Two positive comments and a jokey one:
1. Zoe has a rather large nose, but it just makes her look unique and cuter.
2. The 'chapter' with Megan as MC was unexpected, fascinating, and well-done.
3. In a sense, this dev has been brilliant. With the "time loop" effect, they can create so many scenes while reusing most images. Also, the fact the game "bugs out" intentionally a couple of times and that it preceded by weird stuff going on in the text makes any actual mistakes just add a sense of suspense. When I saw the bugs mentioned above ('image not found' and 'pp replaced by m_a_l'), I was actually expecting another cool change like the one I complimented in point 2.