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What kind of conversations is this guy having with this person and how are they really moving the story forward/providing entertainment? Also, why is kicking a dude in the nuts supposed to be funny? Is it funny to joke about kicking a woman in the privates? She seems to be always mildly annoyed with the MC, is that supposed to be funny?
I'm not deeply offended or anything, I'm just wondering about the thought process behind this character, this humor, and where this story is going. It seems to idle a bit into nonsense.
The premise of this game is interesting, an MC who's got some super powers and dream powers. Some hot ladies are involved. I think the story needs to be just a bit more focused. But eh, that's just my two cents.