Hey MM,
Really enjoying the game and the art style. Can't wait to see more.
I'm not sure if you've stated, but I'd love to see the combat flushed out a bit more, and be able to see the number under the hood. It's great that you can just surrender and see the action, but in general it feels kind of thin with enemies just slowing you down if you don't dodge them.
I may have missed how to check stats, but it would be nice to see where we are at relationship-wise, what the impact of that is etc. I like the subtle contextual interactions Kate's lust level has on how she views the world and what's going on around her. I also REALLY enjoyed how she could develop a relationship at the cost of another, and how that relationship evolved (i.e. w/Bob). On a side note, not sure if I did things wrong but I pursued him as far as I could and got as far as isolating him and some "couch stuff" (without spoiling).
Just wanted to share some input. The grammar and spelling stuff will come, I'm sure if you needed someone here could help free of charge or w/e. Again, great stuff!