VN Ren'Py Lucid [v0.5] [MissFit]

[Simpgor]

I would have to disagree with this. You make it sound weird, but that was the first time the MC encountered his enemies that are out to get him, and this is in a dangerous situation. I didn't find it weird at all. I guess it's just a difference in opinions. I played tons of porn games already and this is one of the good ones story wise. My only problem is the really early parts, but it's not that big of a deal if you're playing the latest updates.

Why did you (as the reader) think that they were mentioning checking their eyes in the first place? Isnt it mentioned in game that the eyes are how lune are identified? Either way the larger issue is that in the span of a few seconds despite nothing changing the MC suddenly goes from "i have no feelings about these bank robbers trying to check my eyes" to "oh shit these bank robbers asking to check my eyes must be looking for a lune!" why did he not react like that the first time?

Maybe the overall story is better but a lot of the moment to moment stuff is nothing special and the stuff that goes "beyond" the average porn game story tends to not hold up to scruitny

 

[RammingRam]

Why did you (as the reader) think that they were mentioning checking their eyes in the first place? Isnt it mentioned in game that the eyes are how lune are identified? Either way the larger issue is that in the span of a few seconds despite nothing changing the MC suddenly goes from "i have no feelings about these bank robbers trying to check my eyes" to "oh shit these bank robbers asking to check my eyes must be looking for a lune!" why did he not react like that the first time?

Maybe the overall story is better but a lot of the moment to moment stuff is nothing special and the stuff that goes "beyond" the average porn game story tends to not hold up to scruitny

The feeling I got from it is the realization hit late because it's his first encounter with them and he's probably thinking of other things in that situation. I wouldn't actually know how it was written so that's just my interpretation. Tbh, I don't really remember the earlier parts that well anymore. I just don't remember it being that kind of weird. I remember that the pacing is kind of off during that part, but like I mentioned, the earlier parts could be better.

 

[Darius567]

This game is promising and anyways when we will get a wt mod?

 

[LowLevelLesser]

Good story but I'm not seeing any choices that really matter (just the typical "do you want scene or not?" kind).

 

[trauts]

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[Gexiz]

Very good game... The story is interesting and the truth is that I didn't think the game would be so long being 0.5, but it's extremely long, I've taken maybe 8h and I still haven't finished it. At the moment I'm really liking it. I will continue to play and look forward to the next update