VN Ren'Py Lovephobia [v0.80v4] [Kuviragames]

[Dessolos]

Well... I'm nobody and in no position to make decisions but I think any kind of cheating by Ava is a big mistake. It seems to go completely against her character. She wouldn't cheat "by mistake (situational)" or out of desire and if she's doing as "payback" I don't see her doing that either. Breaking up with the MC and going with someone else seems much more likely.

I'm going to reiterate. I think Ava cheating under any circumstances taints this title. Right now it's loved because of the MC and Ava's relationship. Some guy fucking up and cheating is believable. Ava? It's not believable and writing the story in such a way that she is a cheater completely ruins her character and changes the entire vibe of the AVN.

Just an opinion, no shade on an author for writing how he or she likes. Peace.

I see both sides. I think it is believable and not. Just depends how it is handled. Cause I get the feeling Ava might be someone that can act on impulse from time to time without thinking. So I can see something she finds out about and just acts without thinking about it clearly. The issue I see with her potentially cheating is with who? I can't see anyone being a candidate for it cause I feel it would have to be someone she is rather friendly with cause I cant see it happening with just anyone when it happens.

 

[NadaMucho]

I see both sides. I think it is believable and not. Just depends how it is handled. Cause I get the feeling Ava might be someone that can act on impulse from time to time without thinking. So I can see something she finds out about and just acts without thinking about it clearly. The issue I see with her potentially cheating is with who? I can't see anyone being a candidate for it cause I feel it would have to be someone she is rather friendly with cause I cant see it happening with just anyone when it happens.

Yo Dess. How you doing brother?

From my view if she cheats on any path that means she's got the potential inside her, even if another path doesn't go that way. It changes my view of this title from a "pure love" type of thing to bad situation just waiting to happen. But I totally respect other views, especially the author. I can tell you that if that cheat stuff appears in a future update, I'll stop reading.

 

[NadaMucho]

Never to late for a little bit of Zoe. This is a really great render. What the position shows and hides. The contract of the stockings. Positions of the feet, legs and hands give such an image of a very sexy girl BEING very sexy without actually knowing it. Five star.

 

[Kuviragames]

Never to late for a little bit of Zoe. This is a really great render. What the position shows and hides. The contract of the stockings. Positions of the feet, legs and hands give such an image of a very sexy girl BEING very sexy without actually knowing it. Five star.

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Thank you. The only thing I see are all the mistakes I did/things I would do differently now in that picture.

 

[Dessolos]

Thank you. The only thing I see are all the mistakes I did/things I would do differently now in that picture.

like how she isn't getting a headpat

 

[NadaMucho]

Thank you. The only thing I see are all the mistakes I did/things I would do differently now in that picture.

I can honestly say it's one of my favorite panels in the whole title. I can't see a single flaw but perhaps because everything you did right in this image draws the eye so strongly that any mistakes aren't even noticed. Even the fabric of the chair is the same as my mid-century recliner I have here at home.

 

[Dessolos]

Yo Dess. How you doing brother?

just realized I forgot to reply been killing zombies but im doing good giving Kuvira a hard time here and there , playing video games etc. Speaking of I haven't gotten a bonk in a while might have to make a dumbass Ava post sometime to see if I get 1 out of Kuvira

 

[Kuviragames]

just realized I forgot to reply been killing zombies but im doing good giving Kuvira a hard time here and there , playing video games etc. Speaking of I haven't gotten a bonk in a while might have to make a dumbass Ava post sometime to see if I get 1 out of Kuvira

There I create a signature with a noseboob and you thinking about a dumbass post.

 

[Finuee]

Never to late for a little bit of Zoe. This is a really great render. What the position shows and hides. The contract of the stockings. Positions of the feet, legs and hands give such an image of a very sexy girl BEING very sexy without actually knowing it. Five star.

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You can really tell how much attention to detail Kuvi puts in the renders. The devil is in the details, and LP's renders really have all those details right.

 

[Dessolos]

There I create a signature with a noseboob and you thinking about a dumbass post.

im always thinking about being a dumbass but nah too much effort to get a bonk unless someone in the other thread gets me going

 

[Kuviragames]

im always thinking about being a dumbass but nah too much effort to get a bonk unless someone in the other thread gets me going

There you get a few for free!

 

[Elduriel]

The issue I see with her potentially cheating is with who?

she looked close/friendly with the dude we saw when going through her phone, maybe that one?

 

[Kuviragames]

she looked close/friendly with the dude we saw when going through her phone, maybe that one?

Wrong

 

[Dessolos]

Wrong

or is he right we know you won't tell us!

 

[Kuviragames]

or is he right we know you won't tell us!

 

[Elduriel]

Wrong

BBC here we go

 

[Kuviragames]

BBC here we go

 

[MiltonPowers]

or is he right we know you won't tell us!

Hahaha - what's the information worth?

(Joking, he hasn't told me yet, and I would never betray the sacred trust anyway ).

 

[Dessolos]

you got the wrong BBC

 

[Maviarab]

Well... I'm nobody and in no position to make decisions but I think any kind of cheating by Ava is a big mistake. It seems to go completely against her character. She wouldn't cheat "by mistake (situational)" or out of desire and if she's doing as "payback" I don't see her doing that either. Breaking up with the MC and going with someone else seems much more likely.

I'm going to reiterate. I think Ava cheating under any circumstances taints this title. Right now it's loved because of the MC and Ava's relationship. Some guy fucking up and cheating is believable. Ava? It's not believable and writing the story in such a way that she is a cheater completely ruins her character and changes the entire vibe of the AVN.

Just an opinion, no shade on an author for writing how he or she likes. Peace.

The main reason I'm invested....we already know from Kuvira she does it without knowing about the MC's indiscretion....how he going to do that is top of my interest list...very curious how he's gonna pull this one off.

Right now it's loved because of the MC and Ava's relationship.

Not from me...I actually dislike her her the most in the whole story. But then I've have had a gf just like her and personally cannot stand that personality/dynamic type. I must be the only one here who isn't actually keen on her. Zoe a million time better than Ava.