shy sister,maybe because her past relation.Ava is more naughty and playful sister.Not sure to which friend u are refering,lisa is nympho for sure
 

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actually it is the opposite zoe is the shy sister,maybe because her past relation.Ava is more naughty and playful sister.Not sure to which friend u are refering,lisa is nympho for sure
I said Ava and Zoe are lovely, the mc sister i was talking about naughty, as obvious she got herself in some sort trouble again, and her friends no better, one was almost raped and the other well is just an easy one.
 
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Nah, not in this case.
She'd be a great fling, a fuck-buddy so to speak but nothing serious.

A&Z OTOH are keepers - even more so if MC could keep them both as in "they both know and approve".

Death by cuteness :LOL:
nah he care of the 3 equally,so no fuckbuddy.Plus since she keeping teasing about sex,and she is loney because her hubby dont care about her need.I still thinking she developpted a connection with mc
 
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Nah, not in this case.
She'd be a great fling, a fuck-buddy so to speak but nothing serious.

A&Z OTOH are keepers - even more so if MC could keep them both as in "they both know and approve".

Death by cuteness :LOL:
what it is a donor? u support all devs game? lol
 

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Another nice update, I really love your VN, it very well told. Ava and Zoe are so lovely, also like how naughty his sister and her friends are. I wonder one thing, are there any signature tags for your VN, would love to add them to my name. Looking forward to next update already.
Thank you very much. There are no signatures tags yet. I will create some along the next update. Which will be out in 1 or 2 weeks.
 

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nah he care of the 3 equally,so no fuckbuddy.Plus since she keeping teasing about sex,and she is loney because her hubby dont care about her need.I still thinking she developpted a connection with mc
He also cares for her but in a different way - same as her attitude towards him.

A&Z really truly love him (on the love path) whereas Linda is more like a (albeit motherly) cougar.

She has seen him grow up, even helped raise him along w/ her own kids but alas - she doesn't see him as an equal partner.

He has now grown up, he is "cute", has a huge dick and may serve to fill a void (pardon the pun - SCNR) left by her absent husband but that's about it. No basis whatsoever for a "real" partnership, an IRL "couple".
 

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I didn t play the NTR,just read posts.Too bad u can t have sex with other girls on love path,not fan of mc cheating vs fmc cheating.
I wonder if on cheating path he will fuck zuni,her brother fuck mc sis it is gonna be weird situation lol
 

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But for me personally I don't see the MC as a white knight
Arriving just at the right time and saving the damsel in distress was such a deus ex machinae white knight move, it just put him in the white knight category for me.
I don't mind NTR but I genuinely don't think it fits in with Ava's (awesome name by the way) character. She's completely into the MC, her cheating on him doesn't make sense.
Yes, the dev stated that the development of the characters and story don't match with his original idea of NTR anymore, and that's fine. He shouldn't shoehorn anything in the story that doesn't fit.
This is not about what can work in an NTR story. It's about what will work in this story.
If I wrote this story, I would insert an antagonist, however, I don't, so what works in this story is up to the dev and he already stated that NTR will only happen if MC cheats; if at all: tbh, I can't see Ava actively and willingly hurting MC in this way, so maybe there won't even be "counter cheating".
Like you're coming up with examples that are ignoring the characters themselves
I think for good NTR to work, you have to dive deep into the personalities of the characters and my examples (exploiting kindness, guilt tripping, caring for somebody else, being attracted to a "copy" or exploring other desires with the opposite of a nice guy) were aimed at Ava. So this idea that she would never cheat on him because she is so much into him; this personality trait could be countered by these flaws. But, as already stated, it's not my story, so these examples and the direction might not work with what the dev has in mind.
But even then, your examples given are just for Ava and they shaky. It doesn't even include the rest of what you asked for
Yes, well, Ava would obviously be the hardest part. The rest of the cast could follow a similar pattern. The amount of harem games should make it obvious that "One guy to rule them all" is not such an alien and far fetched concept.
 
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