Appreciated! Time will tell what it's going to be, but the story is my main focus. Not much of a coder, nor an artist here, so I'm at least trying to make up for that in writing
I enjoyed trying this out. Maybe it has been mentioned already but it's not necessary to display a new image for each or every second sentence of text. Changing images too often can make the novel a bit tiresome to read as the eyes constantly move from image to text. I eventually had to turn of transitions completely which helped somewhat but I still moved my eyes a lot. On a positive note, reducing the number of images may lessen your workload or make it easier to add more story each update.
Sometimes it's a good idea to change the camera angle completely when displaying a new image too, especially if the placement or movement of characters isn't required for the narrative. You did that a few times to good effect. But you could also do something similar when showing someone leaving or cleaning a room. For example, instead of having images of characters moving from one place to another, you could change from bird-eye to facial expressions etc. The same is true when all characters in a scene are stationary, for example when sitting at a table or having a conversation.
I think it's a good start overall and I'll keep an eye on this. Keep up the good work.
Sometimes it's a good idea to change the camera angle completely when displaying a new image too, especially if the placement or movement of characters isn't required for the narrative. You did that a few times to good effect. But you could also do something similar when showing someone leaving or cleaning a room. For example, instead of having images of characters moving from one place to another, you could change from bird-eye to facial expressions etc. The same is true when all characters in a scene are stationary, for example when sitting at a table or having a conversation.
I think it's a good start overall and I'll keep an eye on this. Keep up the good work.
Good suggestions, thank you. For some reason, it became a bad habit very quickly to change / adjust the characters for every sentence. At first I thought this approach could be better than having an image every 5-10 sentences, but in reality, even I don't look at every single tiny change, when reading the story. Also, yes, it adds a ton to the workload. Anyway, I'm trying to balance this out and your suggestions will help
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I do not have the changelog or Mac version. But from what I can see on Patreon, this update adds 375 images and 4 animations.
(There is a Episode 1 0.3 version for $5 Patreons with 419 images, 1 animation. Released 2019-03-20. This is not that version.)
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I do not have the changelog or Mac version. But from what I can see on Patreon, this update adds 375 images and 4 animations.
(There is a Episode 1 0.3 version for $5 Patreons with 419 images, 1 animation. Released 2019-03-20. This is not that version.)
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Can't be too careful these days, it's a backup. There are only 5-6 pages of adult creators on SS last I checked, but in case Patreon decides to genocide us NSFW folks - at least we have a backup platform to use. I post the same content on both and update both profiles equally.Good drop the authoritarian busybodies at patreon and make a subscribestar account.
Just a heads up for those playing the new update: old saves not working and may have to start over. The game is still just the first chapter so shouldn't be too bad.
Edit: Can still skip past already seen parts till Lucy starts cleaning.
Edit: Can still skip past already seen parts till Lucy starts cleaning.
Could you post a screenshot of the error message renpy puts out on our Discord server? I'll check it out.
Interesting beginning, the animations for every choice made from the Emplore are very well done, Congratulations Dev. I want to see what comes next.
Thank you!
Next comes ep. 2, which is much more focused on the story - amount of events, and animations.
Nice game ! Not that many sex scenes at the moment, but from the start you could tell this is more of a story-based game
@alexander3rd Awesome update, I actually had tears rolling down my cheeks while playing this! Sadly, I was the one left behind, but I only have brothers... so no reconnection with any red or purple headed hot chicks for me...
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I had no idea it'll cause such an emotional reaction, actually good to hear. I wrote the episode with character development in mind, so every emotional event in ep. 1 should change the characters one way or another later on. It's quite a lot to handle for a first time project, so thank you very much for the positive reviews!
I had no idea it'll cause such an emotional reaction, actually good to hear. I wrote the episode with character development in mind, so every emotional event in ep. 1 should change the characters one way or another later on. It's quite a lot to handle for a first time project, so thank you very much for the positive reviews!
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sweet , smooth game. i wonder how the NTR will play in though, something i very much am looking forward too.
There will be more characters in the upcoming episodes, so plenty of opportunities for NTR