Hello.
The summary and samples made me come. But the result is definitely too dark for me.
The worldbuilding is correct.
The characters are few and different.
The plot seems interesting.
The artistic side is original.
The writing is very good. You have a knack at describing what is happening, particularly the sex scenes.
The presentation of the characters is fine, outside the male bandits who are destined to die.
The images are different from usual and making them appear at random (on the right, on the left, in the middle) with various sizes leads this game to stand out from the crowd.
But as I said, it was very difficult to go through everything for me. The only path I could continue to follow further is the barmaid, though I'm not that much into exhibitionnism. I was expecting something else due to the "trying to find his place in the world" (for now, it's more "I go out to find a wife and come back to my mansion").
Good continuation.