Cedo0099
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- Jun 29, 2019
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If i may, i won't do early build reviews generally that's unfair but i have things to say to you dev about your game.
First i enjoyed the disclaimer as myself has tons of imagination and 0 artistic talent, sure there will always be AI haters and i do get some of their points.
Second: Nice world building skill. I play tabletop since.... ever. I like the world and all the mysteries and intricate political web you seems to have created. A bit too much information drop at the beginning you could pace a little more the discoveries of the world and all the info you need to tell. If you overdo like here, people can skip whole section of dialogue because they are bored. I do sometimes as i can read whole paragraph in few sec instead of carefully reading it.
Third: I don't get all this friendliness... People seems pretty "good" as character, i sincerely think it needs more neutrality or hostility in interactions. (But i have paused my game to write this.... so not sure i'm right)
I will follow this project with high expectations on the world building and intrigue. For Ai stuff not so much but hey each their own.
First i enjoyed the disclaimer as myself has tons of imagination and 0 artistic talent, sure there will always be AI haters and i do get some of their points.
Second: Nice world building skill. I play tabletop since.... ever. I like the world and all the mysteries and intricate political web you seems to have created. A bit too much information drop at the beginning you could pace a little more the discoveries of the world and all the info you need to tell. If you overdo like here, people can skip whole section of dialogue because they are bored. I do sometimes as i can read whole paragraph in few sec instead of carefully reading it.
Third: I don't get all this friendliness... People seems pretty "good" as character, i sincerely think it needs more neutrality or hostility in interactions. (But i have paused my game to write this.... so not sure i'm right)
I will follow this project with high expectations on the world building and intrigue. For Ai stuff not so much but hey each their own.
