DickMcFuck
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one is in tha spa, dont know the other one im missing that too.guys what are the new scenes, i seem to have got the one with adele only
one is in tha spa, dont know the other one im missing that too.guys what are the new scenes, i seem to have got the one with adele only
One with Adele, one in the spa and one new request with Lucy in the clubguys what are the new scenes, i seem to have got the one with adele only
And one from Haley's route.One with Adele, one in the spa and one new request with Lucy in the club
Yeap.so im stuck i do not know where penny is. it says shes upposed to show up at the cafe in dale but every time i go to there un sat and sunday shes not there. am i missing something?
It is moments like this where I wish f95 had 'View attachment 2066897 Ok Ok My Bad I like Audrey More now![]()
Is it just me or is the MC incredibly cringy? The comments on Lustagram are just something else and for some reason he likes to call girls he's never met before ''baby'', ''sweetie'' etc..
In general I think it's OK. It definitely doesn't sound like a native English speaker, but usually it's all right. There are clearly some things that sound quite a bit off, like "It's the same as judging people by skin color or sexual identity. All those claims, as well as the claimers, should sit and spin right away!" Both claims and claimers wouldn't really be used here, but at least it's understandable. However, I have never heard any idiom remotely similar to "sit and spin right away". I'm assuming this is meant to be something like "piss right off", but it's definitely strange. I'm not volunteering, but they do need someone to help them out.Why is it that you still haven't found a competent editor for your Engrish yet? Every new update is barely comprehensible.
The problem for me isn't the fluency of the author, which while not particularly good, isn't game-breaking. My real problem is that the dialogue seems to be written by someone who hasn't spoken to an actual human being even once in their life.In general I think it's OK. It definitely doesn't sound like a native English speaker, but usually it's all right. There are clearly some things that sound quite a bit off, like "It's the same as judging people by skin color or sexual identity. All those claims, as well as the claimers, should sit and spin right away!" Both claims and claimers wouldn't really be used here, but at least it's understandable. However, I have never heard any idiom remotely similar to "sit and spin right away". I'm assuming this is meant to be something like "piss right off", but it's definitely strange.
I would probably agree with some of that being rougher to read, but I'm fairly confident some of the turns of phrase or uses of words like "baby" or "sweetie" are likely influenced by the original language and what's actually common in the region they're from. For instance (as is well known), in the American South a lot of women will call somebody "hun" or "honey" without ever having met them before. It's a Southern cultural anomaly to American English, but maybe some dialects and regions in other languages have something similar.The problem for me isn't the fluency of the author, which while not particularly good, isn't game-breaking. My real problem is that the dialogue seems to be written by someone who hasn't spoken to an actual human being even once in their life.