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They are split as entire seasons not single updates.oh one of these, not interested. when i see devs split their games up it just screams lazy to me. oh well plenty of other good stuff to choose.
THIS 100%im sorry Bear in the Night but for all the quality tales and visuals you can give the writing is still Terrible and given this is the 3rd season of people telling you this and still havent done anything about the broken english it feels like a massive let down for the franchise.. the dialect is all over the place and its even worse in the 3rd season.. some stuff just doesnt make any sense from a spoken english perspective and there are sentences and words in there that nobody would use in conversation.. PLEASE just get a fully english speaking person to go over your work before release..
That's not NTR don't be fucking ridiculous....An outrage (This is NTR!!!) was that at the optional spin the bottle game at that party a gay guy could kiss the girls ...
So maybe put a warning there.
Yes but banned from F95. You'll find it on **********.is the guardian a game?
Hey!im sorry Bear in the Night but for all the quality tales and visuals you can give the writing is still Terrible and given this is the 3rd season of people telling you this and still havent done anything about the broken english it feels like a massive let down for the franchise.. the dialect is all over the place and its even worse in the 3rd season.. some stuff just doesnt make any sense from a spoken english perspective and there are sentences and words in there that nobody would use in conversation.. PLEASE just get a fully english speaking person to go over your work before release..
Lust Academy is full of them. But you should focus on good English. You can find examples in Intertwined, Summer's Gone, Callisto, Love of Magic, Being A DIK to name a few.But, any examples of bad English always welcome
the whole dialogues are just BAD.. not just broken english but they read like a 12 year old wrote the script between individuals.. there are conversations with words in there in just the current S3 Prologue that no real person would say if having a conversation.. best eg i can say it just that it feels wooden at times.. Its frustrating as there are long chapters of the dialogue that seem fine and you get into the flow of the script and story only to meet the slip back into broken english and wooden speechHey!
Could you give some examples?
Btw, we have a professional proofreader rn, but 3.2.1 is not fully edited (but S2, Steam version is almost fully edited). Just give us some time!
But, any examples of bad English always welcome![]()
I've got the same with every sex-scene in the Season 2 Prologe, so I have to skip the scene with "mom" to get to the one with Sam and skip that one to get the story afterwards. Played with an older release and thougt it was a bug that gets fixed... doesn't seem so.In Season 2, is it normal that the game jumps from having sex with your "mom" right back to the acadamy? Or do i have a bug?
Seemed very wierd to me.
the whole dialogues are just BAD.. not just broken english but they read like a 12 year old wrote the script between individuals.. there are conversations with words in there in just the current S3 Prologue that no real person would say if having a conversation.. best eg i can say it just that it feels wooden at times.. Its frustrating as there are long chapters of the dialogue that seem fine and you get into the flow of the script and story only to meet the slip back into broken english and wooden speech
given the dialogue has been bad for 3 seasons now thats a whole lotta quoting and exampling.. when anyone with a good understanding on english language and dialect can spot the obvious mistakes and unneeded terms of dialogue and incorrect expression just by looking at it.. the early scenes at home in S3 and the scenes with (i forget her name) Dog walker girl have a ton of phrases and unneeded wording that just is teeth grinding when reading it.. there is a difference between corny writing and how this is presented.. even the scene at the restaurant has a few dialogue blunders that dont read right but to single out every single example for 3 seasons.. no.. sorry there are other things to read while someone with more free time takes a stab at fixing this multi overly worded pieceOffering specific examples would probably be of a much greater help then just responding to their request for such with more generalized complaints.