- Oct 8, 2018
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What's currently doing it for me is the atrocious quality of the grammar in season 1. I'm starting to think this game was written by someone who's ESL. That would be one of the few rational reasons behind why the grammar is so abysmal.The art is beautiful and this will sell the game...animations are generic.
The writing is abysmal...I found myself cursing and swearing at what I was reading...it was like vapor-ware, none of it mattered, fluff blown away on a breeze. The MC cares only about how he can convince girls into his selfish and perverted world. The characters are 'plot-points', they are not realised as proper human beings. Their feelings and emotions aren't important...
The MC has narcissistic and sociopathic tendencies, where he believes that he lives in a world where women exist only to satisfy his own selfish needs and desires. That is his first and last concern...I couldn't continue playing an MC that was so 'vapid'.
Edit: Just started season 2. I have already spotted three grammar mistakes so far, and two of them were within the same sentence. Please for the love of everything that is holy, hire a native english speaker to write your scripts.
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